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Posted: 10 years ago
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What an update 😆 me first 😛

Swathi, only DD spoke and kya bole 😆 I mean he did not give any time to let Ashni speak 😛
I am also laughing as Anji was doing 🤣
Thanks for this hilarious chapter. 👏 Waiting for Ashu's reply after his confusion bhare expressions 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: babita..

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What an update😆me first😛

Swathi, only DD spoke and kya bole😆I mean he did not give any time to let Ashni speak😛
I am also laughing as Anji was doing🤣
Thanks for this hilarious chapter.👏Waiting for Ashu's reply after his confusion bhare expressions😆



Elated to know that u liked it. Actually Hindi isn't my mother tongue so please over read my mistakes.
It was a short update. Actually couldn't increase its length as I would have to drag it. Yeah even I am thinking as to how will Ashu control himself n answer. I am sure nidhi will be at the end of her wits. 😆

Thanks for the super fast review.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Just finishes reading it Swathi 😆
Indeed the hilarious update! Loved to see Ashu with confusion in his mind and no place finding to say anything to Dubey 😆 Nidhi is also trying to reply but today Dubey is in full mood to take their class as of teenagers 😆😉
Liked Anji bursting into laughs and might be she intervene or might be something else. Will Ashu ever get a chance to speak? 😛 Million dollar query 😆
Enjoying it, thanks Swathi 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Just finishes reading it Swathi😆

Indeed the hilarious update! Loved to see Ashu with confusion in his mind and no place finding to say anything to Dubey😆Nidhi is also trying to reply but today Dubey is in full mood to take their class as of teenagers😆😉
Liked Anji bursting into laughs and might be she intervene or might be something else. Will Ashu ever get a chance to speak?😛Million dollar query😆
Enjoying it, thanks Swathi🤗



Swathi calling swati 😆 😆
Thanks for the super fast review. I am pleased to know that the readers here are liking my updates.
Thanks for the support n encouragement. Did u by any chance feel that u were Angiee there??? A silent spectator chuckling??
thanks for liking it . How do u want the next update to be like???
Any suggestions?? Please do give a few
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
chapter 2 review
a wonderful chapter once again .liked ashu taking care of nidhi and her family .ashu asking nidhi to be strong liked that a lot.dubey thinking ashni having a EMA .really liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dubey did what he wanted to do... 😆 Nice one Swathi,,, ⭐️👏
I liked his intentions so clear... who doesnt want his good student getting bad remarks.. aur wo bhi Nidhi ke liye... nahiii 😛
Ashu ji cud not say a word... Nidih was stopped.. n Anji silently enjoying the teen task there... 😆
Wonderful time imagining the conditions of Ashni in front of The Dr. Dubey.. 🤣
Fun is prevailing in your FF Swathi... 😃😳
Just waiting to watch what Ashu will do... if he ever get a time to... 😆😆
Keep going the flow my sis... 😃 Enjoyment is here that we can share with each other.. n you are doing exactly that.. ! 👏Lage raho.. !!!

Dubey ji.. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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chapter 3 review
loved this chapter a lot .dubey thinks ashu has married someone else and having a EMA with somebody else. she goes a scolds nidhi and then ashutosh .loved that a lot. u are such a wonderful writer
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
So finally Dr.Dubey spoke to Ashu also????
I thought this confusion will go on for some more time...😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: sss97



Swathi calling swati 😆 😆
Thanks for the super fast review. I am pleased to know that the readers here are liking my updates.
Thanks for the support n encouragement. Did u by any chance feel that u were Angiee there??? A silent spectator chuckling??
thanks for liking it . How do u want the next update to be like???
Any suggestions?? Please do give a few

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Yeah, even i was thinking this way when i wrote it! 😳 😆

Can't say that i was Anji there or not, but yes Swathi i laughed a bit like her 😛
For the next update - I want it exactly you have in mind dearie cos reading a writer's mind is why i am here 😃 And knowing your way to see how Ashu deals with Dubey, is what makes me more exciting though.
But one thing -- I do want to see Ashu and Nidhi enjoying Dubey's innocence for a little, and then Ashu intervenes and his words will be yours Swathi!
Take your time to write, no hurries 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swatishubh

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Yeah, even i was thinking this way when i wrote it! 😳 😆

Can't say that i was Anji there or not, but yes Swathi i laughed a bit like her 😛
For the next update - I want it exactly you have in mind dearie cos reading a writer's mind is why i am here 😃 And knowing your way to see how Ashu deals with Dubey, is what makes me more exciting though.
But one thing -- I do want to see Ashu and Nidhi enjoying Dubey's innocence for a little, and then Ashu intervenes and his words will be yours Swathi!
Take your time to write, no hurries 🤗



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