Ashni FF: Mann ki Lagan(Th 1); NOTE, Pg 151

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: aardhan

I am very much looking forward to the story now... Yes, let Ashu take sum time to get adjusted to the new atmosphere.. n abt the time.. given to him... 😛😆

And,, i am only trying to get the related songs to the chapters... No problem if songs are not added sumtimes... but i am sure they will give a lovely effect to the FF... Great effort to the start Aarti... I am waiting for the Ashni story 😃

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Thank you Aarti for the FF...😊

Thank you Deepa for asking for this FF...😊

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

I will read in the night and get back to you...

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

So no Mal in this FF???

You made Ashutosh younger...Nice...not much age difference...

Enjoyed prologue and waiting for next update...when?????

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mudraswathi

@mudraswathi

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

No Mal???😲 Oh what a disappointment!!!😆

Thank you Aarti for starting an FF! 😊

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rayafan17

@rayafan17

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Hello Aarti.. I am going off now.. eventful day... now tired ready to crash

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Anu

@Libra

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

This was a beautiful start Aarti.😃

The character of Ashutosh virtually leapt out of screen. I felt as if I was seeing the whole exit and his introspection in front of my eyes. You are an amazing writer.👏

The story has gripped me immediately. Want to read more. When is the next update.😃