OS Destiny's cut last chap and Epilogue on page 16

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Hello all.How are you?

Me starting my os.I don't know whether you will find it different or not.But i tried hard tomake it different.

@Deepaligupta for your total encouragement and support.Love you.


This is my theme song and my three scenes.Which gave you a brief idea of my os.

Thank you all in advance

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BzX-jM1gufU[/YOUTUBE]

These are my three scenes

First scene

Asutosh entered in Merry Medical college in Goa.

There he met Met Mallika at the gate of college.

He was in so hurry.

Mallika:What happened Ashutosh?again forgot Nidhi's birthday?

Ashutosh:Mallika,you know my memory?In study i can't forget a single medical line.If you can take my test i can tell you which topic on which page?But birthday's anniversaries.Oh got i became total Alzimers patient.But tell me where is Nidhi?

Mallika: I think in class?

Ashutosh rushed towards class.

Second scene:

Ashutosh and Nidhi at a corner of Scooby night club

Ashutosh:Why this hurry Honey?

Nidhi:Why not Hurry Ashutosh?seems you are not interested in marriage.

Ashutosh:It is not like that Nidhi.But i am little scared by marriage institution.

Nidhi:[angrily] I know you are afraid to take responsbilities.

Ashutosh:Marriage?Why marriage Nidhi?i can love you till my last breath.

Nidhi:But can't give any commitment ha?

Ashutosh:you can say that

And he became invisible in that friends group crowd.He didn't turned back where is Nidhi?

After 8 yrs.

Ashutosh was in Dillema whether to ask or not?It is really a correct time to ask?or may be it can ruin her life?what if she didn't shared anything to her husband?My words can Bombard on her life.She had a little daughter with her.

Rohan :Look Mr.Ashutosh.You are taking more than wanted interest in Aarohi.You are guest here.Behave as guest please.You are best friend of Mr Mathur who is best friend of mine too.But seems you don't know the Indian values.

Ashutosh:No you are taking me wrong Mr Rohan.I just want to tell you

He was cut midway by Rohan,"Stop Mr Ashutosh"


Chap 1 : page 2
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4237812


Chap 2 page 6

Chap 3 page 12

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4237812&TPN=12&#p117153030

Chap 4 and epilogue pg 16
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4237812&TPN=16



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Different concept alka di...Plz continue soon 😃
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Wow!! New OS!! 👏 Off to read it... 😃

Thank you Alkaben!! 🤗 How r U?
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GM dear🤗
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next part please... please ...

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Very different concept Alkaji.
Good start. Can't wait to read the next part.

Please update soon.

Thank you for the OS Alkaji.
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I will come in the evening Alkaji😃
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Good start Alka di 👏
Congrats for the new OS 🥳Will be waiting for the next part, to know what happened in the last 8 years. 😃⭐️
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Mukkadar ko samazna na samazi hai
Hum dhunte hai kismat ko haath ki lakiro me
Jab uthate hai rakhne paav jameen par
Dekhte hai toh dharti nahi reheti



In the Morning at Verma house.

Anji entered in Nidhi's room.She was shocked to see the best child specialist's room.

Anji:Aaa.What is this Nidhi?kamare ka kya haal banaya hai?Bhuchal aaya tha kya?

Nidhi:Relaxe Anji.Nothing happened yaar.Getting ready for Hospital.Bus dress choose kar rahi thi yaar.

Anji:Kya fayada?Ghar se achhe se Western kapade me nikalti hai aur wahaa jakar tera make over kar leti hai.6m ki saree aur hair ko pin up karke puri lecturer cum doctor ban jati hai.Tu bore nahi hoti baar kapade change karne me?

Nidhi:Anji life is so unpredictable yaar.Main toh har din aise jiti hoo jaise yeh mera aakhri din hai.Jitni masti dhamaal karna hai abhi karlo.Toh fir maut ka bhi afsos na ho.Zindagi Zindadili ka naam hai Murda dil ka kya khaak jiya karte hai.Ha lekin pyaar ke maamle me thodi ulti hoo.Muze Jald se jald shadi bhi karni hai.

Anji:toh fir der kis baat ki?kar le dr Ashutohs se baat?

Nidhi:Ha wohi karni hai aaj?tumhe pata hai na main usko kitna pyaar karti hoo.Lekin uske shadi ke liye khayal muzse alag hai.Woh shadi se darta hai.

Anji:Toh fir kya karegi?

Nidhi:Puchhungi aur kya karoongi?

Anji:Hayo rabba?main toh bhul gai.Happy birthday janu.Main tumhe wish karne aayee thi.Wish you a great birthday.

Nidhi:Dekha sabko yaad hai mera birthday.Bus ek usko hi yaad nahi hai.Subah se ek phone bhi nahi kiya unhone.

Anji:Unhone?peeth pichhe naam leti hai.Aur samne jate hi aap ji shuru ho jata hai tera.

Nidhi:Yes.Bec i love him.And you know i love to call him ji and aap.But not in hospital.Only out of the hospital.

Anji:Ok Chal bye shaam ko milte hai party me.

Nidhi:ok.

Anji:Again happy birthday janu.Have a beautiful day ahead .



Goa Merry Medical College.

Dr Ashutosh Rushing towards the gate where he found Dr Mallika.

Dr Mallika:What Ashutosh again late?

Dr Ashutosh:Na Mallika,you know i am very punctual about my timing.But ghar se nikalne laga toh neighbours ne knock kiya.Uncle Oza was serious.He was sinking,So went there to check him and giving every possible treatment to them.So got late.

Dr Mallika: Oh god Ashutosh give this explanation to your hot and angry girlfriend.She is on fire now.

Dr Ashutosh:Why?

Dr Mallika:Reallly Ashutosh.Are you a patient of Alzimers?

Dr Ashutosh:What do you mean Mallika? Any special day today?

Dr Mallika:What man?ab toh tumhara jute khana banata hai.Agar main Nidhi ki jagah hoti toh tera woh haal karti ki tum yaad rakhte.It's Nidhi's birthday today.Sabne use wish kiya aur tum?

Ashutosh:Aaj toh bhagwan bhi muze nahi bacha sakta.

Mallika:woh toh hai.

Ashutosh:But where is birthday girl?

Mallika:I think in class with her interns?or may be in her cabin.

Ashutosh: I am finind hospital's cease fire bag.Today i needed it most.

And he rushed towards Nidhi's cabin



Rashmi Devika,jyoti and Ravi in the coridor.

Rashmi:Dekha mam ko.She was looking so stunning in that blue and white saree yaar.

Ravi: Yes Rashmi.Nidhi mam is like an angel.But today she was looking super cute.Just like pariya.White and blue combination saree with cute smile.

Rashmi:pata hai.But She is very strict when it comes to lectures.

Jyoti:ha yaar.pata nahi class ke bahar she always talk politely,cheerpyly aur class ke andar aate hai she became Hitler.But i like her attitude.It's all for our beneficial.

And they stopped Gossiping bec of Ashutosh's presence there.

All the students:Good Morning sir.

Ashutosh:Good morning.

And he leaded to Nidhi's cabin.

Reaching to Nidhi's cabin he knocked the door

Nidhi:from inside] Come in.

He saw Ashutosh.

Ashutosh:Oh sorry Nidhi.Happy birthday to you honey.

Nidhi:Thank you sir.

Ashutosh murmered"Atmp is too hot to handle lagta hai"

Nidhi:Please sir come in.

Ashutosh properly close the door and try to explain.

Nidhi:Sir,i know you couldn't remember anyone's birthday.So no probs.But mera birthday?how could you?seems i am not special for you?

Ashutosh hurt by her words.

Ashutosh: woh Nidhi

Nidhi:Sir, i knew ki aap apni doctory kar rahe the.Duty baja rahe the but i wanted only one wish from you.Nothing else.

Ashutosh:I am sorry Nidhi.

Nidhi:No sir.Please don't be sorry bec i know aap fans gaye the.Lekin sham ko club me pakka aapko aana hai.

Ashutosh:Sure honey.Kahaa aana hai muze?

Nidhi:Scooby night club.Muze pata hai ki hum sab ko wohi waqt milata hai.And woh ek hi club hai jahaa sirf soft drink hoti hai.No Alchohol.So we can enjoy.

Ashutosh:Sure i will be there honey.Waise ek baat kahoo?I am sorry.I want to hug you.But this is hospital.so

And he gave sign of little cute hug to Nidhi just say,"I love you.I missed my Honey's hug"

Nidhi:Sham ko

And he gave cute smile to her



Ashutosh came to Verma house and he caught Anji and Nidhi there.

Anji wear white shirt and Blus jeans and Nidhi wear Red T-Shirt and white jeans.

Ashutosh gave a cute look to Nidhi.

They both came near Ashutosh

Ashutosh opened back door for Anji.And Anji seated.

Nidhi sat near Ashutosh.

Anji:Sorry Nidhi.I forgot my charger yaar.I will go and take that.Please

Before Nidhi could utter a word Anji left.

Ashutosh:Honey.You are looking beautiful.I know Why Anji left to give us some space.

And he hugged Nidhi and gave her a forehead kiss.

They remain that position for some time.

Ashutosh:I love you Honey.

Nidhi:Me too love you Ashutosh.

They settled themselves as they show Anji coming.

In Scooby club

Mallika,Rangnath,Jagan and Armaan were waiting there.

Nidhi Anji and Ashutosh reached there.

All were enjoying the party.

Ashutohs and Nidhi were standing in the corner and enjoying the Orange juice sip.

Nidhi:Ashutosh,muze tumse kuchh kehena hai.

Ashutosh:ha bolo.

Nidhi:Ashutosh,ab hume shadi karni chahiye.

Ashutosh:Kya?achanak?

Nidhi:Nahi woh baba aur DB puchh rahe the muze humare faisle ke bareme?

Ashutosh:Nidhi.Tumhe pata hai i am scared of this institution.But still i will think of that.

Nidhi:Ashutosh tumhe pata hai na kal muze DB ko lekar Chennai jana hai.DB ki halat tum janate ho.Muze lagta hai ki tum resposbilities lene se darte ho.

Ashutosh:YOu can say that Nidhi.

Mallika calling Nidhi and Ashutohs at dance floor.

Nidhi:Ok fine.Tum jao Mallika is calling you.

Ashutosh:Nidhi believe me.I can love you still my last breath.But marriage?Ok we will discuss it afte this party.

And woh dosto ke group me chala gaya bina mude bina dekhe.

Jab thodi der baad usne idhar udhar dekha toh Nidhi aur Anji dono nahi the.

He asked Mallika

Mallika:Ha dono chali gai Rangnath ke saath.Shayad Nidhi ki subah ki flight hai Chennai ki.

Ashutosh:OH shit!fir bhul gaya main.Muze unse milne bhi jana tha.But subah me chala jaoonga.

And they greeted each other by Good night and went back to their respective homes.

Next morning Ashutosh got Armaan's call.

And Ashutohs:What?what are you talking Armaan?Oh my god?how?i lost my everything dost?I lost my Nidhi?i lost my life?


Hope you will like 1 st chap.

Thank you in advance
Edited by parmarA - 10 years ago

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