OS: On the Cusp of Paradise..Ch. 3 on P-28.please see p-41

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 9 years ago

#201

Tasha, u dint tell me about Rising in Love.. I really liked that concept..

And you can still write about Mallika..

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Tasha1994

@Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: sshirley
Tasha, u dint tell me about Rising in Love.. I really liked that concept..

Andyou can still write about Mallika..

will write more about mallika Shirley. sorry I really don't get time to write rising in love will surely write when I get time

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#203

Nice chapter Shirls 👏

Emotional stress, anxiety, strain!

Saw a very nervous Ashu plus a Nidhi who is full of trust towards her neuro hubby!

Aapke bina kuch achha nahi lagta!

Nidhi, who believes in going with him every step, wants him to operate her and even be with her without taking any tensions. She can see him tensed, but have given a positive attitude so that he is calm and smile. His shocking reactions and Nidhi's love made him a bit strange. I liked this couple so much. One is tensed and the other is relieving the tension. One has to take the decision and the other is full of support. Awesome!

I liked Mallika's initiatives to talk to the best doc and advising Ashu to do the needful. But she is a lover once, so it was certain to see her jerked inside watching the couple in that situation. It's hard for her, it's killing for her, yet she came out of it. She is strong in looks, but she is not that much strong to see her love with someone else, and that in front of her.

I felt for everyone at CV's. The family once rejoicing, is full of tears and fears now. How hard it was for Ashu to tell them the truth. Even more hard for him to send them back home, from the hospital. Shirls, at this time, every family becomes a one tight bond. And i saw this here too.

The love that this couple share is so cute and unconditional. Loved how Nidhi was allowed for golgappas and then taken care by her hubby and she made him relaxed ans smiling.

The couple have all the blessings and each other's love, so nothing bad can happen to them. But fate knows it all! Mallika's concern in her eyes and even her nervous hands shows how complicated and risky Nidhi's condition is.

Let's hope for the best to see Nidhi fine and Ashu in all his strength. Will wait.

Thanks so much Shirls, for this captivating and heartfelt chapter! Luv ya ❤️🤗

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: Sagi.
the thief has chosen the police commissioner's house to rob?"
Loved this part the best!

Thank u Sagi

How r u, Nikki n ur dad?

U Ali in Singapore I think?

How's ur college going

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Nice chapter Shirls 👏

Emotional stress, anxiety, strain!

Saw a very nervous Ashu plus a Nidhi who is full of trust towards her neuro hubby!

Aapke bina kuch achha nahi lagta!

Nidhi, who believes in going with him every step, wants him to operate her and even be with her without taking any tensions. She can see him tensed, but have given a positive attitude so that he is calm and smile. His shocking reactions and Nidhi's love made him a bit strange. I liked this couple so much. One is tensed and the other is relieving the tension. One has to take the decision and the other is full of support. Awesome!

Thank you Swati.. yes it was a tension-filled chapter..

its natural for Ashu to be nervous, given the enormous weight on his shoulders..

true.. nidz is relaxed becoz 1. as u say, she trusts ashu completely. n 2. like u said again, seeing Ashu tense, its upto her to calm him n not increase his tension by being tense herself..

true its nidhis support that's making things easier for Ashu..

I liked Mallika's initiatives to talk to the best doc and advising Ashu to do the needful. But she is a lover once, so it was certain to see her jerked inside watching the couple in that situation. It's hard for her, it's killing for her, yet she came out of it. She is strong in looks, but she is not that much strong to see her love with someone else, and that in front of her.

I felt for everyone at CV's. The family once rejoicing, is full of tears and fears now. How hard it was for Ashu to tell them the truth. Even more hard for him to send them back home, from the hospital. Shirls, at this time, every family becomes a one tight bond. And i saw this here too.

The love that this couple share is so cute and unconditional. Loved how Nidhi was allowed for golgappas and then taken care by her hubby and she made him relaxed ans smiling.

The couple have all the blessings and each other's love, so nothing bad can happen to them. But fate knows it all! Mallika's concern in her eyes and even her nervous hands shows how complicated and risky Nidhi's condition is.

Let's hope for the best to see Nidhi fine and Ashu in all his strength. Will wait.

Thanks so much Shirls, for this captivating and heartfelt chapter! Luv ya ❤️🤗

yes.. mallika is now emotionally dependent on Nidhi.. shes like her friend or more.. yes.. but shes also a human being.. n so seeing Ashni sleeping together jolted her.. after all.. knowing something n seeing it with her eyes is different..isn't it?

yes the scene at cvs was quite difficult to write..the golgappa scene idea came just when I was writing..

yes.. lets see what happens.. honi ko toh koi taal nahi sakta..

oh u r most welcome