Ashni FF: Mann ki Lagan (2); Chapter 11, Page 88 - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Aarti Di 🤗 read the chapter this morning, and now that the two kids in the family are sleeping 😉 am writing here 😃
Phew, it was a hard starting of the week, but as all is fine we are here to be relieved more.
The chapter is generally dealt with the feelings that Ashni are having in each other's absence. Sad and indecisive Ashu, and on the other hand imprecise Nidhi as to what he thinks about her.
Got emotional over Father daughter convo. Aarti di, daughters are so close to the fathers, and here Nidhi did not get much of his time in her childhood. This has taken away some good moments from them, and this is what they long for even now. Good to see her father watching his reflection in her. The tears that flow out of love and concern for each other, made me very emotional. Just two days back, i was sitting with my Papa and he was telling me how i have to take care of bhavit, and the whole family. He told me this is the time to be strong. Love him, love Nidhi's father, love every father, every parent.
Ooops sorry!
Liked to watch Ashu talking to the angry Sam who has similar and constant thinking for Nidhi. Liked to see Ashu reading himself leaving for home on Diwali. But the noble profession that he is in, makes him go back to save the innumerable kids. Good to see him joining there, but felt so bad for his family front. Some professions need you every time, be it yours or not.
Wud like to see how Ashu manages to get to Lucknow, or get in touch with family and specially Nidhi.
Thank you and luv ya 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
[QUOTE=Swatishubh

My reviews some time between today and tomorrow. Definitely before your next update.
Welcome back Suvi Di 🤗
How were your days at your maika? 😃


Hi Swati...my trip was great. summers are super hot in that area par mazaa aagaya. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 7 review:
Talk about a Hatke date!! On a plane no less!! Plane smileys Kya idea hain sirji ka...ya yeh kahu..Aarti ka..😉😆 truly innovative. Loved it. 👏

Ashutosh: "Don't mention it Nidhi. Your smile is worth this effort!" His mouth was saying this but his intense gaze was saying something else.

Awww...He was way too busy doing

"I wanted to wait to talk to you, take things slowly. But now, I will find the right moment and express my feelings today itself and tell you about my past... I cannot wait anymore! I love you Nidhi!"

Shabbash!! Yeh hue na baat!! Bolde bidu..bolde..

Ashutosh picked up the Magenta and Teal blue shot colored pure Kanjeevaram silk saree that had a woven jacquard pattern all over with a thick zari border in deep magenta. There was some stonework in the border and Pallu.

I can never describe a costume like this. I don't even know what Teal blue is!! Googled it after reading the chapter. yeah yeah..you can stop laughing now...

She wanted to go into his arms and her fingers itched to trace that smile on his lips. "I want to spend my life sharing everything with you Ashutosh. I just wish you will open the door to your heart a tiny bit!"

Arre no fikr..he has already for you...😉😆

"Oh God! This cannot be happening! I can't do this. What was I thinking trusting a girl again! Shehad said the exact same thing and look what happened later.

Satya naash!! Aarti...fess up and give us his flashback fatafat. There is a good girl...

Water color of Sam...Dogs smileys Awww..thats really touching...

Oh God! What have I done! I have to stop her and tell her about my feelings.

ab Nidhi Nidhi chillane se kya fayda?? Jab bolna tha tab nahi bola..ab bhukto...

Great chapter. Next review some time tomorrow. Today too tired. and sleepy too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 8:
Both are missing each other, why can't they call and talk???
It can be general talk like what they are doing, how is Nidhi's mother and Sam missing Nidhi...he can make her talk to Sam on phone...
I think I missed, are they from same place???? They have same home town??😕
Sam missing Nidhi is so cute...wish she comes back to them soon...
Each chapter of yours is like a cliffhanger...
The fear of Nidhi is about the treatment she got from her father?????
Posting over the weekend??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepa17

Aarti where are you?

I know you are busy.. Will come back here after my meds as today we have had 2 power failures in the span of 4 hours

What happened Deepa????
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9


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<font color="#6600cc">What happened Deepa????</font>



There was a malfunction in one of the equipments in our sub station..

Every time power goes out I remember the horrifying time we had in October 2012 when we lost power for 10 days in super storm Sandy.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swati62

Loved it. Wonder what will happen next. How will u get them to meet up now. Will Nidhis parents be talking of arranging marriage to Ashutosh or to some other stranger? Waiting for Sunday.

Thank you very much Swati. They will meet, but in sometime...
Nidhi's parents are thinking about her marriage now that her mother is not well.

Thank you and I will post as usual on Sunday 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Friends, thank you all for reading and commenting. But I will have to excuse myself even today. I had a deadline at work today and have been slogging it out all week at the office. So I am very exhausted tonight.
But I will be back tomorrow and will respond to all your comments and reviews. Please bear with me for another day. Thanks again to all of you for reading and commenting! 😃 🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago
@Deepali, hello. I am going to be off even today, very tired.
GN and SD to you.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Chapter 8:

Both are missing each other, why can't they call and talk???
It can be general talk like what they are doing, how is Nidhi's mother and Sam missing Nidhi...he can make her talk to Sam on phone...
I think I missed, are they from same place???? They have same home town??😕
Sam missing Nidhi is so cute...wish she comes back to them soon...
Each chapter of yours is like a cliffhanger...
The fear of Nidhi is about the treatment she got from her father?????
Posting over the weekend??


Aarti...Anjani posted her review for my OS in two parts. I threatened to tell you...So here she is!! 😆 She really is scared of me...or is it you?? 😉😆

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