OS: On the Cusp of Paradise..Ch. 3 on P-28.please see p-41 - Page 20

Originally posted by: sshirley

Cliffhanger toh bas yeho ho Sakta tha

Sorry typing from iPad so spelling goes bad

Would reply to ur reviews when logged in from lappy

What happened to u rising in love .. That is such a lovely story that I was looking fwd to read

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

wonderful update Shirley Really liked it a lot really wonderfully written. really I could imagine each and every scene .Really liked ashu's concern for nidhi a lot .Really liked how he told the golgappe Walla to wash his hands and all the other things this shows how concerned he is for nidhi and how much he loves her .liked the scene where u showed where Dadi bua thought nidhi is pregnant and how ashu suddenly told that she is not and having a tumour .Really loved that scene .The hospital scene where ashu and nidhi go to sleep on the same bed was soo nice really liked it a lot .the kiss before the operation was so important really liked that part of the update. thanks a lot for this wonderful update. But how can u stop at such a important part no this cannot be done u have kept me hanging

Originally posted by: sshirley

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Thank you Tasha.. I m glad u liked u..

the golgappe sceneideacamewhen I was just writing..

yes, with db, its like she sees something and thinks that her wishes are fulfilled... ashu hadn't thought to disclose it like that, but then .. db wasn't giving any chance so he just lost his patience

I m glad the hospital scenes came out good..

thank you .. but not a single word on mallika?

Originally posted by: babita..

Very emotional and tense situation for Ashni and everyone. Liked the chapter Shirley,🤗 thanks 👏👏

Nidhi's changed behavior is so brilliantly written, i loved to see how bravely she handled Ashu and even her own illness. Reading upon Ashu's face and asking later of her health's seriousness, is very touching. Nidhi did make it easy for him.

Liked his fears over taking the charge of her op. But mallika is right -- he has to take it.

Answering every one at Col. verma's seemed a tough time for Ashu. Felt for him, when he saw them happy with Nidhi's pregnancy.

Nidhi is so adorable that he can't say no to her wishes. Eating hygienic gol gappas, loved them. But again and again saw him too worried. it's so natural for him worried. he is taking up the charge of a precious thing of his life !

Nidhi is precious to Ashu and their night in the room is so palpable. Mallika could have changed, but she controlled herself. Dunno what's the high impact, but she got shaken. I fear something strange here Shirley. Will Nidhi be alright ?? She will be na ..

Hope the good luck kisses help and Nidhi is fine. Nidhi's op. is done, and don't want to wait much.

Shirley, Loves ❤️

Originally posted by: Anjani9

I will give Shirley...

Your update is very touching and intense...👏

Originally posted by: Sonu12345

Yippee a new update! thank you Shirley di. Will read it and comment soon

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Tension, full charged.,,, Nice chapter Shirley.. ⭐️👏

I liked the way you have put Ashu into a situation where he took la ife to decide.. n also how Nidhi made him relaxed.. Her acceptance of the fate helped him here..

Nothing can make them apart.. ! Nice to see them talking over the operation.. n Nidhi taking it so lightly.. even the Neoro's wifey cant have minor diseases.. she is lucky to have him,,,.

Mallika looks so understanding.. but at one juncture even she was abt to deviate.. good that she managed to hold on.. lets see how much she can..

Bua n all ... the shock that they have got is obvious.. but looking at Ashu.. he had to respond every query.. made him so nervous.. !

Liked Nidhi showing no fears over operation.. cos she has Ashu there with her.. Wish to see her fine... will wait for it..

Acute tension.. Ashu's precious wife in in danger.. Is she ??/ Just loving Ashu's care for his precious Nidhi.. ! I always love to see him concerned.. ! 😳

Wud like to know whats gonna happen now.. thanks dear.. !

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Hello Shirls, thanks sweetie for the much awaited update! Will read it soon and review. Got busy with Pooja at home 😳 Will be back tomorrow morning, hopefully 😃

Luv ya ❤️🤗