OS: On the Cusp of Paradise..Ch. 3 on P-28.please see p-41 - Page 24

Y u asking Tasha

Originally posted by: sshirley

Y u asking Tasha

U fed up with this story ?

no Shirley Really love this story so much don't want it end soon

Originally posted by: sshirley

<font color="#009900">thank u Amreen, u too write really well for ur age.. seriously I m not kidding.. considering u r only in ur early 20s, u write tremendously well.. keep writing n u will ca steady rise n improvement in ur writing style.. </font>

<font color="#009900">I will try mybest to come nwrite reviews. but I m sorrymyfirst priority is to complete this story</font>

Thanks a lot Shirley... am sp touched with ur lovely encouraging words... Thanks a million...and yeah... i am not in my early twenties... am only 17... i had put my age as 24 just for the sake of safety...

Originally posted by: Amreen...

Thanks a lot Shirley... am sp touched with ur lovely encouraging words... Thanks a million...and yeah... i am not in my early twenties... am only 17... i had put my age as 24 just for the sake of safety...

Originally posted by: sshirley

Unbelievable!!just 17!! That's less than halfmy age!

AllI can say nowisjustkeep it up. And Imhereif uneed any helpwith ur stories. just pm me😃

Unbelievable... really is that so Shirley Aunty..(i can call u aunty... right??) But it's true.. Anyways my writing doesn't makes it obvious i guess. I never knew that i could get so much appreciation for my work... but thanks... thanks a lottt for the lovely warm encouraging words... mean a lot to me...
Will surely look up to u of i need any kind of help...
Thanks again...

Amreen, aunty/di/didi or simply Shirley - everything's equaly fine with me

Friends, I really need your opinions..

Originally posted by: Anjani9

The update is SUPER...👏

Originally posted by: sshirley

Friends, I really need your opinions..

Didn't any of u feel that something was lacking in the last chapter I posted. If yes, can u please pinpoint it?

I felt like that. But can't find what's lacking

no Shirley the last update was really very awesome it didn't lack anything

The best shot is the one on hospital bed before Surgery...👏