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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: vidyasabde
Ana that was too good...pl continue.

pl think about one ff after this na!

thanku vidya...
happy that u liked this story so far...
and as for ff...i dont know...mostly no one is interested so i will just post os's...
take cae dear...

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: sonyjknum
So beautifully written,please dont end so soon,,make it longer,please

oh dear...
but its an os...cant stretch it much...
but glad that u liked it till now... :)

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Jayasree

@jayasree.rao

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Ana,

A beautiful OS ,making us understand the inner turmoil of two people loving each other truly but are not allowed to become one by family .

I wonder when people understand these feelings and allow them to become one.

You are a good writer of emotions Ana, pl. continue.

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Swati Mehta

@swati62

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

That' was a lovely OS waiting for the last episode.

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao
Ana,

A beautiful OS ,making us understand the inner turmoil of two people loving each other truly but are not allowed to become one by family .

I wonder when people understand these feelings and allow them to become one.

You are a good writer of emotions Ana, pl. continue.

thank you so much dear
yes...i intend to show you how miserabe the seperation was for them...
i m glad those emotions reached out to you...
😳

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: swati62
That' was a lovely OS waiting for the last episode.

thanku so much swati...
last part will b here by tonight😳😃

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Tyro

@Tyro

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

cant wait for the next part//

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saibanu

@saibanu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

This is such a beautiful piece of writing Ana , too good ⭐️

This touched my heart , so nicely you portrayed inner turmoil of Ashu and Nidhi ...But please give a happy ending to this OS ...cant see them suffering so much

Please continue karo , will be waiting 😃