If I should meet thee-part 12 Pg 118 - Page 82

Originally posted by: bawaswift

What an update Mudra di ! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 This continuation has given the right meaning to the story.. the needs n feelings of the kids are shown very thoughtfully ! ⭐️

Aryan's plight.. Anji is aware of his behavior, but Rohan in his dreamy world, doesnt wants to see that.. Nidhi n Ashu are taking all possible measures to meet him once in a week now.. and Wendy is looking into the matter helplessly.. What will be the outcome of this ? I am worried along with everyone here...

His mental trauma of living with Rohan n not with Ashni n Wendy.. Even the enthu is fading with time. A very hard time for him.. Only that his teacher is requesting the Princi for the help...

I wanna admit one thing here.. Some kids are more noticed by their teachers.. cos back home, either the parents have no time for them.. or some probs are covering the home ground so much that the kids dont show up much at home.. But teachers can visualise with their attendance, their progress reports n behavior in the class.. An irony,, isn't it ?

The strange case is open to the world now.. and not shocking are your words.. So apt, perfect and valuable...

What a Shame!!!!!
Not the child... adults need counselling!

Very nicely woven chapter Mudra Di ! Who wont like your update ? Its the best move ahead.. Now the next part can tell the solution to all this mess. ! At least, some suggestions can come to rescue Aryan, Nidhi n Ashu ! Wendy.. This cute character.. i am loving her attitude towards the life.. ! Wanna see her efforts to make the family once again a happiest one.. 😊

Good move.. with so much clear to the throat for Rohan here..he must think now.. its high time.. for his own biological son !

Thank you for liking Bawa!

but I am not very sure of my self!😳

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Thank you for liking Bawa!

but I am not very sure of my self!😳

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Why not sure Mudra di ? You have written so well ! Why saying so ?

Any writer wud take it as perfect ! I am only a reviewer, bad or good.. But i can say that you have written an apt thought to the story so far.. cos this was coming out of the every updates.. Aryan n his life.. ! And you have shown his plight n mental behavior fine thru !

😊

Thank you Bawa!

Very heart wrenching update!

What a Shame!!!!!
Not the child... adults need counselling!

Nice continuation after Suku's update 👏

Originally posted by: pansy123

Very heart wrenching update!

What a Shame!!!!!
Not the child... adults need counselling!

Nice continuation after Suku's update 👏

Thank you Pansy

I was worried about the reactions of everyone and so far they are good😃

Mudraji.. Fantabulous .. You have brought out some of the ailments of the western world very articulately.

Most kids suffer and then they withdraw into a shell.

What an entanglement there is here.. Wonder whether the next update would resolve some or add more fuel to the fire..

superb update di..👏

Originally posted by: deepa17

Mudraji.. Fantabulous .. You have brought out some of the ailments of the western world very articulately.

Most kids suffer and then they withdraw into a shell.

What an entanglement there is here.. Wonder whether the next update would resolve some or add more fuel to the fire..

Thank you very much deepa! This is really a pathetic situation and glad I could point out through this story!

I know.. I have left a tough lead to the next writer!

I sincerely wish Pansy/Suvika take up the next!

Originally posted by: gargpoo

superb update di..👏

liked last lines..

"what a shame"

Not the child..adults need counselling👏awesome

Thank you very much poonam!🤗