If I should meet thee-part 12 Pg 118 - Page 84

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Aah! I wish I could open my publication House...😆

No need to increase the font size, my glasses are apt enough for me to read through them...😆

Alright Aunty... No problem... Write as much as U want, its just dat the story is flowing so beautifully,that I wish to continue reading it...
Thanks a lot to bring out the story so beautifully... 👏

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

You will have your own publishing house definitely Aazeen.. One day for sure! and you will remember my name too that day!
(See I am so good... I am not asking to keep my name to it! 😉😆)

I feel story is steered to a different direction everytime with each writer. So there is nothing good or better here.!

Suku wanted Rohan to understand Ashutosh's importance for Aryan. But I understood in a different way.

Your style of writing is making things clear with day-to-day happenings.

I write as a third person watching from a distance and over a period.

But, as I see, the readership here is mostly comprised of youngsters and would show more enthusiasm towards romantic updates. From that view, it is better youngsters write and take up the story ahead!😳

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Mudra Aunty,

I was a 10 year old kid,when my mommy opened a school at the residence... And I have seen my mother taking tutions, ever since I had the sense to understand, as it is almost 10 years myself teaching children younger than me... Have seen batches after batches, children of different kinds, natures, and circumstances. Not to mention, children of separated parents too, n my biggest concern,more than those parents have been of those innocent babies...
I remember, a few of them. A 3 year old baby was sitting on my mother's lap on the first day of her school. And to divert her mind out of crying my mother asked about her parents. And the 1st sentence that came out of that innocent baby's mouth was- Papa mummy ko maarte hain... Mummy bohot roti hain...

My mother helplessly looked at me, the effect of her parents's emotional separation on her seem so palpable... Althroughout her schooling here, we have seen her as a very quiet and lost child,even after her parents reconciled...

The boys of these kinds, on the other hand seem more indiciplined and unruly...

As a teacher, as a guru, we have tried our best to bring out the kid's creative skills,happiness... Have tried to love them a little more than the normal kids, coz they are deprived of it...
And your words at the end of the update,where u said the parents need councelling is absolutely true... Because the kid is at a very sensitive stage that no matter how much u councel them,they have to go back into an ugly environment, that their parents have made...
Instead of curing the dying leaves of the plant, the root cause needs a cure...
True... Very true...

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Mudra di n Aazeen, sorry that i am interrupting in your convo...

But.. Mudra di, there is no question of young readership here ..! I have read your update as the next chapter of the story.. n its relatively so perfect. Rohan has to understand this reality that Aryan belongs to Ashni.. and Anji in your update has understood this so well. One trigger will make even Rohan reach that phase of mind. I also had this in my mind that Rohan will at last duly comes to the reality.. this way or the other.

Abt the romance... Yes, every story consists of that.. but it also contains real life matters.. and what you have shown here are those life matters to which the love story will emerge out again. Every story needs to have an experienced mind.. and we have got that in your writings ! 😃

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

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Originally posted by: mudraswathi

You will have your own publishing house definitely Aazeen.. One day for sure! and you will remember my name too that day!
(See I am so good... I am not asking to keep my name to it! 😉😆)

I feel story is steered to a different direction everytime with each writer. So there is nothing good or better here.!

Suku wanted Rohan to understand Ashutosh's importance for Aryan. But I understood in a different way.

Your style of writing is making things clear with day-to-day happenings.

I write as a third person watching from a distance and over a period.

But, as I see, the readership here is mostly comprised of youngsters and would show more enthusiasm towards romantic updates. From that view, it is better youngsters write and take up the story ahead!😳

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Very disturbing case Aazeen

I had experience with young Bangladeshi brides abondoned by their so-called one night (may be few nights) husbands in mumbai. There were so many workers illegally entered into Indian territories and trying to make a living here as construction workers.

A boy about 7/8 year old (whose mom is 22 year old) sat outside their dwelling to invite 'people'.. for his mother's dhandha... there were many exploitation cases of this sort.

These people had no legal cover here... No way they could get any alimony... but need to lead the life. I used to write letters for them and try to employ them as house maids...

One may ask me... whether I was helping illegal entries... but, I was sad to see the plight of small children doing such things...

Stories such as these really put you off... and worried... what can we do in such conditions!

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

This case too seems more disturbing Aunty...
One cannot imagine the psychology of such kids... Totally disturbed...
Have seen Cases of Crime Patrol on such Bangladeshi women... The scarcity of resources and livelihood is so disturbing there, that cities and lifestyles here in Mumbai seems alluring, n without knowing the aftereffects, those teenage girls run away wid those scoudrels, for their 'fun' is really-really painful... Those ladies too need councellings... Real councellings... And what do u think such children grow up into?

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Not every lady is as strong as Nidhi is...
Here is another case of a boy in our school... A 4 year old boy named Subur...
He was given admission in class Pre-Nursery, when he was some 2 and a half years old. A happy-go-lucky boy...
His father one day was found to have an extra-marital affair wid his own saali... The wife was distraught learning the fact...
Neither her husband,nor her sister understood her pain...
A distressed mind in a home to diseases... And she started remaining sick... A patient of tuberculoses, after an unsuccessfuul fight against it, died soon, leaving a 3 year old boy behind...
Not to mention what the child turned into in this short span... A total quiet,lost, unhealthy, and totally disturbed in studies...
After a year of her death, the father married his saali, whom the child has started calling - 'Nayi Mummy' is trying to adjust into a new gloomy environmet...