Ashni FF: Mann ki Lagan (2); Chapter 11, Page 88 - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago

As usual sorry for the late reply Madam ji

So finally Ashu realizing more and more about his love towards nidhi . I like the way you portrayed it into words.

"What should I do now? I miss her already!"He felt as if a heavy weight had settled in his chest - The pain Ashu feels when nidhi is not there with him . ------- as he slowly turned around and walked back to the parking lot dragging his feet along the foot path

Pain of a True lover convert in to words. What a writing style ---------👏👏👏

He was tired of running from his feelings and his love for Nidhi. "I want Nidhi to come back just once! I want to see that beautiful smile light up those angelic eyes one more time. I want to hold her close again and not let her go till she promises to come back here! Please God, at least help me now!"

No Ashu Ashu no you can't say like this to my Sweet heart Sam

"Great! Now even Sam seems unhappy with me! Is there no one I can please?" ( I really misses Ashu - sam - Nidhi Scenes ji )

Nidhi too missing Ashutosh a lot . What a pain suffering by both the sides. It's really nice how you portrayed both Ashu and Nidhi's love to each other. I just love to see it on screen. (the pain of Ashni)

Added to it hugging her father had made her suddenly realize that Ashutosh had hugged her that day on the beach and how secure and loved she had felt in that embrace. She missed him all over again. "How are you Ashutosh? Will you miss me too? Hope you will not forget me!"

Nidhi's feeling towards Ashu. Oh god she gets heart shock when she sees Ashu's name in the mobile screen.

Seeing his name light up on the screen brightened her day too! She closed her eyes and touched the screen all the while assuming that she was touching him in person.

Will Armaan & Nidhi's mother could find the change in Nidhi's mind. Will it happen so soon. So many question coming there to my mind madam ji.

But Nidhi's pre-occupation with her thoughts did not go un-noticed and a couple of times her mother and even Armaan quizzed her about it but all they got was a neutral smile and a nod in the negative.

I love this sam. Sam too love nidhi

Ashutosh: "You want to play fetch? Why? Oh... Sam, you want to go in the car and play fetch... Uh.., With Nidhi?"

Sam: As he heard that name he got up happily, "Woof, woof, woof!"

Anji too love Nidhi's choice.

Anji: "Bhaiya, we got it and I love it. The color is perfect and it looks grand, perfect for the occasion without being too gaudy. I just love it.

Oh will this too be like the chief minister's case in KTLK madam ji😉😆

Bringing credits to both Ashu & Nidhi 😳😳

He soon learnt that one of the state government run schools near KGH had distributed a packet of sweets to every child for Diwali. And about 25 of them had fallen sick and were admitted to KGH.

Lovely chapter .. Aarti ..Love it so much Dear ..

So many questions .. Cannot wait until next update

When Ashu saying this to Nidhi Aarti

Edited by ariyadasa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Review of Chapter 8:
"I want Nidhi to come back just once! I want to see that beautiful smile light up those angelic eyes one more time. I want to hold her close again and not let her go till she promises to come back here! Please God, at least help me now!"

and he is crying now!! Debating on him and along with him.

Lovely song...suits the mood and the scene perfectly. and Sam is angry too One of these days he is sure going to Dogs smileys Ashu for letting Nidhi go. 😆

Baba hugged her! Baba fed her! In all of her almost 27 years Nidhi could never recall a time when her Baba had ever done this! She felt too raw, too strung up then.

So Nidhi has a past connected to her father..Hmmm..thought so. Now which is going to come out first? Ashu's hangups or Nidhi's?? My stories usually have one of the two having an issue. Lekin yaha toh both of them have something. He was partial towards Armaan?? Why?? Don't tell me it was a girl child issue. I won't believe it. He is loving towards her now na. So somewhere along the way he has changed his mind. That much is obvious. He is also proud of her painting and the fact that she takes after him. Well..whatever he did before, right now he is desperately trying to make amends.

Chalo thank God!! Nandini is conscious and fine.

Ashutosh: "You want to play fetch? Why? Oh... Sam, you want to go in the car and play fetch... Uh.., With Nidhi?"

Sam: As he heard that name he got up happily, "Woof, woof, woof!"

Aha..I told you so!! Sam will defo Dogs smileys Ashu... 😆


I can greet her for Diwali and then ask to meet her! I wish I had her phone number? Wonder why it never occurred to me to ask for it!"

Dr Dumbo!! Thats all I can say!! Took her on a date, shopping..dropped her at the airport...but didn't take her number!!


And his trip is cancelled now!!


Well, since they are Ashutosh and Nidhi, they are bound to meet again..sometime.. somewhere..waiting to see how you bring that about. You have brought out Ashu's conflict and sadness very well. Loved it. It was poignant and touching. More than Nidhi's...I like AShu's angle in this chapter.


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Hellos shellos from the north east .. Its been dreary again today cold
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepa17

Sorry just busy .. I think we will meet on Friday in peace

Friday is here Deepali but I am late. Sorry... but hope you are feeling better tonight 😃 And resting
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Originally posted by: Anjani9

We are really getting desperate now...😊

Hai Ram! 😲
Have some patience!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Aarti...

a little delayed but... on the new thread.

My reviews some time between today and tomorrow. Definitely before your next update.

Yeah!! Look who's back... welcome back the roaming forumite! 😃
And thank you for your wishes! 🤗

Thanks

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