OS Destiny's cut last chap and Epilogue on page 16 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: shobha21

Very nice update Alkaji 👏

Waiting for the next update.

Thank you so much.

Thank you shobha.Will give my update on Monday
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

wonderful update Alka ji

loved it a lot
waiting for the next

Thank you Tasha.Update on Monday
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you Anjani
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: babita68

Read the chapter Alka di. Will give the review tomorrow. 😃

Sorry for late.I read your review thank you Babita
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Waiting for the update Alkaji.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Sorry guys.

I couldn't post my chap yesterday bec my children's exams starget.

I will post my last chap as soon as possible

Thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congo shongo for the new OS Alka di ⭐️⭐️ 👏👏 🥳
Have read one chapter... will read more n will give a review... thats for sure.. .! pakka... !!! 👍🏼

How is my di n life.. ??
Miss the old days of reviewing n comments... ! 😳 😃


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Posted: 10 years ago
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PS:This is just my imaginary story.Forgive me if you don't find any logic in it.
Chap 3

Itihaas ke panne ki tasveer hai hum
Kuchh bite jajbato ki tabeer hai hum
Agar bura lage aapko toh
Bus yahi dua ki panne palat dena
Jahaa humari dastaan likhi ho

After 8 yrs.

Ashutosh landed on Delhi air port.

Dr Pillai from Dehradun Civil Hospitalcame to receive Dr Ashutosh who was invited there for a major surgery.

Dr Pillai:Oh welcome Dr Ashutosh.

Ashutosh:Thank you Mr Pillai.

And he accompanied Dr pillai and left for hotel which is near the hospital.


In the hotel room

Dr Pillai :Dr Ashutosh for now you take rest.I will catch you in the evening sir.I want to disscuss a case for which i called you so urgently.But before that you will have to come to my home that i had arranged small get together for your arrival in India.

Dr Ashutohs:Sir,you know i never attend any partied.I am not a party person.

Dr Pillai:N Mr Ashutosh.You will have to come.It is small and warm party.Please

Dr Ashutosh:Ok but i will stay there only for few minutes.

Dr Pillai:done

And he left.

In the evening at Mr Pillai and Mr Rohan

Mr Pillai:Rohan,where is my child Aarohi and your child Honey?

Rohan:she is inside the house you know she is best party arranger and usko yeh sab arrange karna pasana hai.

Mr Pillai:Ha aur maine uske ilaaj ke liye best Pneurosurgeon bulaya hai

But before he could complete a word Ashutosh entered but before he could reach in main hall.

He found ain Garden a lady with 8 yrs daughter.

She was follwing her daughter with dinner plate,"Stop Honey.yeh khana khatam karna hai"

While running that girl came to Ashutohs and hide behind him.

That lady came to Ashutohs and stand in front of Ashutosh

Ashutosh was shocked and he just uttered,"Nidhi?"

But that lady not responded.She just saw Ashutosh and without even thinking she said,"Honey.come out baby.Mumma is calling you na?Yeh khana khatam karo warna papa narrj ho jayenge.

And she pulled her and take her in the house.

Ashutosh get shocked by her behaviour.

He was in dillema to ask her or not just then he was Dr Pillai.He came to him and just waved.

Rohan joined them.

Mrs Pillai called dr Pillai and Rohan and Ashutosh stayed alone there

Rohan:Hello myself Rohan

Ashutosh:Nice to meet you Mr Rohan.Myself Ashutosh.

Now he became restless.He asked Rohan,"Excuse me.May i know who is that lady with Black and red saree?

Rohan:Mr Ashutosh.She is Aarohi.

Now Ashutosh lost in deep thought:So,she don't want to reveal her true name also.She looks so stressed.woh kaisee thi aur kaise ho gai?maine use itna chup toh kabhi nahi dekha.Jaise puri murza gai hai.But main ab kisse puchhu?Uski chhoti se beti hai.How can i ruin her life by revealing her truth.

Ashutosh:Mr Rohan.How you know her?Where is her husband?

Rohan stopped him mid way

Rohan:Mr Ashutosh.That's none of your business.You are guest here so be as guest.Please don't cross your limits.

But before he could say any other harsh words Dr Pillai intfere in it

Dr Pillai:What Rohan?he is dr Ashutosh.Behave your self.He specially came here from London to handle Aarohi's case.Please

Rohan:I am sorry dr Ashutosh.Extremely sorry.
Rohan called Aarohi.

Rohan:Aarohi meet Dr Ashutosh.Woh aapka case handle karenge.

After hearing Ashutohs her eyes blinked and her body jerked.

Ashutosh said,"Namaste"

But that before that usne apna haath shake hands karne ke liye badhaya.

They both shake hands and that touch make great sense for her.

She just uttered,"Ashutosh"

Ashutohs got shocked to hear his name.

He became restless and asked Dr Pillai and Rohan,"Pleage give me her history.I want to know about her line up of treatment.What happened to her?i find that something shocking happen with her.

Rohan:Dr Ashutosh.I know you are the best doctor.But how can you say this so confidencly.Find that you know her.

Dr Ashutosh:Actually mr Rohan.I don't want to drag it right now.I want to study the case first.Please mr Rohan i want to know really what happened to her.

Rohan:Actually dr Ashutosh.She had lost her memory.

Ashutosh:What?means you are say that don't remember anything from her past?

Rohan:Exactly dr Ashutosh.My wife and my 1 yr daughter was travelling to go to Chennai.Aarohi was on next seat.When we reached the spot we found Aarohi injured there.She had solid head injury but by god's mercy my daughter was in her lap.I think she saved my daughter.Dr Pillai was there at that time he informed us.We couldn't get my wife's dead body.

Dr Pillai took her in their hospital.My father and me came to know that Aarohi lost her memory.So we took her with us.Dr Pillai was taking care of her as his patient.But after 7 yrs she didn't remember anything.They tried to take chance for her brain surgery and they consult you.

Now Ashutosh got clear picture why Nidhi was not behaving normally.

Dr Ashutosh:mr Rohan.Don't misunderstand me.I know her.Her family and we were in same collage.She is Dr Nidhi Verma.Pediatrician.

Rohan:What?so you were asking so many questions.

Dr Ashutosh:But still i am in dilemma.You both merried?

Rohan:No no Dr Ashutosh.Mere papa ji ki woh ladli beti hai.Aur meri dost hai.Bus Meri beti Honey oh sorry uska honey naam bhi Aarohi ne rakha hai.Jab use hosh aaya toh use kuchh yaad nahi tha siva is Honey ke.

Ashutosh was shocked by this too.Now uski aankhose aasoo behene lage.He was blaming himself for all this.

And he called Rohan


Ashutosh:Mr Rohan.Aap Nidhi ko i mean Aarohi ko kal Dr Pillai ke hospital me lekar aayiye.Main aaj raat ko Dr Pillai se yeh case disscuss kar leta hoo aur iska solution bahut jaldi le aayenge.

And he left to study Nidhi's case
Ashutosh ke hath me Nidhi ki report file thi.

Jab uska accident hua tab khichi hui tasveere [police always clicks pics for this type of incident]

Woh pics dekhke use woh sapna yaad aaya.He wanted to cry loudly but he controled himself and started to study the case again.

He suddenly got idea and he called Dr Murthy for this case and disscussed abut the operation line up.
That night was so difficult for Ashutosh.He was reading carefully all the books regarding surgery.

It was clear that bec of that clot she is still survive.But it is now hard time for Nidhi.Ashutohs was consulting as many doctor as he can.

But now that clot got infection and it is got so serious.

After 3 o clock in the morning Ashutosh get 2 hours sleep and then he reached the hospital where Dr Pillai was waiting for him.

They disscussed that case deeply studied it.

At 9 o clock Rohan and his father Mr Sharma came with Nidhi.She was looking so pretty but zero with her emotions.

Dr Pillai admiited Nidhi and the team with 3surgeons and 12 assistants were present in the OT

After 8 hrs hard Operation Ashutosh and Dr Pillai came out from OT with special winning expression that they had done a great and successful job.

Ashutosh was super happy that he found Nidhi back.But waiting for Nidhi's sense come.He wanted ki Nidhi use pahechane aur maaf kar de.He wanted to hear his name from Nidhi's mouth

His wait came in end after 2 days.

Next update or you can say it as Epilogue on Tuesday for sure.I am sorry for really very late😭😭😭




Edited by parmarA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Beautiful update Alka di. Liked it so much. Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Beautiful update Alkaji 👏..loved it.❤️
Thank god Nidhi is alive, she only lost her memory.

Rohan and Nidhi are just friends..good.👍🏼

I just hope that Nidhi will get her memory back and would recognise Ashutosh.
Thank you so much for the update Alkaji.

Waiting for the next.

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