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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: achiever

okay.. i was waiting for the story to unfold a bit.. bt had been following it since beginning.. (plus i wasnt feeling well so pardon me)...

I simply luved Ashu's character here.. he is the mature guy here.. and Nidhi as usual has fallen for him with her puppy luv.. Ashu was rite in pointing out all the differences and problems in getting ahead in this r'ship.. bt still can a person resist wen luv knocks at ur door and tht someone is as beautiful as NIdhi! Naaah!
Bt really need to see Nidhi's depth of luv.. thrs clear difference of luv.. ha ha ha.. i luved the way u put the dilogue of difference betn two luv.. and Nidhi was aptly confused.. pyaar mein bhi koi antar hota hai.. His concerns r rite.. and i really really raelly luved tht dialouge abt her career..
Ashu comes out to b a highly dependent mature and sensible guy and yet he is a sensitive lover.. the word to b noted is tht he is a "lover" he understood Nidhi's feelings..
and again the whole Angie-Nidhi and Armaan-Ashu f'ship has come out beautifully.. we do miss thm in KTLK! thnx for refreshing tht wonderful f'ship in our minds..
and this is really beautiful story.. eager to learn wat Ashu's nxt step wud b.. wud he tell or will he wait.. adn most importantly if yes, thn how wud he tell..
do update the nxt part soon.. now this is called a quick story!

ya quick love story bec this is my os.I wnted my ashu to be more matured and nidhi more chirpy.and in upcoming chaps i will try the transformation of thoughts of ashu and nidhi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: sss97

hi its a nice os waiting for the next part

pl pm when u post the next part

i had posted fourth part of my os dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: rrdsu

Good going alkaben.. Please update soon..

thanks heena but 4th part updated
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: achiever

stop spamming and give us an update!😆

eagerly waiting!

are wait na?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: achiever

wow.. this Ashu Nidhi r so cute.. ..

still v can see Ashu's maturity and Nidhi's childlike self.. really luved thm..
so he confessed thnx to Nidhiji ki boldness.. 😆 really a toofan express... keh diya dubki laga ke dekh lijiye.. 😆 😆 😆
luved Armaan-Ashu's conversation too..really adorable characters!
luved the way Ashu turned SRK!😉
thnk u soo much will b waiting for nxt updaet.. kya hoga aagey.. Armaan Nidhi convo ya.. ashu aur CV ka convo!😛
fantabulous dialoges enjoyed thm a lot😛

thanks achiever, but at this stage i don't want to disturb their love story.Armaan and nidhi convo definately and you will enjoy it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: ariyadasa

👏Awesome 👏
😛feels like reading a fairy tale 😛
⭐️👍🏼(like this simple and charming writing style )👍🏼⭐️

Love the telephone conversation . it's really funny ,but explain their love towards each other . 👏
the way u brought forward the concept of age gap , great Dear 👏

😳The gift exchanging scene , then the last part the warmly friendship impressed me a lot 😳
👏salute for ur creativity👏

👍🏼Great work 👍🏼

thanks ariya for the appreciation.I don't want my story to be complicated.simple and effective still i want to include all the human emotion mostly love
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Ena292

super...cute...innocent...os!!!👏👏

Liked it very much...aur kitne part hain???

thanks ena.ab aage likhungi toh pata chalega ki os banega ya ff
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
hi.. i didnt notice that u had posted the 4th part.sorry 4 that.
this part was beautiful.

loved ashu's concern 4 nidhi's future

pl continue soon😊

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