Ashni FF: Mann ki Lagan(Th 1); NOTE, Pg 151 - Page 11

Originally posted by: deepa17

Hello Aarti.. I am going off now.. eventful day... now tired ready to crash

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

interesting cont soon

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

waiting

Originally posted by: deepa17

Hello aarti

Originally posted by: Libra

This was a beautiful start Aarti.😃

Thank you so much Anu. What a lovely surprise to see you in this thread! Hope to see you more now 😃

The character of Ashutosh virtually leapt out of screen. I felt as if I was seeing the whole exit and his introspection in front of my eyes. You are an amazing writer.👏

Once again thank you, Glad I could paint a vivid picture for you well enough that you could imagine it.

The story has gripped me immediately. Want to read more. When is the next update.😃

😃 Awesome. Chapter 1 on Saturday night

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

Very interesting prologue Aradhan...the title of this ff is very good ,i liked it very much.

Thank you Vidya. Glad you liked the prologue 😃

you always write well...waiting for your 1st chap.

Thank you so much. First chapter in the weekend

the characters are very interesting and hatke...making the story more intriguing.

Well, I wanted to bring some freshness in by changing the changing the equation among the characters, adding some new and excluding some. Also wanted to differentiate from the show.

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991

Hello Aarti,

Hi Diksha. How are you? Seems like you are super busy with your new job! Do you like it? 😊

How are you? Wow New FF..😃

I am doing fine. Yes... I finally started one! 😆

Will read it on weekends, plzz send me a PM whenever you update..

Ok.. will PM. And weekend is when I plan to update... so it should work with your time too 😃 Looking forward to your comments

Originally posted by: aardhan

😡

Nothing after that small review! 😔

Originally posted by: aardhan

Originally posted by: aardhan