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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Arre saasu maa ji... I'm tempted to write... Par I already have an assignment on my update... Abhi yaad aaya ke bechaare ko bhi likhna hai... Have not even written one page of it...

Haalaki, main aadhe ghante mein iss wale ff ka ek update de sakti hu... Phir b... Determining myself 2 write my chapter only.. Want to finish d ff...



koi baat nahi... aaj aur kal apna likho.

tab tak Alka and pansy will hold the fort.. baad mein yeha aana.. OK?😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: mudraswathi



koi baat nahi... aaj aur kal apna likho.

tab tak Alka and pansy will hold the fort.. baad mein yeha aana.. OK?😃

haan pakka... Mood change ho gaya toh abhi b aa jaungi... Lets c...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: parmarA

Ok i will take this resposibility

Arnav is Mandira's son and Anji took his responsibility as she don't have child.

But now Anji is pregnant.Nidhi is too taking care of that child from childhood he addressing her as mom.

Ashutosh is dean in the KGH and went to attend the seminar at Lucknow..


Agar achhi lage toh theek warna gaya var khali


But pansy can write it more beautifully

But Alkaben, Pansy has already mentioned that Nidhi was six months pregnant when she landed in london with her hubby. Now if Aryan is her adopted son then she might have had premature & stillborn baby... MC at 6 months would be grave for mommy too and dont wish to see Nidhi in so much pain; so avoiding such possibility. Then the only option is Nidhi lost that child - if not stillborn then maybe when he was 2/3 years old and she couldnt bear this tragic loss... So Mandira let her adopt her son who is same age of Nidhi's own son... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: ttrocks

But Alkaben, Pansy has already mentioned that Nidhi was six months pregnant when she landed in london with her hubby. Now if Aryan is her adopted son then she might have had premature & stillborn baby... MC at 6 months would be grave for mommy too and dont wish to see Nidhi in so much pain; so avoiding such possibility. Then the only option is Nidhi lost that child - if not stillborn then maybe when he was 2/3 years old and she couldnt bear this tragic loss... So Mandira let her adopt her son who is same age of Nidhi's own son... 😊



hey bhagwan.. so many twists... i am lost..

who is arnav? is he aryan (misspelt?)

already it is said, rohan and nidhi's son he is..

or am i missing something?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Pansy i am trying to give next part but forgive me if people do not like it.


Nidhi to Aryaan: Beta aryan,we are living in London.But i told you the stories of Lord Krishana na?Krishna bhagwan devaki ke bete the na fir bhi Yashoda maiya ne unhe apne bete ki tarah pala na?she gave him love like mother.So,it's happen beta.When you born i got chance to do my PG.And Anji masi and Rohan uncle settled here only to take care of yours.So,icould complete my PG beta.

Aryaan: I am sorry mom.But what about my father?

Nidhi: Beta you know na he is dean in London Medical college and the laws are too strict here.Dean had so many responsibilites so he couldn't spend time with us.

Tabhi Anji ka ghar aa gaya.

Rohan ne Aryan ko bulaya.Lekin Aryan ne Anji ko pahele hug kiya aur bola,"Maasi,i am sorry."

Anji got confused and she saw at Nidhi.Nidhi signed her to calm down.

Nidhi was going to hopital

Nidhi remembered her past.

Before a year.

Nidhi: Aap humare liye bilkul waqt nahi nikal sakte na?

Ashutosh: Nidhi,tumhe pata hai na dean hona kitni responsibilities ka kaam hai.Don't you know?And main toh sirf kaam me busy reheta hoo

Nidhi: lekin Aaryan ka toh sochiye?woh bacha hai abhi.Uski har chhoti chhoti progress ke liye humara appreciation aur support deserve karta hai.Main toh hoti hoo lekin aap nahi hote mere sath.Agar woh aise hi bada hone laga toh woh apne aap me akela pad jayega.

Ashutosh: toh main kya karoo?sab chhod ke baithu?

Nidhi: Aapki responsibilty bhi hai na uske prati?

Ashutosh: first i am doctor and then a father.

Nidhi: so you leave with your responsibility and i will take care of him.Lekin agar use aapse milna julana achha na lage aur Rohan aur Anji ki taraf uska zukaav rahe toh muze mat kehena ki maine achhi parvarish nahi ki.Bec main bhi dr hoo lekin main apni responsibilty se bhaag nahi sakti.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: mudraswathi



hey bhagwan.. so many twists... i am lost..

who is arnav? is he aryan (misspelt?)

already it is said, rohan and nidhi's son he is..

or am i missing something?

Mudraji, Aryan is misspelt as Arnav, it seems. And, I dont believe, Rohan is biological father of Aryan. From whatever little info Pansy has given in ch-1, it's highly unlikely acco. to me that Aryan is NiHan's son.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: parmarA

Pansy i am trying to give next part but forgive me if people do not like it.



Nidhi to Aryaan: Beta aryan,we are living in London.But i told you the stories of Lord Krishana na?Krishna bhagwan devaki ke bete the na fir bhi Yashoda maiya ne unhe apne bete ki tarah pala na?she gave him love like mother.So,it's happen beta.When you born i got chance to do my PG.And Anji masi and Rohan uncle settled here only to take care of yours.So,icould complete my PG beta.

Aryaan: I am sorry mom.But what about my father?

Nidhi: Beta you know na he is dean in London Medical college and the laws are too strict here.Dean had so many responsibilites so he couldn't spend time with us.

Tabhi Anji ka ghar aa gaya.

Rohan ne Aryan ko bulaya.Lekin Aryan ne Anji ko pahele hug kiya aur bola,"Maasi,i am sorry."

Anji got confused and she saw at Nidhi.Nidhi signed her to calm down.

Nidhi was going to hopital

Nidhi remembered her past.

Before a year.

Nidhi: Aap humare liye bilkul waqt nahi nikal sakte na?

Ashutosh: Nidhi,tumhe pata hai na dean hona kitni responsibilities ka kaam hai.Don't you know?And main toh sirf kaam me busy reheta hoo

Nidhi: lekin Aaryan ka toh sochiye?woh bacha hai abhi.Uski har chhoti chhoti progress ke liye humara appreciation aur support deserve karta hai.Main toh hoti hoo lekin aap nahi hote mere sath.Agar woh aise hi bada hone laga toh woh apne aap me akela pad jayega.

Ashutosh: toh main kya karoo?sab chhod ke baithu?

Nidhi: Aapki responsibilty bhi hai na uske prati?

Ashutosh: first i am doctor and then a father.

Nidhi: so you leave with your responsibility and i will take care of him.Lekin agar use aapse milna julana achha na lage aur Rohan aur Anji ki taraf uska zukaav rahe toh muze mat kehena ki maine achhi parvarish nahi ki.Bec main bhi dr hoo lekin main apni responsibilty se bhaag nahi sakti.


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Nice progress AlkašŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Dear Pansy, this new ff/os is very interesting. It has lots of info to be revealed and lots of possibilities to be explored. Ur chapter has already intrigued me... 😊 Plz. take it fwd soon. Ever since, I read it , I have been thinking of it... Nidhi was expectant mommy when she landed in london 6 yrs back and was with hubby. She was due in just 3 months. Now my brain is flooded with many questions... Is Aryan posthumously born child?? Or his father has gone missing for some reason or has deserted Nidhi and Aryan?? Aryan calls Rohan his papa and Anji (Nidhi's childhood friend) is Rohan's wife. She seems expectant (maybe) -- inferring so from these lines:

"We are good Anji...let me know if you need anything...I can get on my way"

"No Nidhi! We don't need anything and why you bothering... Rohan is here...he'll get if we need anything...

Or she may not be expecting. But Rohan surely doesnt seem to be Aryan's biological father... If that is the case then Anji as Nidhi's "sautan"... 😲😲 Nidhi's childhood friend, marrying her hubby... seems quite unconvincing... At least Pansy cannot give such weird situations... And, in that case Nidhi's bonhomie with Anji and Anji's concerns for Aryan and Nidhi (dropping Aryan at hers and looking after her duty etc) seem totally awkward... Usually its not seen that women could accept "sautan" this nicely... And this dialogue from Nidhi contradicts (actually negates) such a possibility for me:

"Thank you Anji! I don't know how I'd have survived without you and Rohan being there for us"

Nidhi strongly declares to Aryan that Anji is his Massi and not stepmom but Anji is Aryan's father Rohan's wife... šŸ˜• Maybe Aryan calls Rohan Papa just like Ashu called BB his baba in the show - as a fatherfigure?? Still Nidhi's parents r not introduced... and where is my Ashuji?? If nidhi is there in story; for me, Ashuji has to be there as her hubby... AshNi together forever!! Like heer-ranjha, shirin-farhaad and layla-majnun, for me ashu-nidhi r immortal and eternal... 😳 Waiting for my Ashuji for my Nidhi in this OS... And plz. unfold the story asap.. dont give assignments plz... Loved ur chpater... interesting and intriguing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: parmarA

Pansy i am trying to give next part but forgive me if people do not like it.



Nidhi to Aryaan: Beta aryan,we are living in London.But i told you the stories of Lord Krishana na?Krishna bhagwan devaki ke bete the na fir bhi Yashoda maiya ne unhe apne bete ki tarah pala na?she gave him love like mother.So,it's happen beta.When you born i got chance to do my PG.And Anji masi and Rohan uncle settled here only to take care of yours.So,icould complete my PG beta.

Aryaan: I am sorry mom.But what about my father?

Nidhi: Beta you know na he is dean in London Medical college and the laws are too strict here.Dean had so many responsibilites so he couldn't spend time with us.

Tabhi Anji ka ghar aa gaya.

Rohan ne Aryan ko bulaya.Lekin Aryan ne Anji ko pahele hug kiya aur bola,"Maasi,i am sorry."

Anji got confused and she saw at Nidhi.Nidhi signed her to calm down.

Nidhi was going to hopital

Nidhi remembered her past.

Before a year.

Nidhi: Aap humare liye bilkul waqt nahi nikal sakte na?

Ashutosh: Nidhi,tumhe pata hai na dean hona kitni responsibilities ka kaam hai.Don't you know?And main toh sirf kaam me busy reheta hoo

Nidhi: lekin Aaryan ka toh sochiye?woh bacha hai abhi.Uski har chhoti chhoti progress ke liye humara appreciation aur support deserve karta hai.Main toh hoti hoo lekin aap nahi hote mere sath.Agar woh aise hi bada hone laga toh woh apne aap me akela pad jayega.

Ashutosh: toh main kya karoo?sab chhod ke baithu?

Nidhi: Aapki responsibilty bhi hai na uske prati?

Ashutosh: first i am doctor and then a father.

Nidhi: so you leave with your responsibility and i will take care of him.Lekin agar use aapse milna julana achha na lage aur Rohan aur Anji ki taraf uska zukaav rahe toh muze mat kehena ki maine achhi parvarish nahi ki.Bec main bhi dr hoo lekin main apni responsibilty se bhaag nahi sakti.


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Great Alkaben!! A different angle to this story!! Papa Ashu is more career-oriented and less family-oriented... But Nidhi balances her home and career both... šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Alka JI lovely šŸ‘ Thank you! I'm so grateful you in your busy schedule snatched time to take this assignment forward...love you.

Now coming to chap I feel a little deviation which if you can correct please... a little edit can do...I think you missed Aryan calls Rohan Papa...so he doesn't know Ashutosh. He feels as his father has married to Anji she is his step mom.

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