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sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#701

Originally posted by: suku_07

Arre baba meine avie kaha tha, I didnt mean that.. aur waise bhi for me a chapter with good content is hot.. I dint mean hot and sizzing romance..

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Hey Gals, its so easy to tease u na?

When I am not gonna give sizzling scenes of even AshNi, then, how can I give AshMal Hot romance? huh?

@Bold, Of course I understood that Sukirti, but could not let go of such a chance to tease u na.. 😆

Hehe I really thought you changed your mind.. 😆

Changed my mind regarding what? writing this ff or not giving hot scenes?

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sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#702

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Haan bhai writer ki cap peheni hai toh responsibilty bhi toh nibhani padegi.. Waise kal pakka review mil jayega... promise..

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#703

Good night friends, have to go out again tomorrow morning... so would login in the afternoon or evening.

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rayafan17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#704

Shirley ... We will be waiting...

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#705

Originally posted by: deepa17
Shirley ... We will be waiting...

Deepa, M really sorry. I don't like to make my precious readers wait. but m helpless

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suku_07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#706

Originally posted by: sshirley

Changed my mind regarding what? writing this ff or not giving hot scenes?

Regarding giving hot scenes...😆

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suku_07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#707

Originally posted by: sshirley

Wait for few moments, after this will type your review only !! 😆 I think !! 😆

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suku_07

@suku_07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#708

Haaye finally as in FINALLY I am writing the review of chapter 2

Firstly, I analysed your chapter and after so many days I came to the conclusion that I LIKE YOUR CHAPTER hehe Chalo jokes a part I really liked your chapter...

As a writer you have the power to have a grip on the reader, and that is commendable !! 👏 I really thought Rohan is pretty serious and so is Nidhi... really liked the way you built up the suspense on the same and later wrapped it up 👏... You know I am liking this Nidhi or may be I want to see how she reacts later when she will actually get her true love...will she accept it or will ran for the money !! You have realistically portrayed Nidhi in this coz these days many girls think like this only👏...

I really like Ashu-Baba-Armaan convo... YOU have ONE specialty... you write it and I imagine it... I could really imagine SK-AN-NP playing their roles !!

I liked the visit to Swami ji, kya filmi meeting thi boss, kiss movie se churayi 😆... Mallu and Ashu taking blessing and when Swami ji actually gave one Nidhi came😆 !! So in this Ashu knows everything the meaning if Sanskrit matra and the blessings he gave to Ashni not Ashmal !! Kya baat hai... I think in this Ashu is going to react like a mature one and Nidhi is going to be stubborn.. 😳

Chalo ji cant write more

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suku_07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#709

Its so difficult to write the reviews yaar...

Ok Shirley here you go... presenting the review of chapter 3 😳

It was a fabulous update... loved it... full on drama tha boss !! Tujhe seriously ek full-on drama movie ki script likhni chahiye...😆

For a change loved the Ashmal scenes..Ashu is already hesitant about the relationship so hesitate that he didn't noticed the missing ring, the new dress... I really liked it but what to ask why so... I mean I know baba asked him to propose but at the end it was his decision, he proposed her why he need time now

Liked the CB and Solankis scene in office... CB finally regretting his mistakes... Nice !!

Loved the sudden change in every bodies behaviors towards Nidhi just to make her realize what she is doing... Woh kehte hai naa Laaton ke bhoot baato se nahi maante...😆

Story is at very interesting point. Now I am eagerly waiting for next update... cant wait more... jaldi jaldi likho aur post karo !!

Chalo ji finally mera kaam toh hua...

Edited by suku_07 - 12 years ago

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#710

Originally posted by: suku_07

Regarding giving hot scenes...😆

Oh that's never gonna happen becoz that's not my cup of tea.

I tried once to give a sizzling SR, that too without being too explicit and believe me I cringe everytime I read that portion simply becoz it was not well written like the rest of my ff.

So, I would better stick to my forte, which is subtle romance and use of innuendoes where hot scenes are required. So, if you want hot scenes, go elsewhere. I am telling you upfront so that u guys don't expect such scenes. but m sure u will enjoy the subtle romance.

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