If I should meet thee-part 12 Pg 118 - Page 85

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Who's writing next?

Azeen ... Azeen... Azeen..

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Who's writing next?

Tum phir kisi aur ke thread main aa gayi!!! 😉 Samjha karo Aazeen 😉

Originally posted by: Pardeshi.Mithu

Tum phir kisi aur ke thread main aa gayi!!! 😉 Samjha karo Aazeen 😉

Tum abhi tak jaagi ho? 😲
Meko Messenger par reply kyu nahi kiya?

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

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Forget it...😆
Want someone better to write... I strongly feel, I'll spoil the story...

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Forget it...😆
Want someone better to write... I strongly feel, I'll spoil the story...

Har koi aisa hi kyon sochte hai

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Har koi aisa hi kyon sochte hai

Pansy kahan hain? Unse boliye... She hasn't written a word of an an update after starting dis thread... 😆 😆

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Pansy kahan hain? Unse boliye... She hasn't written a word of an an update after starting dis thread... 😆 😆

Pansy is not that active on the forum now a days due to personal reasons.😳

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Pansy is not that active on the forum now a days due to personal reasons.😳

Ok... I will see to it...

Mudra I just came around to reading it... I loved it.. just love your realistic touches..

Originally posted by: sshirley

Mudra I just came around to reading it... I loved it.. just love your realistic touches..

more than anything loved the last para - the school principal's thoughts - frankly tthese were exactly wat I had last few chapters - the four so called adults - wat the heck r they doing? the poor kids are being played along like footballs - kabhi is ghar me, toh kabhi us ghar me - aren't they taking the 'bache kachi mitti ki tarah hote hain' theory too far - okay children can be moulded n they easily accept new surroundings given love n attention, but how many times they have to ajust or mould themselves - certainly not every other day/..

wat abt the basic security any child needs?

so, I loved this chapter..

but but, I m disappointed that u did not continue from the cliffhanger in previous chapter by suku.. I feel disappointed that I donot know how that crisis was dealt with.

.and that madam is my extremely frank review.

Thank you very much Shirley!.. Exactly this is what even I felt.. Why these adults are unaware of child's mental state. I was refraining myself raising that point, because many writers and each one have our own rationale behind our writing. I was waiting for the story to unflod with everything. But my turn has come a bit early. Hence I was apprehensive about my update. Wondering.. am I not hurting someone else's storyline!😳

Thank you very much for liking the update and a detailed review.

Actually, why I have not continued from the cliffhanger... I thought, Aryan locking himself inside the room is the starting of his stubborn behaviour...and Rohan is almost pushing towards that behaviour. Plus otherwise, he is a very adjusting child... so, he would comeout eventually..when hungry.

I totally agree. It was my mistake... not to be in contact with Suku. 😔

another point... ofcourse, I thought now... Is it good on Rohan's part to agree every single demand of Aryan? Aryan is a child... may be Rohan should realise Ashutosh's need for Aryan.. but need not immediately respond. Children need coaxing as well... Anyway, this is not an explanation for not carryingout Suku's lead!

I am so happy... even with hectic schedule, you took time to come here!😳👏