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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alkaparmart

Achiever,as always late lattiff. But loved the chap.

--lolz.. no problem..i was wondering wer wer u..😳
Mostly Nidhi ashu's conversation of hating.Nidhi and her decessions oh sorry independent decession. But some where i feel they attracted.And that kiss.First i got romantic with that but then i became sad.
--😆 hatredness hai aur attraction bhi.. intrsting na..😳.. Ashu's kiss showed wat he actually wanted..😳.. and yeah..Nidhi and her independent decisions.... I m going to luv this Nidhi!😳 Sad past has made her strong.. weras It has made Ashu a man unknown to anyone!😳
Nidhi and Ashutosh were merried.They didn't asked anything when they got their first meeting.No no and no yes.Aur shadi ho gayi? and i am much confused why Ashu's father didn't talk ashu but only loved Rohan and Rita.I am sure you will clarify my confusion with your nest chap.
--wahi to intrsting hai.. i didnt want to reveal all in first chapter .. and yet establish thr characters and generate tht chemistry betn thm.. hope i didnt confuse much and was successful in generating tht curiosity around thr mrg and characterization!😳
Nidhi is doing exactly same as ashu said.But loved Ashu's anger look and his care.Somewhere i feel that he is now started to be possessive as he told mr sharma that she is not Nidhi Verma But nidhi ashutosh mathur.I just love this line.
--Nidhi is a fascinating character.. u shudnt jump to judging her so soon!😳
I want to ask you a question if you don't mind?By Nidhi's affair with dr Sharma what you want to prove? hope you don't mind by this question.Bec i didn't understand the purpose after this?
--its the reason for Ashus hatredness..his baseless theory got a proof by it and he became more taunting to Nidhi..😳
Very well written and beautiful flowing of words and expressional chap.Wait for the next chap.
--thnk u sooo much!😳 Nxt chapter has all answers to ur questions! well mostly all!😆 u know me na.. i dont reveal all my cards so soon!😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey manisha janab...
1st of all...a BIG BIGGG Sorry for being a lazy girl, that what i am...
I have been silently reading your work...and i need to tell u now that you are an amazing writer
what i love the most about ur writing is the way u write the word CRY..or CRIED...
it love how that sounds...
weird am i being here...but that's what i love the most...
the word is not taken literally as someone cries but that whining sound...i can just imagine that...
coming to this story...
I LOVED IT...
Nidhi and ashu's bickering and clawed cats kind of relation was superb...
loved how they are behaving...
Nidhi's story i understand a bit, ut ashu story, though its a lil obvious...but still i m looking forward to see his side...
loving the way they are comin closer...
cont soon...

waiting for it...

:)
Ciao
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_SK

hey manisha janab...
1st of all...a BIG BIGGG Sorry for being a lazy girl, that what i am...

--i m eagerly waiting for ur Tea Stall update.. plzzz..make it soon!😳

I have been silently reading your work...and i need to tell u now that you are an amazing writer
what i love the most about ur writing is the way u write the word CRY..or CRIED...
it love how that sounds...
weird am i being here...but that's what i love the most...
the word is not taken literally as someone cries but that whining sound...i can just imagine that...
--okay.. i understand tht.. and i realized i use it too often.. i leave a lot to viewer's imagination to guess wat it actually means!😆
coming to this story...

I LOVED IT...
Nidhi and ashu's bickering and clawed cats kind of relation was superb...
loved how they are behaving...
--Thr teases has taken a severe form.. 😆 bt it brings out a different chemistry betn thm.. i mean it makes thm equal inspite of thr age gap!😳

Nidhi's story i understand a bit, ut ashu story, though its a lil obvious...but still i m looking forward to see his side...
--as i said.. nxt update is all abt revealtions.. and a deep insight into these two characters...😳..

loving the way they are comin closer...
cont soon...
--kuch zyada hi kareeb aa gaye.. aur vo bhi itni jaldi..😆 i luved Ashu's reaction tho it was instantaneous!😛... Nidhi already finding hard to resist Ashu!😳

waiting for it...

:)
Ciao

will b updating nxt week.. tc.! Bring on ur Tea Stall update.. pretty plz!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
janab...tea stall abhi zara hold pe hai...
as k i m working on btoomh...i wanna get done with that story so i can be regular enough with other fics...
twa stall thora likha hai...but may be in a day or two will write that complete n update...
for today btoomh's SR is comin... ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_SK

janab...tea stall abhi zara hold pe hai...
as k i m working on btoomh...i wanna get done with that story so i can be regular enough with other fics...
twa stall thora likha hai...but may be in a day or two will write that complete n update...
for today btoomh's SR is comin... ;)

oooh!😃.. thts really heartwarming story.. do PM me.. wen u update..😳
bt desperately waiting for Tea Stall!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: achiever

oooh!😃.. thts really heartwarming story.. do PM me.. wen u update..😳
bt desperately waiting for Tea Stall!

Me too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
The frst part was mind blowing..hehe
u knw..i was roflnh in btwn!
i mean..wat ashu is doin man?
fighting ,romancng etc etc..so many thngs at a same tym..hahaha
awesume..bring it on
its an awesume story..it seems so.. bcuz i luvd yor frst FF too...Jaane kya bat hui
thnkiezz!
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Posted: 12 years ago


ye kia adrak ki chai ka nasha hai😉😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: harsha6

The frst part was mind blowing..hehe

--😆 wat fighting like cat and dog and thr intrsting jibes!😆😆😆

u knw..i was roflnh in btwn!
i mean..wat ashu is doin man?
fighting ,romancng etc etc..so many thngs at a same tym..hahaha
--😆 I think Nidhi asked the rite question in the end.. "I know u hate me?" "yes" "thn?"😆😆😆.. and he cud jst stare.. 😆 He is frustrated and angry tht he kissed her.. 😆😆😆 bt nevertheless he is as usually very very adorable..😳

awesume..bring it on
its an awesume story..it seems so.. bcuz i luvd yor frst FF too...Jaane kya bat hui
thnkiezz!
--thnk u soo much for loving both these stories.. this is at a different level thn jaane kya baat h
ui.. and plus its short..!😆

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