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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Dubey did what he wanted to do... 😆 Nice one Swathi,,, ⭐️👏

I liked his intentions so clear... who doesnt want his good student getting bad remarks.. aur wo bhi Nidhi ke liye... nahiii 😛
Ashu ji cud not say a word... Nidih was stopped.. n Anji silently enjoying the teen task there... 😆
Wonderful time imagining the conditions of Ashni in front of The Dr. Dubey.. 🤣
Fun is prevailing in your FF Swathi... 😃😳
Just waiting to watch what Ashu will do... if he ever get a time to... 😆😆
Keep going the flow my sis... 😃 Enjoyment is here that we can share with each other.. n you are doing exactly that.. ! 👏Lage raho.. !!!

Dubey ji.. 😆


Thanks a lot bro for the review and motivation. Happy that u are enjoying it...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

chapter 3 review
loved this chapter a lot .dubey thinks ashu has married someone else and having a EMA with somebody else. she goes a scolds nidhi and then ashutosh .loved that a lot. u are such a wonderful writer


Thanks for the review Tasha. I am happy that u liked this OS
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Anjani9

So finally Dr.Dubey spoke to Ashu also????

I thought this confusion will go on for some more time...😕


U wanted the confusion to prevail for some more time??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sss97


U wanted the confusion to prevail for some more time??

That is what I expected to happen!!!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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When is the next update????
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Sorry Anjani a little busy. All my cousins have come toh update may get delayed. Sorry,,,
Will try to update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: sss97

Sorry Anjani a little busy. All my cousins have come toh update may get delayed. Sorry,,,

Will try to update soon

No problem...enjoy...we will wait..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68

Part 4

As Dr. Dubey's daant ka kota stoped, Ashutsh tried to explain but as all of us know the world famous Dr Dubey didn't pay any heed to him and walked off in a huff.

Anjie who had witnessed the happening went towards her jeejaji and her best friend and start laughing uncontrollably seeing both their comical and confused faces. Nidhi gave her a stern look but Ashu just gave in laughed it off so that Nidhi could feel better and this situation would have reduced her tension. Nidhi seeing Dr Ashutosh laughing whole heartedly asked him if he was alright??? Just now Dr Dubey had given both of then a class and he is acting as if it was a joke and told him that this could affect his relationship with him and she was sure she will be tortured by him in the hospital. To which Ashutosh said Don't worry Doc sab theek hojayega. Par tumhara chehara dekhne layak tha.😆😉 Seriously I just got so confused when you were trying to reason out and tell Dr Dubey par woh mane tab Mujhe laga koi hospital ki pareshni thipar jab unhone continue kiya tab mera tubelight jala😆😆 Nidhi said Unhone toh aapke baton ko bhi toh nazarandaaz kardiya tha. Jab unhone apne favorite student ki baat nahi suni to mera kyun sunte???I don't know ki who kya sooch rahe honge aur mera kya hoga? God please save me!!!!😕😕

Jeejaji actually Nidhi ka hi nahi aap ke expression bi hit the😉. I swear aap to full hi shock laga laga laga😲😲 shock laga ke mode mein chale gaye the😆 Mein toh apne aap ko control hi nahi kar paarahi thi I thought that agar unka lecture aur do minute chalta toh I would loose control and start laughing fanatically.Nidhi added Ab bas kar Anji agar Dr Dubey ko pata chalega ki Dr Ranganath ki biwi hai aur tu The Dr Dubey pe hasri hain I don't know Dr Ranganath ka kya hoga😉

Just when Dr Dubey was returning he saw the three of them having a gala time with each other and got angrier and felt that if he doesn't do anything his favorite student will loose everything and sighed and was determined to sort out his students life.

In the meanwhile Ashu told Nidhi that CV was on the road to recovery and added that Anjie tum yahaan thodi deer roho hum dono fresh hoker aate hain, waise bhi maine hum dono kein like chutti apply ker di hain. That's perfect jeejaji. Dono jaao mein yahi rukhti hoon. Waise bhi DB maa aur papa thodi deer mein aajayenge.

Arey Anji Khushi kaisi hain I mean she's fine na. Koi gadbad toh nahi kin na usne aur I am sure who hume miss kari hogi haina Dr Ashutosh??

Aisa kuch nahi hain Nidhi. Woh bilkul theek hain don't worry but haan woh aap dono ko toh miss kari thi...

Ek kaam kartein hain Nidhi hum Khushi se pehale milte hain and uske baad we'll go home. Ise tumhe tasli hogi and Khushi bhi neglected nahi feel karegi. What say?

Aap toh world ke best husband hain and gave him an impulsive hug to which Ashu was shocked but later recovered and hugged her back.😳 Anjie was happy to see her friend's live filled with happiness. But the trio didn't notice that Dr Dubey had witnessed their hug.

Smoke was coming out of Dr Dubey's ears and nose.😡😡 He felt if he didn't act any soon everything would be finished. He felt it would be better if he informed Dr Mathur about Ashutosh's awaragardi. Yes he felt. Only Dr Mathur could bring Ashutosh back on track.

Ashu and Nidhi went and saw Khushi and finding everything to be fine proceeded towards their home not knowing what was waiting for them.

As we know Dr Dubey drives very slowly Dr Dubey reaches just five minutes before Ashu n Nidhi reach. And spits out all what is in his stomach. Poor Baba not being allowed to intervene was trying to hold on to his laughter just then Ashni enter... And Nidhi tells Baba that her Baba is much better and tells him that it was all because of Dr Ashutosh that CV is fine. Baba adds that Ashu sirf tumse pyaar nahi karta hain tumhare pariwaar se bhi karta hain jaise tum karti ho. Both Ashutosh and Nidhi don't realize that Dr Dubey is sitting in their front room continue chatting with Baba. Looks like Baba also wanted to have some fun with Dr Dudey.😆😆

Then suddenly Dr Dubey at his wits end tells Baba Dr Mathur aap bhi in dono ka saath de rahe hain. I am really very disappointed. Meine socha ki atleast aap toh samjhenge aur Ashutosh ko samjhaenge but I think I was wrong... Aap ki bahu ek saal se hospital mein hain aur aap Ashutosh ke doosri shaadi karne mein tule hain. I guess I overestimated you. Laga ki aap samajdaar hain per aap bhi.. che...

Please read, click the like button and reply. I dont mind any critical reviews too. Your motivation and suggestion are very necessary to keep me going.


Dont forget to review my performance😊

Next update on Tuesday

Edited by ssss97 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Anjani9

No problem...enjoy...we will wait..😊


Aap ka intezaar is over. Chalo go and read😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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No one here😭
Again wrong choise of time for posting
Edited by ssss97 - 10 years ago

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