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@bc123456

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: babita68
Very nice and brilliant masterpiece Doc Babs 👏 The pain can become so powerful sometimes that we tend to take it as our boss. Only thing is just not let it destroy you, it'll go sooner or later. Liked in the end you have shown the desire to come out of it. God's grace can be uplifting.
Well written, great poem 👏

Thank u , just random thoughts put on paper 😃

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

wow dr. Babs, I have no words to express my feelings fter reading this poem

it seldom happens that reading something brings tears to my eyes.. but my tears refused to stop after reading to this.. could totally relate to each n every word of this beautiful masterpiece.

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bc123456

@bc123456

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sshirley
wow dr. Babs, I have no words to express my feelings fter reading this poem

it seldom happens that reading something brings tears to my eyes.. but my tears refused to stop after reading to this.. could totally relate to each n every word of this beautiful masterpiece.

Thank u Shirley that was the loveliest compliment I have received 😃

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ttrocks

@ttrocks

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Docji, a very beautiful poem... so emotional and so poignant... Thank you for such lovely verses. Miss you. 🤗

These lines are just superb!! Fighting to find the way with a firm resolve... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

As my strength slowly ebbs away ,
I watch the dark clouds in the sky ,
And then I see that faint silver lining ,
Which I cling to as I make my way ,
As the dawn slowly comes after a dark night ,
I stand on unsteady legs ,
But each step I take ,
My resolve firmer , my feet steadier ,
Yes I will find a way ,
To cross this night , to find the light ,
Dear God , just help me on the way

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