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Anjani9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#251

You have matched the anxiety of Ashu and the confidence of Nidhi so well...👏

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sshirley

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Posted: 10 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: Anjani9
You have matched the anxiety of Ashu and the confidence of Nidhi so well...👏

Thanks a lot Anjani

Did u see the my question to all of u on p-36?

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Anjani9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#253

Shirley, When are you back???

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sshirley

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Posted: 10 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: Anjani9
Shirley, When are you back???

back means? from where?

I do come here frequently.. only don't get time to write my chapters,..

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Anjani9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: sshirley
Thanks a lot Anjani

Did u see the my question to all of u on p-36?

Can you give me page no please..don't see on p.36...

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sshirley

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Posted: 10 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: Anjani9
Which question Shirley???

😡 I have copypasted for u, lazy woman!

here it is:

Friends, I really need your opinions..

Didn't any of u feel that something was lacking in the last chapter I posted. If yes, can u please pinpoint it?

I felt like that. But can't find what's lacking

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Anjani9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: sshirley

😡 I have copypasted for u, lazy woman!

here it is:

Friends, I really need your opinions..

Didn't any of u feel that something was lacking in the last chapter I posted. If yes, can u please pinpoint it?

I felt like that. But can't find what's lacking

Lazy woman...😆

You know how much work I have done today??? 😲😡

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sshirley

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Posted: 10 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Lazy woman...😆

You know how much work I have done today??? 😲😡

ok 😃

now do some thinking!!😊

n tell me what was lacking in my chapter

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Anjani9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#259

Anything related Mallika not being in OT and Nidhi's family???

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sshirley

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Posted: 10 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: Anjani9
Anything related Mallika not being in OT and Nidhi's family???

Hmmm.. lemme think.. in fact been thinking on this ever since I have read ur reply..

Mallika not being in OT - well.. I thought n thought about this.. but could not decide..

I thought if Mallika is in OT n suppose some complication arises or operation is not successful, then? every reader is gonna suspect her.. n go off on a tangent.. away from the concept of this story...

I have had an experience of this... so decided to keep her out of OT.

and her family? what do u mean? u mean not enough footage to her family? but I donno..maybe u r right, I tried to avoid melodrama n keep my narration streamlined .. so maybe? not too sure..

anything else that strikes u?

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