OS: On the Cusp of Paradise..Ch. 3 on P-28.please see p-41 - Page 23

Hey...interesting ff...cont. Soon n pm me wud ur future upd8s

Originally posted by: sshirley

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Thank you Tasha..

yes this mallika has genuinely changed.. n she considers Nidhi as well as Ashu, her friend.. in fact the emotional dependence on Nidhi is more, becoz of Nidhi's natural empathy and to an extent coz both r women.

And I truly believe that, often bitter experiences in life make u a better human being... esp. whensomeone whom unever counted on, come fwd tohelp u.. exactly what happened with mallika here

really Shirley you have showed mallikas character in this os really beautifully. Really I am in love with her

Originally posted by: swamii92

Hey...interesting ff...cont. Soon n pm me wud ur future upd8s

thank you so much

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

really Shirley you have showed mallikas character in this os really beautifully. Really I am in love with her

First of all I am very sorry Shirley for coming so late with my review... The story was lovely... I loved it very much...
Nidhi being so calm regarding her reports was something peculiar but she knew Ashu was already stressed for her health and she was trying her best to keep those tensions at bay...
I loved the scene where Nidhi simply said that she can never enjoy anything without him and he just adored her innocence at the sweet sentence.
Oh... Nidhi Ashu ke rag rag se waaqif hain... how can he hide his thoughts from her coz he becomes an open book in front of her... only for her to read...
Ashutosh's concern that he might do some mistake gripped by his emotions, while operating Nidhi is justified... after all she is the one his heart is joined with and how can he operate her without being emotional... But Malika encouraging him to ho ahead was lovely... She is such a sweet character in ur story... just love her here...
DB is ecstatic that her baby is soon going to bring a baby but the reality is too harsh for her... Though Ashu took care of all but still the concern a parent bears when his baby is suffering is clearly depicted...
I loved the pain puri scene too... infact it was one of the best scenes of the update... Awww it was so sweet and cute...
Ashu paid 300 rupees but it was worth his fretting on the pain puri vendor... Ashu can never deny Nidhi for anything... after all she is his sweetheart... his world.
Though the doc in him didn't want her to eat those "UNHYGIENIC" golgappas... but the hubby in him who adores his wife to the brim allowed her to have them... though with a bagful of precautions... He he he... too cute..

And the hospital scene was also one of the bestest... so romantic yet sweet... He cannot stay apart from her even for a moment... And the same is with Nidhi too... awww... how she said to the doc that she cannot sleep out of her hubby's arms... and then the love birds drifting to sleep into each other's arms... away from every worry of the world... in their own small world...
Though Malika was hurt somewhere to see them together but the friend in her overtook the lover in her and she prayed for eternal bliss for the couple... too good...

In all the update was awesome... I loved every bit of it... so beautifully written... ur language of writing and vocabulary is awesome and ur way of narrating the scenes is also very good...
Do update soon... will wait and miss u on my threads...
Loves
Amreen

thank u Amreen

Originally posted by: Amreen...

First of all I am very sorry Shirley for coming so late with my review... The story was lovely... I loved it very much...

Its okay.. what matters is u came to give review.

And now I m sorry for the delay in responding but was tied.. in fact I had typed up the response a few days back but lost it..

thank u.. glad u loved it

Nidhi being so calm regarding her reports was something peculiar but she knew Ashu was already stressed for her health and she was trying her best to keep those tensions at bay...

yes.. for one thing she trusts Ashu n for another, as u say.. ashu was already stressed so she had to keep calm n ease his stress.

I loved the scene where Nidhi simply said that she can never enjoy anything without him and he just adored her innocence at the sweet sentence.

Yeah I remember that sangeet scene while writing so put that sentence in..
Oh... Nidhi Ashu ke rag rag se waaqif hain... how can he hide his thoughts from her coz he becomes an open book in front of her... only for her to read...

But obviously..

Ashutosh's concern that he might do some mistake gripped by his emotions, while operating Nidhi is justified... after all she is the one his heart is joined with and how can he operate her without being emotional... But Malika encouraging him to ho ahead was lovely... She is such a sweet character in ur story... just love her here...

True.. u remember that dialogue in munnabhai mbbs? boman irani says during his lecture that if he operates on his daughter, his hand would definitely tremble.

Yup I must admit I m loving mallika too here. probably more than Ashni .. 😉

DB is ecstatic that her baby is soon going to bring a baby but the reality is too harsh for her... Though Ashu took care of all but still the concern a parent bears when his baby is suffering is clearly depicted...

hmm.. its like u get a big shock when u r expecting good news.. esp. when it concerns ur childen..
I loved the pain puri scene too... infact it was one of the best scenes of the update... Awww it was so sweet and cute...
Ashu paid 300 rupees but it was worth his fretting on the pain puri vendor... Ashu can never deny Nidhi for anything... after all she is his sweetheart... his world.
Though the doc in him didn't want her to eat those "UNHYGIENIC" golgappas... but the hubby in him who adores his wife to the brim allowed her to have them... though with a bagful of precautions... He he he... too cute..

thank u for saying that it was the best scene.. I too lughed n smiled while penning that scene.. the only or one of the few light moments

And the hospital scene was also one of the bestest... so romantic yet sweet... He cannot stay apart from her even for a moment... And the same is with Nidhi too... awww... how she said to the doc that she cannot sleep out of her hubby's arms... and then the love birds drifting to sleep into each other's arms... away from every worry of the world... in their own small world...
Though Malika was hurt somewhere to see them together but the friend in her overtook the lover in her and she prayed for eternal bliss for the couple... too good...

m glad to know that scene came out well.. yeah they cant stay apart, even for a night..

ashu had intended to get up when nidhi fell asleep but he dint realize when he himself fell asleep..

yes.. thank u for liking mallika here. n understanding her so well👏

In all the update was awesome... I loved every bit of it... so beautifully written... ur language of writing and vocabulary is awesome and ur way of narrating the scenes is also very good...
Do update soon... will wait and miss u on my threads...
Loves
Amreen

Originally posted by: Anjani9

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What's/who's that clap for, Anjani?

How many more parts will this story have Shirley. I think one right

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

How many more parts will this story have Shirley. I think one right