Ashni FF: Mann ki Lagan(Th 1); NOTE, Pg 151 - Page 10

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Originally posted by: sss97

Waiting for it 😊

Will definitely post on Saturday

Originally posted by: suku_07

Wait for some more time 😆

Originally posted by: suku_07

Nice characterization and songs Aarti ji...

Unique and different professions... Much needed change...😳

Thank you so much. Change was definitely what I aimed for! 😃

Ashu Pediatric and Nidhi gynac... I so wanted to see Armaan and Nidhi & Ashu and Anji as siblings... so sweet !! Nice...

Even you like the bro-sis combos. Again wanted to explore something new.

You got one of my most fav numbers in this FF...Esp Sawaar loon...

Hey, I like that song a lot... got very unusual beats 👍🏼

Originally posted by: suku_07

OMG that's too much for just one post...😆

Don't remind me And don't laugh!

Infact I have ditched Chrome now

Anyways No, not read yet..Time not permitting 😳...so review later... Though posted a mini one about the characters and songs 😃

When are you going to do this 'nek' job? Am posting chapter 1 on Sat night (Sun morn) for you... so read the prologue before that!

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Hi Aarti.. Swati has read the prologue .. she will surely come to comment,, may be with first chapter... 😃

Originally posted by: bawaswift

I am very much looking forward to the story now... Yes, let Ashu take sum time to get adjusted to the new atmosphere.. n abt the time.. given to him... 😛😆

And,, i am only trying to get the related songs to the chapters... No problem if songs are not added sumtimes... but i am sure they will give a lovely effect to the FF... Great effort to the start Aarti... I am waiting for the Ashni story 😃

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Thank you Aarti for the FF...😊

Thank you Anjani. Hope to see a lot of comments from you 😊

Thank you Deepa for asking for this FF...😊

😃

Originally posted by: Anjani9

So no Mal in this FF???

Yes, for a change, no Mallika 😆

You made Ashutosh younger...Nice...not much age difference...

Correct, age gap is about 7-8 years 😳

Enjoyed prologue and waiting for next update...when?????

Thank you. Next update is Sat night (Sun morn for you) 😃

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

No Mal???😲 Oh what a disappointment!!!😆

😉 Needed a change so badly Mudra! 😆 Honestly was tired of making her the 'other' woman all the time... or would you have refereed her as Ashu's sister in this one! 😉

Thank you Aarti for starting an FF! 😊

You are welcome... hope your see your comments 😃