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sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#851

Thanks mudra for your prompt reply.

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sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#852

Next writer - I have a good idea to continue where Mudra has left.

So, if you don't mind my butting in, kindly let me know who is writing and I can pm you.

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 11 years ago

#853

I'm not pretty sure, if I'm capable enough to write the story... M at yet young enough to understand the minute details on my own...
At yet,if suggestions any, Shirley di, pm me... If I'll be able to write will surely try my best...
Iske baad bhi I'm very clearly asking, if anyone... Simply asnyone else wants to write, they shall take the story further... I'm taking because nobody else is...
Do let me know...

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sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#854

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
I'm not pretty sure, if I'm capable enough to write the story... M at yet young enough to understand the minute details on my own...
At yet,if suggestions any, Shirley di, pm me... If I'll be able to write will surely try my best...
Iske baad bhi I'm very clearly asking, if anyone... Simply asnyone else wants to write, they shall take the story further... I'm taking because nobody else is...
Do let me know...

Hi Aazeen, actually I m sorry but I think, I am taking up the part.. actually a small part

hope u don't mind. but somehow the scene is so clear in my mind.. that I feel like inspite of having no time

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Posted: 11 years ago

#855

Originally posted by: bawaswift

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Aardhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#856

Chapter 7 Review

Poonam, its almost a month ago now since I gave you a brief comment about this chapter in my thread. Finally I have reached your chapter in this FF...

So, once again I like the bond and concern you have shown between Ashni. I like that they respect each other's priorities and responsibilities... like Nidhi welcoming Wendy in her house even if she was in the midst of such a big mental turmoil. And Ashu, inspite of bringing Wendy and trying to make her comfortable in this house, noticing something was amiss with Nidhi.

Liked the restraint you have shown between the couple that they waited for the children to sleep before opening up and discussing Aryan's issue now. Liked how you have shown that some one as strong as Nidhi too can break down at times and needs that special person to hold herself together and AShu, in this case very ably extended his support... and rightly assured her that he will do his best so Aryan will stay with them...

So the stage is set now for a fight for the little boy... the only thing is this whole situation itself, the idea of using a child as a pawn in this power play by the adults itself is a situation I am not comfortable with, but I know it happens, especially among divorced couples... and here its Rohan and his bloated ego that has set this ball in motion...

So, waiting to read the next chapter now...😊

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 11 years ago

#857

Originally posted by: sshirley

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Hi Aazeen, actually I m sorry but I think, I am taking up the part.. actually a small part

hope u don't mind. but somehow the scene is so clear in my mind.. that I feel like inspite of having no time

Absolutely no issue... 😃 I have said right at d beginning only, who so ever wants to take up... Please go ahead...

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sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#858

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Absolutely no issue... 😃 I have said right at d beginning only, who so ever wants to take up... Please go ahead...

Thanks Aazeen... chalo brace urself for yawns n boredom

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 11 years ago

#859

Originally posted by: sshirley

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Thanks Aazeen... chalo brace urself for yawns n boredom

No-no... It won't happen... 😆 😆
I have read you enough to know, I wud neither be yawning nor be borte reading u...
Bring it on...
But how long will it take?

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sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#860

well aazeen 3-4 din me kabhi bhi.. it can be within a very few hours or may be 4 days later.. mujhe khud ko hi mera schedule ka koi idea nahi rehta aajkal.

do I have to tell pansy in advance or just pm her when I post?

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