Ashni FF: Mann ki Lagan (2); Chapter 11, Page 88 - Page 15

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Hi Aarti Di 🤗 read the chapter this morning, and now that the two kids in the family are sleeping 😉 am writing here 😃

Hi Swati. Sorry for the late reply, was very busy at office, so could not come here. Thank you so much for he review, in spite of all the problems this week.

About the two kids... the younger one's main mission in life is to eat and sleep... but glad the elder one is also resting now. 😉 That's good 👍🏼

Phew, it was a hard starting of the week, but as all is fine we are here to be relieved more.

Good. I can understand. Thank God.

The chapter is generally dealt with the feelings that Ashni are having in each other's absence.

Yes, you are right. I intended to show how they both still thought about each other even if they did not confess.

Sad and indecisive Ashu, and on the other hand imprecise Nidhi as to what he thinks about her.

Right again. He is sad for letting her go and wants her back. AT the same time he does not think he wants to confess to bring her back... he is just hoping there will be a way for her to come back.

Got emotional over Father daughter convo. Aarti di, daughters are so close to the fathers, and here Nidhi did not get much of his time in her childhood. This has taken away some good moments from them, and this is what they long for even now.

Yes, and there is a lot more of this in chapter 10. Her past will be revealed.

Good to see her father watching his reflection in her. The tears that flow out of love and concern for each other, made me very emotional.

You would have seen the contrast in the father of her childhood to the father he is now... again everything will be revealed in 10

Just two days back, i was sitting with my Papa and he was telling me how i have to take care of bhavit, and the whole family. He told me this is the time to be strong. Love him, love Nidhi's father, love every father, every parent.

Ooops sorry!

No, don'e be. I have spent many good times with my father, so I know. In fact my parents are visiting next month, looking forward to that. 😛 But yes, you will have to be strong for everyone and take care of both your kids. 😳

Liked to watch Ashu talking to the angry Sam who has similar and constant thinking for Nidhi.

Thank you... you know dogs do feel a lot... I have been told this! I believe they are very intelligent. No wonder they are most common pets. And I enjoyed writing that scene a lot 😃

Liked to see Ashu reading himself leaving for home on Diwali. But the noble profession that he is in, makes him go back to save the innumerable kids. Good to see him joining there, but felt so bad for his family front. Some professions need you every time, be it yours or not.

True, and when its about kids, as a pediatrician he cannot say no. But he is very disappointed! He had so many happy reasons to go back this time.

Wud like to see how Ashu manages to get to Lucknow, or get in touch with family and specially Nidhi.

You will soon in the next couple of chapters. 😛

Thank you and luv ya 🤗

Once again thank you so much for your review Swati. Means a lot to me especially when I know you are so busy taking care of your home. 🤗

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Originally posted by: aardhan

Welcome back Suvi Di 🤗

How were your days at your maika? 😃

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Chapter 7 review:

Thank you... thank you... thank you! 😃🤗 So glad to have you back

Talk about a Hatke date!! On a plane no less!! Kya idea hain sirji ka...ya yeh kahu..Aarti ka..😉😆 truly innovative. Loved it. 👏

😳 So glad you liked it...truth is it's inspired... one of my cousins who is an aeronautics engineer has a licence for the past 20 years and he has described some of these things.

Ashutosh: "Don't mention it Nidhi. Your smile is worth this effort!" His mouth was saying this but his intense gaze was saying something else.

Awww...He was way too busy doing

How cute! Perfect! Was literally getting carried away! 😉

"I wanted to wait to talk to you, take things slowly. But now, I will find the right moment and express my feelings today itself and tell you about my past... I cannot wait anymore! I love you Nidhi!"

Shabbash!! Yeh hue na baat!! Bolde bidu..bolde..

Yes... finally made up his mind to spell it out. No more doubt about whether he loved her etc, now he knows for certain. Only thing was he had wanted to take it a little slow but that could not happen because she was leaving.

Ashutosh picked up the Magenta and Teal blue shot colored pure Kanjeevaram silk saree that had a woven jacquard pattern all over with a thick zari border in deep magenta. There was some stonework in the border and Pallu.

I can never describe a costume like this. I don't even know what Teal blue is!! Googled it after reading the chapter. yeah yeah..you can stop laughing now...

Really! 😲 😆 Sorry had to! 😉 And saree description... again inspired from the internet. With a few embellishments of my own 😛

She wanted to go into his arms and her fingers itched to trace that smile on his lips. "I want to spend my life sharing everything with you Ashutosh. I just wish you will open the door to your heart a tiny bit!"

Arre no fikr..he has already for you...😉😆

opened it ok... will he let her in? 😳 But she has completely fallen in love, she has no issues about that. But she is hoping he will indicate something, so far he has played safe even if he has been considerate a few times.

"Oh God! This cannot be happening! I can't do this. What was I thinking trusting a girl again! Shehad said the exact same thing and look what happened later.

Satya naash!! Aarti...fess up and give us his flashback fatafat. There is a good girl...

Don't beat you head so much! 😆 Chapter 11... why he does not trust himself to judge girls or fall in love.

All this blade wala dhamki ! Should I run instead? 😲😉

Water color of Sam... Awww..thats really touching...

Yes, one thing they have in common that they know of. 🤔

Oh God! What have I done! I have to stop her and tell her about my feelings.

ab Nidhi Nidhi chillane se kya fayda?? Jab bolna tha tab nahi bola..ab bhukto...

I can say this too, but to whom will I say it? 😉 😆 True! But everything happens for a reason, right? 😉 And you want to strange him now itself! 😲 😉

Great chapter. Next review some time tomorrow. Today too tired. and sleepy too.

Thank you... it was so much fun. And since I have been so busy this week, I have only today come back to the forum... so you are very fast! 👏

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Chapter 8:

Anjani, this is the first time I am getting this kind of review 😲 Wow! Thanks!

Both are missing each other, why can't they call and talk???

If its anyone else they would have. Here they never had the need to talk, so they did not get the numbers. Now they don't want to make their feelings obvious by asking each other for it, or become gossip by asking others...

It can be general talk like what they are doing, how is Nidhi's mother and Sam missing Nidhi...he can make her talk to Sam on phone...

Yes, he did by email as soon as she reached... so he set the precedence for that.

I think I missed, are they from same place???? They have same home town??😕

No

Sam missing Nidhi is so cute...wish she comes back to them soon...

OMG! This is perfect... way too cute! 👏

Each chapter of yours is like a cliffhanger...

Well... hope it's interesting... and each chapter brings them closer to meeting once more 😃

The fear of Nidhi is about the treatment she got from her father?????

Yes... more like the rejection she faced as a child, though things are different now. But she has that fear, that's why she does not confess outright to AShutosh too. She gives hints to gauge his reaction, but when he does not take the bait she leaves. And its the same reason she does not want to find his number to call him, dos not want to expose herself to that...

Posting over the weekend??

Yes. The same time 😛

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Aarti, Where are you???

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Aarti...Anjani posted her review for my OS in two parts. I threatened to tell you...So here she is!! 😆 She really is scared of me...or is it you?? 😉😆

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Hi Swati...my trip was great. summers are super hot in that area par mazaa aagaya. 😃