OS: Iss raat ki...Chap 7 and epilogue pg 60 - Page 48

Originally posted by: Suvika.

great conclusion. loved the way you joined all the dots in the final chapter and the epilogue.

Sukhram...a master player indeed. lol.

Mallika back to her father finally...would she still have nightmares about the skeleton?? i think so...

hahaha..tomato pulp all over the engine...you should have had baingan instead of tomato (just kidding) ...Mallika's barwa baingan still fresh in our memories..

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Read the concluding chapter Sagi. Lovely update as always!! 👏👏👏 Finally everything fell into place... Loved the humorous touch that you never missed to give... 😆😆😆 This OS was really a nice, fun-filled read. Thanks dearie. 😃

Chapter 4 review...

Woohoo...I m loving the suspense. .. everybody is on its way to the house or I should say haunted house...

Now I am scared 😆

In total Ashni had 4 scenes...till this chapter 😲😆

Chapter 5 review...



Wpohoo so finally everybody reached... good good... I love description of the small cottage and also I didnt miss Mallika clinging to Mansukani when they entered 😆

But the last part what was that for 😆 Ashu and nidhi again lost in eachother 😆

Chapter 6 review..

OMG you are building up the suspense quiet nicely... I was actually biting my nails 😆

Anyways nice depiction of all characters... esp Mansukani, dadlani...total fun yaar... 😆

Nowi just hopei dont get nightmares 😉

Originally posted by: suku_07

Awesome ending Sagi ! 👏

very well narrated the events in every room of dark.. Loved Nidhi's guts to go all alone to find out the rest in the house ! Kya baat hai 😆 Guts hi guts...I think she is inspired by you 😆

Finally we know Sukhram did it all...Superb 😆

Ashni are at a safer service station, with so much of tomato pulp in the car engine.. 🤣Kuch aur nahi Sagi 🤣

Anyways awesome story Sagi...😛

Originally posted by: s_danger

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