OS: Iss raat ki...Chap 7 and epilogue pg 60

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok, Friends here is another short story from me. The storyline goes like this.
They soon discover that they are not alone...And something is not quite right about the house.
A adventurous school teacher...
A private detective, convinced that the house has a hidden treasure...
A honeymoon couple, Ashutosh and Nidhi, caught in the rain as their car broke down enroute to somewhere.
And who else? Can you imagine?
Chapter index:
Ch 1 pg 8, ch 2 pg 23 ch 3 pg 28 ch 4 pg 32 Ch 5 pg 38 Ch 6 Pg 55 Ch 7 and epilogue pg 60
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Posted: 11 years ago
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me first..
- my imagination 😉
Edited by Suvika. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suvika.

me first..

- my imagination 😉

Aapki imagination ka bhi jawab nahi. Maine yeh nahi bola ki the house has bhooth in it.
Phir bhi?
Pappa told me not to write this story with horror.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sr dr mathur? suffering from Alzheimer's disease reaches there in the moments of coming and going memory ?
teen crooks money banane aye
ashni hm manane aye
school ke bacche picnic manane aye

these thugs bichado ko milate hai ...qubool hai Sagi ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting...sochna padega
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Baba, with Dadi bua and CV.. ! Since Ashu n Nidhi are away to their HM.. they are on a trip of pilgrimage.. n taken refuge here as they are much tired.
Interesting OS Sagi 👏 Keep going to tell who exactly is there.. Getting excited to know.. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: s_danger

Aapki imagination ka bhi jawab nahi. Maine yeh nahi bola ki the house has bhooth in it.
Phir bhi?
Pappa told me not to write this story with horror.



ab She Devil se poochogi toh aise hi ideas aayenge na..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vidyasabde

sr dr mathur? suffering from Alzheimer's disease reaches there in the moments of coming and going memory ?

teen crooks money banane aye
ashni hm manane aye
school ke bacche picnic manane aye

these thugs bichado ko milate hai ...qubool hai Sagi ?

Kaku me evhade straight vichaar karat nahi...this is a horror story. Sujatha Aunty has said, go ahead and write it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: s_danger

Kaku me evhade straight vichaar karat nahi...this is a horror story. Sujatha Aunty has said, go ahead and write it.


yes..and i still would say write it. and add a disclaimer before you post the chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bawaswift

Baba, with Dadi bua and CV.. ! Since Ashu n Nidhi are away to their HM.. they are on a trip of pilgrimage.. n taken refuge here as they are much tired.

Interesting OS Sagi 👏 Keep going to tell who exactly is there.. Getting excited to know.. 😛

Bawa Uncle good idea...

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