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Posted: 10 years ago
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What is Dubey's first impression? Why Nidhi is in Ashu's house???
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjani9


<font color="#6600cc" size="3">What is Dubey's first impression? Why Nidhi is in Ashu's house???</font>



Dr. Dubey has come to visit Baba. The impression that Dr. Dubey has on Nidhi is the same that is on the show.A bubbly and a notorious Jr. Doctor.

Nidhi at Ashu's house is going to haunt him for a long time. 😆 😉
In the next update u will see how Ashu looks after Nidhi and her family. Dr Dubey will be puzzled to see all this. Its gonna be fun.
Is it OK if I write in third person or should I write it in first person??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2

On their way to the hospital Ashutosh and Nidhi drop Khushi at Anjie's place.

In Arogya hospital

As Ashutosh and Nidhi enter the hospital they see dadi bua weeping hysterically and Shama Aunty and Solanki Uncle trying to comfort her. As soon as she sees the two of them she immediately wipes away her tears and askes Ashutosh: Doctor Yog theek toh hogayega na??? Yeh phirse kyun?? Tum andar jake dekho na kya hua hain. Jabse aaye hain koi bahaar hi nahi aaya. Mera dil baita ja raha hain. Kuch karo mein Yog ko aise nahi dekh sakti hoon.

As all of us know that Ashutosh is one of the best doctor's in Lucknow so he requests the staff to let him go inside. As he goes inside Dr Sinhal briefs Dr Ashutosh about the situation. He tells him that there is a blockage in the left bundle branch and it is very necessary to act soon but adds that since this is the second heart attack that Col Verma has had its difficult to tell anything now. He added that a few more reports were due and would start the treatment as soon as he would receive them.

As Dr Ashutosh comes out of the ICU he calls Nidhi and tells her what has happened. Nidhi will tearful eyes asks Baba theek hojayenge na. Mujhe bohot darr lag raha hain. What do you think? He replies tum bhi ek doctor ho Nidhi and you also understand ki yeh second attack hain and seeing her almost breakdown he tells her Yeh meri nidhi nahi hain. Meri Nidhi toh strong hain. Please Nidhi apne aap ko samhalo agar tum hi toot gayi toh Dadi Bua ka kya hoga?

Then he goes to DB and tells her to be strong and says roone se agar Col Verma agar theek hojayege toh sab ko rona chahiye na.😭😭 Ad mist so many tears a smile creeps out on DB's face.😃😆 He brings coffee for her and when she declines it and then he adds that agar kise ke na khane se patients theek ho jayega toh sare doctors ko har din fast karna chahiye. Hai na Nidhi 😉😆.. Then immediately nodding her head in the no direction has her coffee..

Ashutosh calls Dr Prashant and asks his take. Dr Prashant is Ashutosh's friend and works as a cardiologist at AIIMS. Dr Prashant tells him that usually in the case of left bundle branch block the best solution could be dilated, nonhypertrophic cardiomyopathy associated with ingestion of colloidal gold and silver. He told him to connect him to the doctor. When the conversation was over the treatment got decided and it was time to work hard to save Col Verma.

Ashutosh requested Shama aunty Solanki Uncle and Dadi Bua to go home and said that he and Nidhi would handle the situation here. Dadi bua reluctantly went back and asked them to keep informing her about Yog's condition.

Both Nidhi and Ashutosh sat outside the ICU where Col Verma laid lifelessly. Slowly sleep took over Nidhi and she slept there putting her head on Ashutosh's shoulder.

The next morning Dr Dubey had come to Arogya Hospital for some work and saw Ashni on the seat outside the ICU. He got even more puzzled seeing them here and went to confront them as to what they were doing and it was ridiculous to do such things after being responsible doctors of KGH.

Whilst going towards them he thought that his doubt was now getting affirmed and felt that they were for sure having an EMA .Now he was determined to know what went wrong and why did his favorite student fall off track...

Next Update on Monday...

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Edited by ssss97 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shobha21

Waiting for the update Swathi.


Updated Part 2 Shobaji.
Enjoy😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update Swathi 👏
Why Col.Verma was not admitted in KGH ??
Liked Ashu saying 'nahi khane se ya rone se patient theek nahi hoga'.
So Dr Dubey determined to know what went wrong with his favourite student. He went to confront AshNi.
What will happens next ?? Eagerly waiting for monday.
Thank you for the update Swathi.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I will be here tonight...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shobha21

Nice update Swathi👏

Why Col.Verma was not admitted in KGH ??
Liked Ashu saying 'nahi khane se ya rone se patient theek nahi hoga'.
So Dr Dubey determined to know what went wrong with his favourite student. He went to confront AshNi.
What will happens next ?? Eagerly waiting for monday.
Thank you for the update Swathi.



When Col had his first attack he went to Arogya hospital so his records and his doctor are in that one. The more important thing is that he is used to there. And many doctorsdont treat in other hospitals.
You will get to know what will happen next in the next update 😆 😉

Thanks for the quick review.
Should it be more of the first person or is the third person dialogues OK??

What do u want to read in he next updates anything in particular??
do u want the confrontation directly or after sometime??
what have u liked the most in this os?
Edited by ssss97 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This updates has more progress...
So Kushi is with AshNi, not given to Anji?? and she is positive???
I like Ashu comforting Nidhi and DB and making DB drink..
EMA in front of ICU??? 😕😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update Swathi 👏
The upcoming chapter will clear many doubts i hope. Loved the way Ashu tried to get the things normal when he lights the scene with Bua. It's not easy but some one has to take up the charge and that's what the son in law did.⭐️
Dr. Dubey is now much more confused, his intentions for EMA looked large. 😛 Now towards AshNi, i wonder what he will start with? 😆 Will be waiting! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cute and nice update Swathi ⭐️👏
I liked Dr. Dubey's furies over his student. He is all set to make things clear.. and plans of EMA.. ??/ 😆 Extremely against himself though.. 😛
Hope he confronts them and Ashni reacts.. Ashu's confession.. i am just waiting for it.. You are gonna make things cleared by him.. so it wud be a time to watch out for the finesse of Ashu reigning there...
Good to see Bua respecting her Daaktar's words n smiles with having to eat n went back home.. 😃
Khushi's being with Ashni is the same as was in the show.. Just they all are happy with the cute little.. !
Thanks !!!

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