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saibanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26
Go ahead. Interesting!

Thank you rajani 😃

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saibanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Ena292
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Enu , sorry ...I was about to message you but got busy with something here , hope you liked this first part ...will be waiting for your review 😊

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saibanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: alkaparmart
good start sai.I read full chap and found it quite interesting.Armaan and ashu are friends here too.I loved their dosti in ktlk too.And that ashu is a fighter here.good.Waiting for the next chap.bec you com your os please post next chap soon,please

Thank you Alka ji , I am glad you liked this chapter😃

yes , even i liked Ashu-Arman friendship in KTLK , you will get more of them in coming chapter 😉, next chapter ...I will give it tomorrow pakka promise 😃

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Anjani9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Thank you for the new OS, will come back with review.

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saibanu

@saibanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Anjani9
Thank you for the new OS, will come back with review.

Will be waiting 😳

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sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Sai, this seems to be a refreshingly different OS - so here nidz is in some kind of quilla and ashu will pierce thru the quilla - hmm interesting. And whats this verma gang about? nidhi's brothers are gundas or something?

chalo,post 2nd part soon, eagerly waiting.

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menaka

@ariyadasa

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Hi sai after long long time i thought you had forgot IF 😭

as usual lovely of this time totally different concept i mean nidhi's family background specially 👏🤗

my favorite , when ashu became hero as i love to see hero ashu lot

really interesting 😛🤗

awaiting to see the next chap

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saibanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sshirley
Sai, this seems to be a refreshingly different OS - so here nidz is in some kind of quilla and ashu will pierce thru the quilla - hmm interesting. And whats this verma gang about? nidhi's brothers are gundas or something?

chalo,post 2nd part soon, eagerly waiting.

Thank you sshirley 😃

yes Nidhi is in quila this time ...so you recognized that Nidhi somewhere connected to rowdy gang 😆 ...You will come to know more about it in next part

Chapter 2 tomorrow ..pakka 😃

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saibanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ariyadasa
Hi sai after long long time i thought you had forgot IF 😭

Arey nahi ...I was here only but bit caught with office and college so could not sped much time here ...I started writing this OS when you messaged me ...

as usual lovely of this time totally different concept i mean nidhi's family background specially 👏🤗
my favorite , when ashu became hero as i love to see hero ashu lot
really interesting 😛🤗

ohh thank you dear ...I am so glad you liked it 😃

awaiting to see the next chap

Tomorrow I will give 😃

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Ena

@Ena292

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

sai... You have a great power in using word to express feeling! From the very first beginning...when I started to read it felt like...watching everything before my eyes...Ashu's walking from the corridor...searching for nidhi...nidhi's downcast eyes ...her fear...inner turmoil...alll is so beautifully written...though yet the reason is hidden! so here again Ashu-Armaan friendship!!! 😃 I hate this college politics 😡 in previous days medical sector was free from it...but now it spreads here also!! U potrayed that part also... It's remember me the film josh! Two gang...is nidhi sister of one of them???beautiful start...as always! I want some jealous Ashu...before he found nidhi's fact! So tomorrow will be the next update??!!! Will waiting for it!!

forget to say-- those lines were very beautiful!! Fell like reading again and again!

Sorry for late reply...college se atehi mob se login Kia tha...update dekhi to resist nehin kar payi...aur fir sogayi thi...!!!!

Do pm me...tomorrow night! Bye...take care!