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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: snehatanu

Very cute and nice update, the story is going in a right way. thank you so much for the story. waiting for the next one soon.

Thanks a lot for taking out time to read and review my OS.
I wish I can stand to your expectations.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: sss97


Rightly said. Don't become a kabbab mein haddi like what Dr Dubey is 😆😆😆
Thoda time hi milta hain dono ko saath meiin.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: sss97


Thanks for the quick review... Its nice to see a lot of response here keeping in mind that the shaw had ended 2 years ago😊

There are lot of readers here and few writers..😊..sometimes we do delay in giving reviews and that is disappointing writers...what to do?? other commitments and work...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Who will stop Dubey in finding out the fact???
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

when is the next update



I didn't get ur review till now. Your asking for the next??
However the update is today. As I had decided
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
sorry for not giving reviews was very busy for a few days I had my exams will give it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
chapter 1 review
wonderful beginning .
so khushi is still with ashni.is she going to add more confusion on Dr dubey.loved the chapter a lot .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
This also shows Dr Dubey is not active in social circles...otherwise the news would have reached him long back...😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Anjani9

This also shows Dr Dubey is not active in social circles...otherwise the news would have reached him long back...😛


Khadoos😊😉 log generally like staying alone and aloof just the way Ashu was before Nidhi entered his life.

Did u receive my pm?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50

Here is Part 3 as promised. Happy reading.

As Dr Dubey was approaching them just then Dr Sanihal had come for CV's Checkup and Ashutosh went inside with him and Nidhi stood outside the ICU. Dr. Dubey came forward and said Dr. Nidhi yeh sab kya chal raha hain. Tum Ashutosh se kyun chipakti ho. Sharam nahi aata hain kya?? Aur yahaan par bhi kisi aur hospital mein. KGH ka naam kyun dubana chahati ho? Apna nahi to uska toh socho. Itna accha doctor hain. Desh bhar mein mashoor hain. Tum uske izzat ke saath kyun khilwad kar rahi ho?
Uska parivaar kyun destroy karna chahati ho???? Tum toh waise bhi indisciplined aur shameless ho. Ashutosh waisa nahi tha. Mera favorite student tha. He was so disciplined and well mannered. Mujhe fakr tha uspar par ab tumhare wajah se who itna gir gaya hain ki cheee kehne mein bhi sharm aati hain bahaar kisi aur hospital mein tumhare saath che che. Dr Nidhi mein aap ko warn kar raha hoon aap Ashutosh se door rahiye warna acha nahi hoga.

Just as Dr Dubey had completed scolding Nidhi .Ashutosh had come out of the ICU and was confused when Nidhi tried to reply but Dr Dubey was very adamant to listen to her and said that he didn't want to listen to what nonsense she was going to say.He asked Dr Dubey to wait and asked what had happened?

Dr. Dubey sarcastically laughed and Asked Ashutosh if he really didn't know what the problem was?Ashutosh was confused to see him here.. and asked him: Sir aap yaha kaise? Hospital mein sab theek hain na?

Dr Dubey replied that he had come here on some official work and is surprised to see him and Nidhi together here. He added that mein bohot hairaan hoon apne favorite student ko aise girte hue. Mein jaanta hoon ki kabhi kabhi log raste se bhatak jaate hain par phir apne aap ko samhal lete hain and come back on the right track par yeh tum kya kar rahe ho ? Sharam nahi aati hain kya? Apne parivaar ko dhoka kyun de raheho?? Uss din jab maine tumhare ghar phone kiya tha Heraam se baat bhui thi aur usne kaha ki tumhari biwi ek saal se hospital mein hain...

Uski tabhiyat kharab hain aur tum is Jr Doctor ke peeche pheeche bhag raheho. Meine tumse yeh expect nahi kiya tha!!!!!!1

Tumhara bohot naam hain Doctor Fraternity mein use kharab karne mein kyun tale ho. Yeh sab awaragardi band karo, acha nahi lagta ki KGH ke dean kise Jr Doctor ke peeche ghoom raha hain. Meine hospital mein bhi dekha par nahi soocha tha ki tum itne gire hue ho. Aur girne se pehele samhal jao.Anjie had just come there when Ashutosh had come out of the ICU and was trying hard to control her laughter and chucked seeing Nidhi and her jeejaji standing out there like two teenagers caught.




Next update will be on Wednesday or Thursday.

Please read, click the like button and reply. I dont mind any critical reviews too. Your motivation and suggestion are very necessary to keep me going.

See You guys soon with my reply to your wonderful reviews. Bye till then

Edited by ssss97 - 10 years ago

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