OS: The Rain & My Man (Part 4 / Page 19) - Page 6

Originally posted by: pansy123

I wrote one before on BTOOMH thread you missed that?

Keep writing you are superb.

nah...I noticed...
but these lines, prove you more one of them...😊

Am going to read the 2nd part now...😊

Loved the way you made rain reminiscent of her love...the cold wet drops of rain against the coldness of her pain. Aah!

Her plight and inner turmoil, the tussle she is caught in as a beloved and as a daughter, I actually felt that. And her ultimate surrender ...Oh God!... "All my pain, just belongs to me now..."

In second part loved the line... "Why don't people take love in its purest form.

The heart-to-heart love instead of worrying about people, society and world."

And with these words you've made my heart sink...

My heart sink and my eyes teard up before a painful hicup escaped from my mouth and I cried.

I lost him, forever.

Continue soon... Loved it.

Again hangover..not fair..!! but loved this part even more. Their pain is heartwrenching..pls unite them..

Hey Ana, Don't tell me you are giving a tragic end to this story...

Ana that was too good...pl continue.

Originally posted by: pansy123

Loved the way you made rain reminiscent
of her love...the cold wet drops of rain against the coldness of her pain. Aah!

Her plight and inner turmoil, the tussle she is caught
in as a beloved and as a daughter, I actually felt that. And her ultimate
surrender ...Oh God!... "All my pain, just belongs to me now..."

In second
part loved the line... "Why don't people take love in its purest form.



The heart-to-heart love instead of worrying about people, society and world."</b>

<b>And with these words you've made my heart sink...

My heart sink and my eyes
teard up before a painful hicup escaped from my mouth and I cried.



I lost him, forever.

Continue soon... Loved it.

thanku so much dear for liking...
am glad you pick the references and inter relate them...
Nidhi is broken in between her family and her love...
thats a cruel reality really...no one accepts the love in its actual form...
am happy u liked this update dear...
next one will follow tomorrow

So beautifully written,please dont end so soon,,make it longer,please

Originally posted by: Amu_05

Again hangover..not fair..!! but loved this part even more. Their pain is heartwrenching..pls unite them..

haha...the part was getting longer so i stopped here...
awee...dont worry...i like n write happy ending stories... :D

Originally posted by: Anjani9

<font color="#ff0066">Hey Ana, Don't tell me you are giving a tragic end to this story...</font>

<font color="#ff0066">Cried reading part 1 & 2😭, please make us smile reading part 3...</font>

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<font color="#ff0066">Anji helped them meet...she is a true friend...</font>

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<font color="#ff0066">Nidhi is not leaving any chances...😳</font>

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<font color="#ff0066">Ashu is Ashu...worried about CV, DB and concerned for Nidhi's health and future...</font>

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<font color="#ff0066">Emotions have come out very well...brought tears...that showsskill of Author...</font>

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<font color="#ff0066">When are you giving us nextpart...but only one more part?</font>

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<font color="#ff0066"><strong>Madeour weekend interesting...Thank you...🤗</font>

ohoo anjani...have i ever wrote a sad ending story???
will surly make u happy in part 3
anji is a true frnd...n if u ask me, i will say hero of this os
nidhi is not gonna agree with anyone... ;)
n ashu is our usual ashu...
glad that u felt those emotions dear...
n yes only one part...
am glad i could do something to make u happy...
tak care dear... hugss