If I should meet thee-part 12 Pg 118

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mudraswathi

@mudraswathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#961

Originally posted by: sshirley
chalo mudra, now I m really off for a few hours..

can we continue both the serious discussion on the ff n our banter, around my tonight around 10-11?

sorry really have some work..

Ok

I am there tomorrow 😳

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

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Posted: 11 years ago

#962

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

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Bawa , please take up next update

Sorry di, for first time saying you NO... 😳

I cant take up this update ahead. The shape that this OS has taken,, i never thought abt it.. But i am happy that its in the best hands of fabulous writers here... who can think n mould the story into a high esteem. 😊

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#963

Thank you Bhavit for the re-comment.

I second Mudra - why dont you take up the next part?

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#964

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Ok

I am there tomorrow 😳

mudra I m here now..

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Aardhan

@aardhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#965

Chapter 8 Review

Bawa, this was an emotional chapter. There were many conflicts, some verbal and some unsaid. First Ashu-Rohan fighting about the obvious...Aryan. Then Rohan shocking Ashu when he suggests adopting Wendy and Ashu is unable to reply. At the same time Anji has suggested the same, and Nidhi is unable to reply.

But then, Nidhi becomes tough for Ashu's sake and states that She is willing to let Aryan go, so Wendy can have a stable home... liked the portrayal of Ashni at night, each lost in their thoughts and unable to sleep, unable to decide. Liked the portrayal of Ashni's love, care and respect for each other's wishes in their conversation and in their dealing with the case.

But again, I did not like Rohan's selfishness... and if he is ready to take in Wendy, why cannot he go to an orphanage and bring home a child who they can raise? I did not like that Rohan wants Aryan back simply because Anji cannot conceive...

Now, some critical questions here... I am Confused here...😕 Here's why??

The most important thing is AShni's discussion... why are they even talking of giving up a child when the court case has not started yet? 😕

In my POV, in a case like this the father (here Rohan) always has the weaker side, even if he is married.

And second, since he gave up Aryan all these years, Ashni should not worry that he will win this case (even if Anji cannot conceive)...

Rohan has two strikes against him... so yes, I am confused at this point.

Its like I lost the connect here... I would not have done this, I would have let this custody case go ahead and later show them settling out of court in presence of lawyers... what should have been here is some discussion between Ashni and a lawyer to figure out legal issues...

At this point in the story Rohan cannot win this case! Ashni have the stronger side, there was no need for them to get all worried and trying to figure out which child should go...

Sorry for being honest here Bawa, hope you do not mind me being critical on this part of the story... just giving my thoughts here as I read this chapter. 😊

Edited by aardhan - 11 years ago

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

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Posted: 11 years ago

#966

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Hi Mudra di.,
I wanted this question to be raised... But no one raised it at that time..
Ashu was given the authority of Wendy by her Grandma.. That means he had some right to think abt her n her future . If he cud find it good in her future life.. then settling an adoption can be done anytime..
I wanted to write abt it in another chapter.. but the twists got another shapes and that matter got dissolved
Finding someone good as a caretaker and good guardians and frnds.. i think that adoption can take place.
How further... gotta think..

Bawa Bhaiya, please clear a point here...
A person either thinks he is a good guardian or not of an orphan child...
Prudently, aap koi bhi bachha uthaa ke nahi le aaoge, jab tak aap iss baat se sure na ho ke u are capable enough to take care of the child.
Now in case of Ashu bringing Wendy home, there are 2 reasons behind... 1 being, he had always taken care of her ever since her parents died in dat mishap, so he was used to it both emotionally n physically..
2nd being, Nidhi too capable enough to take care of wendy in both d ways, as she too had loved the lone kid ever since she was brought in a hampered state after the accident...
So in the eyes of the Ashni couple, they were capable enough to take very good care of both the children together, and luckily both the children were happy together...
Now where has the question raised that Rohan-Anji were to be better guardians than them, when Ashni have already been excellent... There was no 2nd doubt abt the fact dat, both of them were finally very efficient as may be d case wid Rohan... So how does it prove them be better?
Another point, you have been trying to show the story of a lonely child, wo kya Ashni ke saath rehkar nahi ho sakta tha?afterall Wendy is new to this environment too...
Bhaiya, please do not hold any offence against me wid the questions I'm raising... But, like I had told u right after ur update, that, it seems like bachhe koi ball hain, n the adults are playing passing the parcel, without understanding the fact, that the children in hand are living beings with their own strong emotions...
I agree that children are adaptable, but that does not mean to keep moulding them every 5 minutes...
Bachhe phool ki tarah hote hain... Unhe constant tarah ki dhoop-chaaw na mile toh wo bhi murjaane lagte hain...
You must have read those cases I was discussing wid Mudra Aunty... I've seen in real sense, the little children loosing the proper psyche of that a child shud have...
They grow up really quickly, or do not want to grow up at all...

I again am apologising if in any manner I have hurted anybody's sentiments... M sorry yet again...

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#967

Mujhe pata nahi ye FF kya hain...par bacho ki baat chal rahi hain toh Aazeen don't worry agar kal ko tumhaare bache ho aur tumhe nahi chaahiye toh mujhe de dena main unhe paal lungi 🤗 What say?

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#968

Originally posted by: Pardeshi.Mithu
Mujhe pata nahi ye FF kya hain...par bacho ki baat chal rahi hain toh Aazeen don't worry agar kal ko tumhaare bache ho aur tumhe nahi chaahiye toh mujhe de dena main unhe paal lungi 🤗 What say?

Inshallah aisi naubat aayegi nahi ke mujhe apne bachhe dene padein... Dunno wat the future gives, at yet no issues at all bringing up my child...😃

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#969

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Inshallah aisi naubat aayegi nahi ke mujhe apne bachhe dene padein... Dunno wat the future gives, at yet no issues at all bringing up my child...😃

Arre bhai Maasi ki hasiyat se toh unhe holidays main mere paas bhej sakti ho naa????