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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dont think that way yaar.. well frankly I was busy with my bro and his admissions but now I am bit of free.. I havnt read chapter 3 yet but will write your review tomorrow...

Many are on vacations yaar dont take that seriously.. We all love your writing..[/QUOTE]
Really Suku, I understand that everyone has genuine reason - I was just teasing u with that conscience wala thing - don't take it seriously buddy.
@bold - if u say so, maan leti hoon
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Posted: 12 years ago
week end hai. Update toh do.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

And Friends, don't take it like that ke I m doing nakhras.. I just feel low, thinking no one is giving reviews.

No don't think that way... I am in love with this story and not able to wait till 17th...
Oh Anjani, I m flattered. M trying my best but 17th se pahle toh mushkil hai. Have to go out every day.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

Thank u for the early update...n sorry for the late reply

Hi Deeps, you are most welcome, but not every time 😉😆😆
And while I actually want to 😡😡 for your late review, I know I am in no position to do that. So aapka sorry aur mera sorry aapas me cut gaya and things are now even between us - rite?😆😆
This story is quite a delight, particularly for its the chirpy-chirpy Mallika(for a change) and the retentive Ashu!. Written with a flair for garnishing even the most abject of circumstances with humor. Wonderful. .
Oh thank you for these words. Regarding humor, I have even surprised myself, I did not know I have a good sense of humor. Believe me or not, I m quite a serious person outside this forum.

So Ashu needs transforming''.

Neither has he asked about why my ring is missing from my finger, nor did he notice my new dress, and now, he doesn't even realize why I cooked this. God, did I imagine last night's events? He is behaving simply as if nothing happened.

He is yet to be sure about his feelings for Mallika!But his attraction towards Nidhi was instant ( am not speculating anything , wud wait for the story to progress), I guess AshMal relationship is not going to be simple!

Yes, he thinks he will develop those feelings for Mallika, with time. Currently, they share a unique comfort zone which made him propose to her, other than of course pressure from BB and Armaan.
Yes he is intrigued/attracted towards Nidhi in the first instance. Can u blame the poor guy? Those mischievous eyes + the way he way he had just a glimpse 😆😆
Being friends was so easy, being engaged was a different thing altogether, how was he going to manage

Yesterday, when you and Baba insisted, I thought, let me take the plunge, phir dheere dheere, we will develop our relationship and .. I thought we are such good friends ' that should be a starting point, the rest will follow.
This extract shows Ashu needs time to take his friendship to the next level'

Exactly
However , together they are perfect for each other. Mallika is the pure soul, full of life and she manages to bring out the friendly side of Ashu( I hope she manages to bring out the love too, that he's never been able to show ,atleast not for Mallika).
🤗 thank you so much. I am glad you can forget the Show's Mallu and like this mallika. Yes they are perfect but is perfect good enough?😉😉
She replied with a blush, "why do we need another spoon?" and handed him the same spoo
n.

N Mallika wearing the ring close to her heart''.i was deeply touched by that gesture''simply beautiful. I hv actually started loving this Mallika.

Yes I find it a cute gesture too.
@bold - Thank you so very much for saying this (And Deeps, pl. imagine the jumping and dancing emoticons here - u know na, I m anadi in emoticons)

They have fun, they laugh . I loved how playful they were together and how they were always able to completely be their selves around each other. The 'Halwa' episode clearly etches out the comfort of their friendly relationship.

THANK YOU - I got tired just thinking about how to show their friendship and their ease around each other. Finally came up with this idea
The trio share a lovely frndship''honest ,adaptable , supportive ,trust worthy.
👏👏👏 You perfectly described it.. Just think what will happen when the iceberg Nidhi crashes against this FriendSHIP? 😆😆

So Mr. Solanki wud b introducing Ashu n Nidhi! Innovative , very diff from the usual gooey style of first intro of the leading patragonists!

Yes, I wanted something different.
Nidhi Shyama relationship , again diff from the original track .Verma n DB not wanting Shyama to interfere in their daughter's life is very realistic.. The way in which the mother chooses to deal with the daughter can strengthen or weaken their future perspectives. I guess Verma realized it a bit too late!.
Eagerly waiting for ur next update...
Thank you Deeps, it feels so good when ur readers understand exactly what the writer wants to convey. You understand everything so comprehensively👏🤗


Thank u for this beautiful review.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvika.


Hey just saw this note of yours..here are my answers

1. Oaz (Shari) is the french expert. I combined google translate and her input in Teri Ore.
Suja, I already got help for that But thanks anyways

2. ideally i want a realistic approach to the whole thing. But may be you would have to insert a little of idealism too just to make things more interesting in a story of fiction.

Perfect Idea. Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

When is next update? Please jaldi se do.

Sorry, but not before 17th - m tied up.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suku_07



Thank god you are back Shirley.. no problem at all take your time...chapters can wait.. humare writer vavation jyada important hau humare liye so enjoy them...

BTW about hot hot chapter I just said it casually... I had nothing in mind and dont want Ashmal romance either..

Thank you for understanding Sukirti. 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arre baba meine avie kaha tha, I didnt mean that.. aur waise bhi for me a chapter with good content is hot.. I dint mean hot and sizzing romance..
Hey Gals, its so easy to tease u na?
When I am not gonna give sizzling scenes of even AshNi, then, how can I give AshMal Hot romance? huh?
@Bold, Of course I understood that Sukirti, but could not let go of such a chance to tease u na.. 😉😆😆😆
Edited by sshirley - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepa17

Hellos on this great thread .. How are we doing Shirley.. Did you get the help you needed on the translation?

Hello Deepa, sorry could not reply earlier, Ch 5 still struck on the first page - no time to type these days.
Yes. someone helped me with the translation.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arpitajaan

Thanks Shirley for the feedback...friendship indeed is a good reason to get married however after a while ur friendship blooms into love and then u marry...that's why many friends we "like" but only some friends we "love" ...for me it's a very long process...I like many people but when it comes to LOVE I am very selective...that's d reason why I sensed the conviction part was missing...did I confuse u? what I felt was Ashu likes Mallika and her company as intellectually she is equal to him...but when it comes to life partner he is not sure and he still doubts whether he "loves" her still bit unsure abt their compatibility...am I correct?

👏👏 You are absolutely correct. that is wat I m trying to show here. but sorry I cant elaborate more on this, since it would give away my story.

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