OS: Iss raat ki...Chap 7 and epilogue pg 60

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Sagi97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Sorry friends...

What I started was looking like my previous two works and turned out to be a horror flick. Something that the Ramsay brothers would be interested in. My father strictly forbade me to publish it in this forum. I sent it to other people whom I know, they also said the same thing.

My father's opinion of the forum readers is that they are used to sweet type of M&B style stories. Yeh story shayad hazam na kar paaye.

So I am leaving the thread open, the storyline is there, anyone wants to contribute, please go ahead.

Once again, Sorry...

Sagi

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rajanigandha26

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Good one . I loved this pairing Mallika is Mansukhani's girlfriend.🤣
I am going to read it .

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suku_07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Nice one Sagi... I really like the fact that Mallika mata is Mansukhani's girlfriend 🤣... Mudra ji will kill me for sure 😆

Well who else it can be Khushi

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ttrocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

The plot of OS is really nice Sagi!! Mallika-Mansukhani pairing...first time ever in history... 🤣 Trust you to come up with such humorous idea... 👏

The recluse house-owner could be BB who ends up in the house owing to Alzheimer's disease ( just as Dr. Vidya suggested)

How about Anji as the school-teacher with one of the school student that loudmouth khushi... But she would trouble only Mallu, Mansukhani and Dadlani (like Kevin in 'home alone' 😆 )...she would not even look in AshNi's direction...

And let's make Ranganath the detective... Just for fun, Anji could be history-teacher... And Ranga could ask her if her knowledge of history tells her anything about treasure buried in that house... 😆 Then Anji-Ranga pairing!!

Plz dont make it a horror story but a sitcom/comedy of errors... Would love to read a light hearted fun-filled story. 😃 Take care dear!!

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ttrocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: suku_07
Nice one Sagi... I really like the fact that Mallika mata is Mansukhani's girlfriend 🤣... Mudra ji will kill me for sure 😆

Well who else it can be Khushi

Suku... Dont know why but me too remembered khushi here... 🤣 Hi5!! And me too liked the idea of Mallu-Mansu pairing also 🤣 So double hi5 😆

Edited by ttrocks - 11 years ago

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Sagi97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: ttrocks
The plot of OS is really nice Sagi!! Mallika-Mansukhani pairing...first time ever in history... 🤣 Trust you to come up with such humorous idea... 👏

The recluse house-owner could be BB who ends up in the house owing to Alzheimer's disease ( just as Dr. Vidya suggested)

How about Anji as the school-teacher with one of the school student that loudmouth khushi... But she would trouble only Mallu, Mansukhani and Dadlani (like Kevin in 'home alone' 😆 )...she would not even look in AshNi's direction...

And let's make Ranganath the detective... Just for fun, Anji could be history-teacher... And Ranga could ask her if her knowledge of history tells her anything about treasure buried in that house... 😆 Then Anji-Ranga pairing!!

Plz dont make it a horror story but a sitcom/comedy of errors... Would love to read a light hearted fun-filled story. 😃 Take care dear!!

Good idea. Maybe Suku Aunty can write this one.

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Aardhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Sagi, nice ingredients... to me it sounded like a comic/ horror flick!

SOmething like the old movie 'Jaane bhi do yaaro'... the entire movie is told around a bunch of crooks who end up running around town with a dead body in tow and ultimately get wrongly implicated for the murder of that very same person! But utterly hilarious...

And the person missing could be BB's ghost or skeleton or something! 😆

If you can pull it off, it could be a wonderful laughter riot, even better than the last one! 😃

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Sagi97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: aardhan
Sagi, nice ingredients... to me it sounded like a comic/ horror flick!
SOmething like the old movie 'Jaane bhi do yaaro'... the entire movie is told around a bunch of crooks who end up running around town with a dead body in tow and ultimately get wrongly implicated for the murder of that very same person! But utterly hilarious...

And the person missing could be BB's ghost or skeleton or something! 😆

If you can pull it off, it could be a wonderful laughter riot, even better than the last one! 😃

Aunty sent you a pm. Please check and reply.

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suku_07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ttrocks
Suku... Dont know why but me too remembered khushi here... 🤣 Hi5!! And me too liked the idea of Mallu-Mansu pairing also 🤣 So double hi5 😆

Wise gals think alike 🤣 but nothing can Mallu-Mansu pairing 🤣