Ashni TS: The other side of you; Epilogue Pg 5 - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc


I'll be writing an epilogue as requested by Bro and Bhabhi 😊🤗


😃

⭐️ 👏 thanks dear.. will wait for it..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I forgot that I had to reply to your comments here😳
So here are my replies...and then I would be posting the sequel😛
Thanks to everyone for the love and support to the story😃
Edited by braveheartdoc - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: bawaswift

Awesome n a very thoughtful ending Manisha... ⭐️👏

I do feel this TS can have a sequel ... as the end seems to be unfinished., with some revelations yet to be found.. !

I have tried to fulfil your request...hope you enjoy reading that😃

The TS.,, !
What to say.. ! The narrative easily understood with every minute details... !!!👏

Thank you so much Bhaiya😃🤗

As was projected,, Ashu came in time to save Nidhi.,, n did all the needful with his gentle behaviour ..!
Already a gem of a person.,. he has shown his other side to the World,, where he is a soft heart person who cant see the cruelty towards anyone.. !

Yeah he hides his true self from the entire world and projects himself as a strict doc...but yes people with a true heart are able to see beyond what he shows😃
Thats what happened with Nidhi😃

Her thanks were few,, but were totally grabbed by him.. ! Her hitches were many.. but he did not even mentioned a single one.. n made the way for her to come out of the incidental pool.. !

Loved to see all going well,, n he gave Nidhi a leave as he saw thru the rear view what she cud not spoke up.. !
Beautiful to see him as a gentle man in front of Nidhi.. n she is determined to seek out what's lying behind his hardness..
Thanks for showing the lovely side of Ashutosh,,, n a feeling of more likeliness towards him..
God bless..

Thanks a lot Bhaiya for the beautiful encouraging comment😃👏
He saw her face which spoke so much and he realised his mistake ...and thats why he tried to mend himself...loved to read you😃
God bless you too😃



Edited by braveheartdoc - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Never judge someone from the words of others!
Today Ashu has proved it! I wish his true side comes to every one the day they meet him, but he never let anyone to know him precisely ever!

Well said Bhabhi...really Ashu is a true example of a person who has so much depth in his character which cant be understood by everyone😃

Lovely update, rather ending Manisha dear 👏
But i too see some more chapters or one, to see the conclusion, as this seems a sketchy end. Though everything is clear, but one more detail is needed 😳 Wud die to have it from your pen dear 🤗

I have posted that Bhabhi...hope you would enjoy reading that too😃

What lies for worst, Ashu gave him and saved his intern, without even given a second to waste!
Loved his eyes went away from the wet and fearing Nidhi, and he ordered every one to leave except Deepa! And more loved was his coat lying there for her to cover herself. ❤️
What a sweet gesture of a gentle man, when it comes to the respect for a lady!!! ⭐️

Respect for a lady is the most important thing for a man and people who dont take care to do that are really heartless and they dont deserve to be called gentlemen...😡

His caring nature took Nidhi's heart away, the dinner, the coffee are normal things, But the way he let them reach her, it was awe struck!
He knew what she was going through, and he did not let her come out with it. Instead, he let her have good rest back home and promised her to do the needful to the bad guy at Kgh!
What lovely man! This is what Nidhi is left with ❤️
She has the inclination that some hard feelings lies behind his rude behaviour, and is firm to know it.

She got to see a totally different side to his character and she wasn't able to understand which one is the real Dr Ashutosh😊
His behaviour clearly suggested that he understood his mistake and how well he tried to make amends😃

Very fine description of the several incidents taking place : the pool, the save, the car, the bye, the recalling and the sweetness lying in her heart for him. The unknown, but a known feeling of the first love!
Thanks Sweetie, for the beneficial, am floored by your pen by now, luv ya ❤️ 🤗

Thank you so much Bhabhi for your love and appreciation as always and this motivates me to write more😃
Love you so much Bhabhi❤️



Edited by braveheartdoc - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Epilogue

Dr Ashutosh went back home after dropping both of them and somewhere inside his heart he was relieved that he could help her when she needed him...otherwise he wouldn't have been able to forgive himself. While lying down he kept on recollecting the events that happened this evening... more than the evening it was Nidhi and her innocent face that kept on flashing in front of his eyes as soon as he closed them. Why was he thinking about her so much...its not the first time that an intern has joined his hospital...its not the first time he had helped someone...then what was so different this time which is making him think about her? He thought. But there was definitely something that was attracting him towards her and he needs to keep his feelings in check as she is just an intern...just like any other intern working there.

Then he thought about Rocky and what he was trying to do with her...the very thought of him filled him with rage and he decided to punish him well for his deeds. He went off to sleep with this decision in his mind and next morning as always he was there in the hospital on time. He saw Rocky there who had reported onto his duty...seeing him he was very angry as there was no sign of repent on his face for his actions the previous evening. He asked him to come to his office after the rounds and Rocky smiled and agreed to meet him later which made him more angry and he was determined to teach him a lesson.

After the rounds he went to his office and asked Rocky to come inside...to his surprise he came inside with his father Mr Malhotra who was the trustee in this hospital. He greeted Dr Ashutosh and told him that he had come here because he felt his son was being punished for something he had not done. Dr Ashutosh now understood the reason why he had no guilt for his wrong doings as he believed his father would save him as he was a trustee in the hospital. He asked him what was the matter and why is his son called up to meet him in the office as he has not done anything wrong. Dr Ashutosh was surprised to know that his father was supporting him in this...he asked him whether he was aware what his son had done? He told him that Rakesh was trying to do away with a characterless girl who was after him since many years and now that her desperation had grown to this extent that she ended up trying to be physical with him...he was trying to control her and in this attempt only he pushed her away and she fell down in the pool...so whats his mistake in all this? It's the fault of that girl and not him and she shall be punished rather.

Ashutosh was furious to know that he had cooked up a story in front of his father and being the trustee of the hospital...he didn't even bother to try and find out the truth and here he was sitting in front of him and supporting him. He told him what actually had happened there and that he himself was the witness to the entire incident. But still Mr Malhotra wasn't ready to believe him and wanted Dr Ashutosh to let him go back to his duty as nothing happened at all...and also take steps to punish that girl. Dr Ashutosh told him that he would have to face suspension and that he can't be forgiven for what he had done...as it was about the dignity of a girl with whom he had misbehaved...he wont tolerate anything of this sort in his hospital.

Mr Malhotra warned him that he was the trustee in this hospital and he would have to face the consequences if he suspended his son...as he wasn't above the trustee in the hospital. But Dr Ashutosh made it clear to him that no trustee was above a girl's dignity and knew what Rocky ...as he preferred to be called in the hospital...had done...there was no way that he could be forgiven for his acts and he handed over the suspension letter to him. Mr Malhotra warned him that very soon he would realize his mistake and would have to apologize for his behavior in front of him and his son and was about to leave the office when the door opened and Nidhi entered inside. Everyone was surprised to see her there especially Dr Ashutosh who had asked her not to come to the hospital today. He asked her why was she there when she was asked to take a leave and she told him that she needed to be there as she herself wanted to punish Rocky for what he had done.

Mr Malhotra was surprised to see that Nidhi was the girl with whom his son had misbehaved...Tum yahan...? He asked her.

Nidhi: jee Sir main...main hi wo ladki hu jiske saath aap ke bte ne wo ghatiya harkat ki hai...

Ashutosh: aap ek dusre ko jaante hain?

Nidhi: haan Sir...jab main aur Rakesh urf Rocky MBBS kar rahe the ...us college ke bhi yeh Sir trustee the... Ab to inhe samajh aa gaya hoga ki inke bte ne mere saath wo sab kyun kiya...yaad hai na Sir... pointing towards Mr Malhotra.

Mr Malhotra recollected the time when Rakesh was punished because of Nidhi and he had promised to take revenge one day from her...now he realized that whatever Dr Ashutosh was saying was right and his son had just cooked up a story in front of him to avoid suspension. He was very angry and he slapped his son and asked him to leave from there at once as it was him because of whom everything had happened and he is ashamed now to even call him his son. He apologized to Dr Ashutosh and Nidhi and was about to leave when Ashutosh told him that he should try and find out the truth before coming to any conclusion as every girl needs to be respected...here it was Nidhi...he knew about her since many years...but what if it was any other girl...then his son would have taken his father and that girl for granted...he cant tolerate any such behavior from anyone and he was ready to face any consequences for what was right. Mr Malhotra thanked him and apologized once again and left the hospital and the post of the trustee as he wasn't able to face this disrespect because of his son.

After he left he asked Nidhi why did she come to the hospital...she told him that she knew that Rocky was the son of the hospital's trustee and he would be creating problems for him. She had seen his unreasonable support for Rocky earlier as well and she narrated that incident that happened in their college days... She told him that she wont let him face any untoward consequences when he was the one who saved her when she needed him. Ashutosh told her that he doesn't care about such things and he won't tolerate any such behavior from any one ever in his life. He asked her to go home and relax and report to duty the next day on time. she smiled to him and was about to leave when she turned around...

Nidhi: Sir aapse ek baat kehni thi...

Ashutosh: kahiye Dr Nidhi...

Nidhi: Sir sab log kehte hain ki aap bahut strict hain aur sab aap se bahut darte hain...lekin agar koi aap ka yeh roop dekhe to unhe samajh aayega ki aap waise nahi hain...aap ek bahut ache insaan hain jo doosron ki madad karna chahte hain... Thank you so much Sir...meri madad karne ke liye...

Ashustosh: chehre pe mat jaiye Dr Nidhi...chehra kabhi sach nahi batata... Koi nahi jaanta ki is chehre ke peeche kitne dard hain jo is dil mein chhupa kar rakhe hain...(his eyes turning moist)

Nidhi: Sir ...aap theek hain...

Ashutosh: main theek hu ...aap jaiye Dr Nidhi...mujhe bahut kaam hai...

She nodded and moved out of the room and Ashutosh stood there thinking about all his fears and pains that he faced since his childhood...after so many years someone had talked about him as a person at heart...otherwise no one ever cared to look behind his straight face. There Nidhi stood outside thinking about those tears that came into his eyes...she realized that whatever Deepa said was right...he definitely has a dreadful past and he needs to come out of it. He needed her help in this and she would do anything to make this happen...she decided in her mind and left from there...relieved that she could be there on time and help Dr Ashutosh...otherwise that trustee would have definitely created troubles for him.


The end of the sequel...hope you enjoyed reading this😳
Bhaiya, Bhabhi...I hope aap aisa hi kuchh chahte the...hope now its complete
Edited by braveheartdoc - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Bhaiya aur Bhabhi ka pata nahi lekin mujhe bahut accha aur complete laga.
It is very much necessary for the parents to know the facts before blaming others.
One should not love their children like Dhritarashtra.
Very well written.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

Bhaiya aur Bhabhi ka pata nahi lekin mujhe bahut accha aur complete laga.

It is very much necessary for the parents to know the facts before blaming others.
One should not love their children like Dhritarashtra.
Very well written.


@ bold..

If Jayasree di aapko achha and complete laga... then it must be the best one... ⭐️👏
I havent read it yet... will do it later n review... thanks Manisha for the effort...
God bless...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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@ bold..

If Jayasree di aapko achha and complete laga... then it must be the best one... ⭐️👏
I havent read it yet... will do it later n review... thanks Manisha for the effort...
God bless...


Jayasree Di ❤️ 🤗
Even i feel this Epilogue complete and bahut hi achha 👏
Agree to each and every word of yours ⭐️ Truly reviewed the other side of some parents who give their hands in spoiling their children.
Thanks!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome epilogue dear Manisha 👏
Had Ashu did not defer Rocky and his father, Nidhi's dignity was at stake! Had Nidhi did not come at time, Ashu was thrown to a pressure he cud have hard time to compete with!
Loved how Ashu remain rigid over Nidhi's purity and did not let the brat say a word to her grace! Loved how he felt the tug to his heart, and fought for her!
Parents like Mr. Malhotra do not bother much about girls outside, they only fear and effort for their brats. That's the reason many cases lie pending at the courts and dates are given to the victims, and they then lose the heart, and everything goes in a band dabba.
Purely a heart of gem, Ashu! Purely a heart of love, Nidhi!
Yes, he is suffering from the pain Nidhi is realising and feeling the help of lending her hand to him! Ashu, on the other hand is silent cos he is after years told about himself, as a good human being and a true helping heart!
This is the beginning of the other side of both! They both are experiencing an unknown feeling and are pulling towards each other!
Loved the last scene, when they were at the other ends of a door of his cabin, thinking of each other, with tears in his eyes, and tears of his coming from hers too ❤️ ❤️

Lovely epilogue! Hey you are excelling with every new write up Manisha ❤️ 🤗
Love this quality in you! Thanks for being a part of my life, and an integral part of KTLK!
Thank you Sweetheart, stay blessed, and keep on giving us such beauteous! Ever!!!
yes sweetie, kuch aisa hi chahte the, and as Jayasree di has said, it seems complete now 👏


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Ashutosh told him that he should try and find out the truth before coming to any conclusion as every girl needs to be respected...here it was Nidhi...he knew about her since many years...but what if it was any other girl...then his son would have taken his father and that girl for granted...he cant tolerate any such behavior from anyone and he was ready to face any consequences for what was right
Awesome n very very true... ⭐️👏
i too feel this feeling many a times... that is was Nidhi,,, n Ashu was the witness to the misdeed... but what abt those girls who have no proof to tell others what exactly happened... n they fall victim as well as the accused..
Nice update... good to see a review of Ashu's presence of mind,,, n he did not alter himself from the words said by the father,,, rather sticking himself to the truth,,, n did not fear the circumstances he was threatened for..

chehre pe mat jaiye Dr Nidhi...chehra kabhi sach nahi batata... Koi nahi jaanta ki is chehre ke peeche kitne dard hain jo is dil mein chhupa kar rakhe hain...(his eyes turning moist)

Its not usual ,, but firm that his eyes were moist for years but only the tears came out today only...
Has dard bayan hota hai... bas aankhen padhne wala koi ho..
His pain is his own until now...
his pain started from his loneliness,, but he has a heart that beats for his patients n the needy..


she realized that whatever Deepa said was right...he definitely has a dreadful past and he needs to come out of it. He needed her help in this and she would do anything to make this happen.

Lovely feeling for the readers..,., n there is a hope now that Nidhi will help him out coming out from his castle... n like a butterfly she will enter n colour his life...
Lovely,,, ,stupendous n complete.. ⭐️👏
Thank you so much for this story Manisha... you have always rocked this Forum...
God bless you..

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