OS Destiny's cut last chap and Epilogue on page 16 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: babita68

Superb update Alka di 👏👏 It's a privilege to get an update from you, what if late. 😃It's my pleasure Babita.

God is great and today Ashu has seen Nidhi after 8 years. Unbelievable but very true.Yes sometime miracle works. Nidhi as Aarohi and looking after Honey as a mother. Anyone in place of Ashu would have reacted like this. And Rohan's harsh words claim that he likes her too.😳 But he said that they are only friends. He must be having a liking for her.😳 Anybody who know Nidhi want a girl like Nidhi in their life.She is so cute and cheerpy.She is herself life
Emotional time for Ashu and he is ready to take Nidhi back to her senses. And with the successful surgery, Nidhi is sure be back with him. 😃Would love to read what happens when she see him. Loving the story and will wait for the next chapter. Thanks Alka di 🤗
Epilogue the next one ?? So soon.

You know i can't handle long stories bec i am totally impatient person😆😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Thank you all for waiting my update with patiently.I will post my chap soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

Thanks Alka..waiting for Vidi in the next part😉

Yes next update you will find yourself.As i promised you
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: ariyadasa

sorry yarr 😭miss ur OS got my vacation today will comment tom surely 😛

Will wait for your review Ariya.Take your time
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Alka ji. How is your health?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Hello friends.Sorry for late.But i am working on my last update.
Will post it today or lastly tom morning pakka.

Thank you for your patience and support
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Posted: 10 years ago
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waiting for it... after all I will be there in it😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Chap 4

Haalat se majboor pyaar aaj bhi hai
Do dilo me chhippi mohobbat ki khushbu aaj bhi hai
Par is nashtar jo dil me hai uska kya kare?
Us Ishq ke yaado ki chubhan aaj bhi hai.


Sorry guys for late.I am very thankful to you as you are reading my os with so dedication.

Dr Ashutosh and Dr Pillai are in Dr Pillais' cabin
Dr Pillai:Ashutosh,what do you think about Aarohi's post condition?
Dr Ashutosh:Let's see.I am expecting some positive response.But before that i want to give some instructions to Rohan and his father and even Honey [in deep thought]too.

In conference hall.
Dr Ashutosh and dr Pillai are with Rohan his father.
Dr Ashutosh:Where is honey?
Rohan:She will come after completing her school.
Dr Ashutosh: ok then.I want to give some instruction about Aarohi .Uske sorry unke hosh me aane ke baadbhi you need to be very careful about her mental issue.Aapko unhe kuchh bhi jabardasti yaad karwane ki koshish nahi karni hai.Agar unhe kuchh yaad hai toh theek hai.Unke stiches abhi taja hai toh agar woh apne dimag ko jor degi toh shayad unke stiches tut jaye.Unhe nuksaan ho sakta hai.So please.Honey ko bhi thoda samaza dijiyega.I need your support in whole this matter.

Nidhi is still unconshious.Honey is sitting near her.
Rohan came in the room.
Rohan:Aap yahaa kya kar rahi hai?Kaun laya aapko yahaa?
Honey:Papa muze HK lekar aaye hai.Mumma ke uthane ka wait kar rahi hoo.
Rohan:Beta Mumma uth jayegi toh main aapko bula loonga.Aap abhi ghar jaiye.
Honey:Papa jab muze fever hota tha toh mumma thodi na muze chhodkar uth jati thi.Woh toh humesha mere pas hi reheti thi na?Toh main kaise jaoo mumma ko is halat me chhodkar.Main unke uthaneke wait karoongi.
Tabhi Ashutosh room me aaya.
He put his hand on Honey's head and said,"Bacha,aapki mumma abhi thodi geheri neend me hai.Toh jar aap touch karke dekho.Woh thodi der aur soyegi.
And she touched Nidhi."Are haan!Mumma toh geheri neend me hai.Hum baad me aayenge.Hain na papa?
And Rohan agreed and take her to home.
Ashutosh was sitting near Nidhi
Ashutosh sitting near Nidhi's bed.He was in deep thought.

He was thinking,"How can i say about my relation with Nidhi?i can't bec if Nidhi don't want to reveal then?first i must ask her wish before anybody can know about it.
He saw Nidhi.He prayed god save this angel.And he just kissed her hand.
His touch became magic and Nidhi moves her hands.Ashutosh so excited to see her moments.He called Dr Pillai by intercom and dr Pillai appeared there within seconds.
Dr Pillai examined her and stand there to see some more moments from her.She slowly opened her eyes.But it was more hard to open her eyes fastly.So Dr Pillai just signed her to be slow.She slowly opened her eyes.And she saw Ashutosh in front of her.Her heart missed one breath.
But before she could say something Honey came there running and hugged Nidhi,"Mumma,aap uth gai?how are you mumma?
Rohan was trying to hold her but she was out of control.So he just said,"Beta,mumma ko aaram karne do.Bate baad me kar lena" Nidhi was looking at Rohan with shocking and really scary.
Honey said,"Papa mumma is alright now.Hai na mumma?
Nidhi just band her head with still surprising look at Rohan.
Rohan wanted to explain but Ashutosh signed him to stay mum.
After their exit.
Nidhi was in deep thought,"What happened with life life?Am i really mother of 7 yrs girl?I can't even imagine my life without Ashutosh?But in my memory loss i got merried?with Rohan?No i can't.How i will face Ashutosh if this is true?
She was now in dillema.Ashutosh too decided for her good health not to tell her anything now.
And time gone by weeks.Honey and Rohan attending her on daily base and Nidhi still in dillema.She got really bonding with Honey.
After week She and Ashutosh get morning time alone to chat with each other.

Dr Ashutosh came to examine her.She was in deep sleep.
His touch make her in sense and she opened her eyes and looked at him.
He gave her a smile as usual.But her tears came .
Ashutosh put his hand on her forehead and asked,"What happened to you Nidhi? feeling uneasy?
Nidhi:Ashutosh.It is not like that.But i want to talk to you if you don't mind.Please shut the door first.
Ashutosh went and shut the door and sit near Nidhi.
Nidhi:I am sorry Ashutosh.I want to die.
Ashutosh : [With shocked expression] what?why Nidhi?Why are you talking like this?
Nidhi: Ashutosh when you rejected on my birthday to merry me i was totally disappointed.But somewhere i had a gut feeling that you will be agree after some time.But now after 8 yrs i came to know that I got merried to Rohan and we have a child.I am totally depressed now.How this happened?I never imagined my life without you Ashutosh?Nurse told me that the present date and i came to know that full 8 yrs passed Ashutosh?how could i?mean how can i merry not Ashutosh but some else? I am not that type person?i love you and always imagined my life with you.
And she started crying loudly.
Ashutosh came to Nidhi and just confort her.
Ashutosh : don't cry Nidhi.It is not actually your fault .It is a game of destiny.And i want to ensure you that you didn't merry Rohan.He just take you home .
Ashutosh revealed the whole incident of that accident.
Nidhi:OH Ashutosh.YOu save me.I love you so so much.
And they both hugged each other tightly.Ashutosh kissed her forehead and said,"Nidhi.You are my life.I made mistake but now i want to make up for that.I want to merry you now.
Nidhi:Now?pahele muze theek toh hone do.
Dr Pillai entered with a great smile with Honey Rohan and his father.
Dr Pillai:Ashutosh ki barat mere ghar se nikalegi.Aur shadi yahi hogi.And Nidhi,you are totally fine.Baki ki care yeh ullu ka patha karega.Usne tumhe dard diya hai toh malam aur dawawohi karega.
Dr Ashutosh:Sahi hai dr Pillai.Main iska pura khayal rakhunga.
Rohan :Nidhi humare ghar se bida hogi.
Rohan's father:ha aur kanayadan main karoonga meri beti ka.Hain na Aarohi i mean Nidhi?
Nidhi:Baba Aarohi hi kahiye aap muze.Aap ke muh se achha lagta hai.
And all laughted and Nidhi and Ashtuosh watching each other chori chori with great satisfaction of love victory.


Edited by parmarA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Epilogue
Epilogue
After 10 yrs.
In Apollo Hospital London
Dr Nidhi was sitting in her cabin with cool spects.She was reading the line up papers of a patient and giving instruction to nurse
Dr Nidhi: Merry.Please inform dr Ashutosh when he came out from OT to come to my cabin.Ok
Merry:Ok Dr Nidhi.
And she left.
After some time Dr Ashutosh came in Dr Nidhi's cabin.
He gave a cute one arm hug to Nidhi and sit in opposite chair.
Ashutosh:Kahiye darling.Aapne hume yaad kiya.Khushkismati meri.
Nidhi:Ab yeh sab chhodiye aur apni laadli beti Vidi ko samazaiye.Woh aapse ruthi hui hai.
Ashutosh:Vidi?Kyon bhai?Meri pari muzse kyon ruthi hai?
And suddenly the door opened and Honey came with little angel Vidi.
Honey:Mumma.Main Honey ko le aai hu school se.Woh aaj mere result tha na toh saath me ise bhi lekar aayi.Uncle [To Ashutosh] I got 98%.
Dr Ashutosh hugged Honey and said,"Betu,you are so clever and intelligent.I am proud of you.Ab apne baba ko bhi phone karke bata do.Woh shikayat karta hai ki meri beti ab meri nahi rahi.Rotadu kahi ka.
Nidhi hugged tightely to Honey and congratulate her and said,"Honey.Ab tum jahaa chaho wahaa tumhe admission milega.
Honey:Lekin muze toh aapko aur uncle ko chhhodkar jana hi nahi hai.
Vidi was sitting on chair muh fula ke
Ashutosh came to her and said,"Oh mere bachha.Kya hua?papa kaan pakad ke sorry bolate hai aapko.
Vidi:Sorry nahi chalega papa.Aapne hume ghumane le jane ka wada kiya hai.Mummy toh lekar jati hai bus aap hi bahane banate ho.
Ashutosh ne apne dono kaan pakade and said,"Sorry beta ji.Aaj sham ko hum sab log ghumne jayenge theek hai?Aur weekend me bhi do din ke liye chhutti manane jayenge.Ok
And Vidi danced with joy and gave cute kiss to Ashutosh
Honey took her phone and said,"Mumma,Uncle and Vidi ek selfie toh banati hai nahi?
And she clicked cute selfie of small and cute family.
Edited by parmarA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Wow!! Chapter-4 & epilogue both upadated!! 😃 Thank you Alkaben. Off to read...

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