Os :Pyaar toh hona hi tha part 4 page 4

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part 1 and 2 page 1 and part 3 page 2 part 4 page 4 Guys,i know you all are disappointed with the current track.I just want to remember the great Ashni love story from my pov.Please comment if you liked or not.I will appreciate your negettive comments too. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Character sketch : Ashutosh newly appointed dean of kgh in Lucknow. Armaan: Dr Ashutosh's friend in kgh and living with him. Ashutosh and Armaan were sitting in ashu's cabin. Ashutosh: yaar Armaan Lucknow me toh haalaat bigadte hi ja rahi hai.Bomb blast me kitne log mare gaye yaar.Mera dil to baitha ja raha hai.Kya ho raha hai aajkal insaano ko ? Armaan: Ashu,meri jaan.Yeh aisa kaam karanewale insaan kaise ho sakte hai?soch agar inme insaniyat hoti toh woh yeh sab karte? Ashutosh: haa Armaan sahi baat hai.Chal ghar chalte hai. Armaan: nahi yaar main aaj raat nahi aa sakta.Mera patient hai ICU me aur uski condition kaafi critical hai.Use kabhi bhi meri jaroorat pad sakti hai.Lekin tu pure careful hoke jana.Lucknow me halat achhe nahi hue hai ab tak. Ashutosh: ha chal theek hai.Good Night. Armaan: theek hai lekin ghar jaakar phone jaroor karna. Ashutosh was on his way and suddenly he saw a crowd of the men with weapons in their hand.They were just running behind the girl.And she was running on the road like a mad.Ashutosh ne turant police ko phone kiya aur gaadi se uar gaya. That girl looked at ashu and usne apni raftaar badha di is asha me ki yeh aadmi muze bacha lega aur woh ashu ke peechhe chhup gai. Us bheed me se ek aadmi ne kahaa," dekhiye dr Ashutosh.Main aapko janata hoo aapne mere bete ki jaan bachai thi isiliye hum aapko kuchh nahi karenge.lekin is ladki ko hum nahi chhodenge.Ise humare hawale kar djiye. Ashutosh: yeh ladki ko main tumhe kyon doo?tumhari rishtedaar hai? aur agar yeh tumhari kuchh nahi lagti toh use to tumhe sopaneka sawal hi nahi uthata. Woh aadmi: dekhiye sahab.Humne aaj Bharat bandh ka elaan kiya tha fir bhi yeh ladki ne apni tution classes band nahi ki aur fir hume hi jaleel karke bhej diya.Keheti hai hum bhediye hai.Aur toh kuchh kar nahi sakte.Sarkar ke khilaaf aawaaz nahi utha sakte toh nirdosh logo par apna hukm chalate hai. Dr Ashutosh: toh galat kya kehti hai yeh ladki? bomb blast kya isne karwaya? aur fir tumhare band se bomb blast me marnewale aur ghayal honewale wapis aa jayenge? And suddenly that girl became unconsious.She felt down on the floor.And police also came on the spot but till then the crowd ran away.Ashutosh was in dilemna what to do with that girl? he called armaan and armaan suggest him to take her in kgh.He lifted her and admitted her in kgh. Armaan and ashu examined her and come to that point that she get unconsioue because of that scared.So they told nurse to stay with her and inform them when she will wake up. Dusra din hua aur us ladki ne apne aapko hospital me dekha aur use kal raat ki baat yaad aa gai.Usne nurse ko pucha,"Yeh kaun sa hospital hai aur muze yahaa kaun laya?" Nurse : ji aapko dr Ashutosh yahaa lekar aaye the kal raat ko aur yeh Kotnis General hospital hai.Main dr ashutosh ko khabar kar deti hoo. Is se pehle ki ashutosh aur armaan use dekhne aate woh wahaa se chali gai.Woh ek chit me ashu ke liye message chhod gai thi," dr Ashutosh, muze bachane ka shukriya.Main aapka ehsaan zindagi bhar nahi bhulungi.Lekin muze abhi college jana hai.isiliye aapko bina bataye ja rahi hoo sorry.Takdeer ne chaha toh fir milenge. Nidhi Verma. Do you liked it or not?comments welcome
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i think koi chahta nahi ki main is os ko aage badhaoo so sorry will not write further.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Madam ji aage badho hum aapke sath sath hai😊 Likho yaar please.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Alka di , Please continue ...Thank you for giving this OS , I was totally down after watching yesterdays episode ..


very well written 👏
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Alkaji likhiye likhiye aage likhiye. Bahut accha theme hai. Jaldi. Waiting for next part.😃
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Alka sorry for the delay dear ,
BEAUTIFUL OS dear my hand is not working properly today Alka totally in a disappointed mind thought there will be a SBB , SBS segment , in a hopeless mind what a change KTLK made for me
Alka please continue the next sure tomorrow i may there two comment on your awesome creativity .
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Ashutosh forgot the incident with his busy scedule.But sometime he remembered that incident. One day he and Armaan caming back from kgh to home.Raasteme gaadi kharaab ho gai.They came out from the car and he heard the children's croud and he saw that some children's were playing in the garden of bunglow.He read the name plate Mr Yogiraj Verma,Retired Army officer. Aur ashu ne un khelte bacho ki taraf najar ki toh dekha ki woh bacho ke beech me ladki aankhope pati bandhe khel rahi thi.Use dekhkar ashu ne pehchan liya ki woh ladki Nidhi hai.Aur achanak hi us ladki ne patti kholi toh dekha ki gate pe dr Ashutosh khade the aur woh daudkar gate ke pas aayi aur boli,"are aap yahaa? aaiye andar aaiye."and she opened the gate for him.Ashutosh came inside and saw the garden. Nidhi came to his father ," baba,yeh dr Ashutosh hai.maine bataya tha na ki us din inhone meri jaan bachai thi.Aur main us puri raat inke hospital me behosh padi rahi thi." Ashutosh,"hello sir,nice to meet you.and he is Dr Armaan.My college and doctor too." Aur wahaa in charo ki mehfil jum gai.Yogiraaj ne ashu ko bataya ki Nidhi doctory ki padhai toh karti hai saath me tutions bhi deti hai aur bacho ko sangeet ki bhi shiksha deti hai.Yogiraaj,"dr Ashutosh aapko yeh jaankar hairaani hogi ki main usi din out of station gaya tha.Jab muze yahaa ke haal ke bareme pata chala main turant wapis aana chahta tha lekin sareee flights cancle ho gai thi isiliye main subah wapis aaya aur nidhi ne muze sab kuchh bataya. Armaan: waise nidhiji,jab aap us behoshi ke haalat me hospital me aayi thi toh main bhi wahaa tha lekin lagta hai aap muze bhul gai. Ashutosh: armaan,tumhe yaad nahi woh behosh thi toh woh tumhe kaise pehechanti? Armaan: lekin meri jaan,woh tab behosh thi ab toh nahi hai[and he laugh] toh bataiye Nidhi aap bina bataye wahaa se kyon chali aayi?aapko yu hume bina bataye nahi aana chahiye.Aap dr bananewali hai aur aapko yeh nahi pata ki dr ki permission ke begair patient ko dischage nahi milta.Aapka charge us din se badh raha hai jaldi se pay kar dijiye. Nidhi: oh i am sorry dr Armaan.Kitni hota hai aapka charges.? Armaan: ek cup AKC aur garamagarma pakode.Khane ke mamleme main besharam hoo. Nidhi and ashu were looking at each other but couldn't say anything. Nidhi : ji main abhi layi. Ashutosh: nahi miss Nidhi rehene dijiye.Yeh armaan ka bus chale toh yeh shaam ke dinner tak yahi ruk jayega. Yogiraaj: aate rahiye dr Ashutosh. Ashutosh:ji jaroor.bye sir. Nidhi:ji mera naam nidhi hai yaad toh rahega na? Ashutosh:[dheere se]ha jaroor yaad rahega miss Nidhi. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Nidhi college me Anji ke saath thi.dono saheliyea bate kar rahi thi Anji:kya baat hai Nidhi?tera aajkal kisi baat me man nahi lagta?dr ke mayajaal me funs gai kya?ki dr Armaan ki yaad aa rahi hai? Nidhi: kya Anji? dr armaan toh achhe insaan hai.husmukh aur smilee face wale.aur unki baten sunneme majaa aata hai.Lekin Anji: matlab aap dr Ashutosh ke barme soch rahi hai?woh kaise hai? sad facewale ya rotadu? ya fir ... Nidhi: Anji,shut up.maar dalungi agar unke barme kuchh bola toh. Anji: unke oho!unke kinke ji? Nidhi :theher ja bachi tumhe dikhati hoo. aur woh garden me anji ke peechhe daud padi.Anji aage aur woh peechhe.Tabhi woh kisise takrai aur achanak,"sorry sir,i am extremely sorry." are madam,upar toh dekhiye,kya pata sorry bolneki jaroorat hi na pade." Nidhi ne palake uthai toh dr Ashutosh samne the.Muskurate hue.Nidhi ka dil jor se dhadka. Nidhi: ji aap yahaa? Ashutosh ke dil me kuchh hulchul hui lekin usne apne aap ko sambhal liya. Ashutosh: woh meri meeting thi yahaa college me.Main aaj Delhi ja raha hoo.Raat ki flight se toh usi seminaar ke silsile me meeting hai. Ashutosh kahi jaa raha hai yeh sunkar nidhi upset ho gai.usne kahaa,"aap aaj hi jaa rahe hai?kitne dino ke liye?kab aayenge? Ashutosh: miss Nidhi?itne sare sawal ek saath?itne sawal toh muze armaan bhi nahi puchhta.lekin theek hai.Main teen din ke liye ja raha hoo. Nidhi: teen deen?lekin usne turant apne emotion rok diye aur boli,"chaliye mere class ka time ho gaya hai main chalti hoo. Class room me bhi Nidhi ka mun nahi lag raha tha.Anji aur uske friends use cheer up karneki koshish kar rahe the.Anji ne use ek gana sunaneki jeed ki.Nidhi,"Anji,yahaa mera mood off hai aur tu muze gana gaane ko keh rahi hai? Anji,"oh madam,tumhe yaad hai jab tera mood kharab hota hai tab tu gana gati hai lekin yahaa toh Harmonium nahi hai to tumhe aise hi gana gana padega." Aur Nidhi ne gaana shuru kiya,"ho yara silee silee birhaki raat ka jalna.yeh bhi koi jeena hai yeh bhi koi marana yara silee silee. Aur uski aankhe bhar aayi.Nidhi,"Anji,muze bata na muze kya ho raha hai?achanak dil bhar aata hai.Unhone muze kahaa ki main bahar ja raha hoo aur mere dil me ek khalipan aa gaya. Anji: Nidhi tumhe pyaar ho gaya hai. Nidhi: do you know what that mean? he is not interested in me.Agar hote toh muze dhundneki koshish nahi karte? " Agar aapne apna phone number aur pata chhoda hota toh jaroor dhundte aapko.Lekin aap toh Syndrella ki tarah aayi aur ek khubsurat sapne ki tarah chali bhi gai" "waise aapke gane me kafi kashish hai Nidhi.Main yahaa tak khicha aaya." College ke canteen me Ashutosh aur Nidhi baithe hue the. Nidhi: dr Ashutosh ! aapne humari saari bate suni? Ashutosh: ha nidhi,maine sab kuchh suna.Lekin tumhe abhi bahoot aage badhna hai.Career ke bareme sochna hai.Toh main soch raha tha ki Nidhi: iska matlab aapka jawab na hai indirectly?ok then thanks to meet you
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Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

Madam ji aage badho hum aapke sath sath hai😊 Likho yaar please.

thanks rajani but maine part 2 post kar diya hai
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Originally posted by: saibanu

Alka di , Please continue ...Thank you for giving this OS , I was totally down after watching yesterdays episode ..



very well written 👏

thanks sai
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Originally posted by: lee_Ashni

Alkaji likhiye likhiye aage likhiye. Bahut accha theme hai. Jaldi. Waiting for next part.😃

thanks lee

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