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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pain
The pain that is in me ,
The grief that enfolds me ,
It's as if there is only
darkness and gloom ,
The wound in my heart ,
Only grows deeper ,
With each start ,
Even word written ,
Every hysterical speech ,
Just drives the knife deeper ,
Into my heart ,
As if to tear it apart ,
No solace do I find ,
It's as if every smile is haunted ,
Your ghosts surround me ,
Wonder if I am dead ,
It's as if life is a twilight zone ,
From where neither left nor right ,
Can I turn ,
As if all roads are blocked ,
With the beast still at large ,
My dragons who will slay
As my strength slowly ebbs away ,
I watch the dark clouds in the sky ,
And then I see that faint silver lining ,
Which I cling to as I make my way ,
As the dawn slowly comes after a dark night ,
I stand on unsteady legs ,
But each step I take ,
My resolve firmer , my feet steadier ,
Yes I will find a way ,
To cross this night , to find the light ,
Dear God , just help me on the way


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice poem Dr Bobs..you are a great poet.👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really meaningful poem Doc 😭🤗
Love the way u describe the " Pain " 👏

u Rock Doc 🤗👍🏼

in my life i try to ignore pain , feels it's hurts me a lot and ,make me sick .I always try to be happy as the life is not Long
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Doc! I am speechless👏👏

Feeling that pain in every word😳😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shobha21

Very nice poem Dr Bobs..you are a great poet.👏👏👏


Thank u 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ariyadasa

Really meaningful poem Doc 😭🤗

Love the way u describe the " Pain " 👏

u Rock Doc 🤗👍🏼

in my life i try to ignore pain , feels it's hurts me a lot and ,make me sick .I always try to be happy as the life is not Long


Thank u was written for a friend 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Doc! I am speechless👏👏

Feeling that pain in every word😳😊


Thank u Maam😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very well described pain .. A constant companion in the backdrop of life..
Doc Babs how are u?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice and brilliant masterpiece Doc Babs 👏 The pain can become so powerful sometimes that we tend to take it as our boss. Only thing is just not let it destroy you, it'll go sooner or later. Liked in the end you have shown the desire to come out of it. God's grace can be uplifting.
Well written, great poem 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -deepali17-

Very well described pain .. A constant companion in the backdrop of life..

Doc Babs how are u?


Him deeps great to interact with u , just busy , either working or my newly discovered passion of writing , I get10-15 mins spare, rest is either work or sleeping , how are u ? Miss u 🤗

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