Os: JAANE NEHI DENGE TUMHE! Note-pg 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello everyone! I'm stuck somewhere again nd have no idea when will b back at home...have no work...nd havn't my laptope even with me! It's a small os written frm my mobi! Hope u will like...
Part 1
Nidhi stepped at kgh after a long week off for her sudden illness. She was an intern of kgh...always chirpy nd smiling! Everyone in the hospital loved her...so when she wasn't well everyone in d hospital missed her a lot! Almost every1 in kgh visited her in home or used to call her! Bt 1 person she want to talk didn't call her at once...nd he is none bt the man with whom she was in love-dr. Ashutosh!
She was very disapointed...so decided to ignore him! Bt her bad luck d person with whom she met first was ashutosh.
She looked at the quiet man before her and froze, if only for moment, uncontrollably. This is what always happened when she saw him, and she hated it. Her feet would somehow just stop working and all of a sudden it would just be her looking at him and… And then she would catch herself losing control of herself and try to move, only it never was that simple. She doesn't know why exactly he did this to her, it was just something he could just do. It was the most amazing… and scary thing she has ever been through.
It was like she would see his face and it would cause her heart to literally explode. It's hard to explain but it's true. Each and every time she saw that black hair and those bottomless beautiful blues it would happen, without fail, and then once reality kicked in she'd be standing there like a fool. Then, her cheeks would flame and she'd do her best to disappear behind her chestnut waves. It's so embarrassing. Thank God, that him and his black-brown eyes hardly ever even knew she existed or else she doesn't think she could live with that kind of humiliation…
So there she was, staring like a fool at those glorious black locks falling perfectly in front of those endless eyes, when he looked at her. There, in that moment, it was black and brown, him and her. It was so wonderfully frightening that all she could manage to do was give a bewildered smile and begin to lose herself in her tawnyripples. She started to turn away, afraid, but secretly hopeful, that he might see all of the overwhelming emotions rushing through her. She was turning, hiding, and running all at the same time, when the most magnificent voice stopped her. His voice. He was calling her name. "nidhi!" he called, "nidhi wait!"
she sweard her heart skipped a beat as he jogged to stand next to her."You gotta minute?" he asked, completely smooth, and he even smiled. Then she spoke in a tone that surprised even her, "Ya, sure… What's up,sir?" It was completely smoothe, just like his. She still had no idea how she'd managed that.
"I was just wondern' if you wanted to… um… walk to canteen together?" he asked with nervous eyes as he ran his fingers through his hair.
Engulfed with so much emotion, it took all she had to say an even, "Sure." Then off they walked...they didn't know what to say! Only they knew how they missed one another in this whole week!
Ashu thought...thought to call her! But then a hesitation covered himself...he afraid...afraid to reveal his feelings fr her!
So he kept a distance frm her...bt in this one week he realised how badly he needed her...her one glimpse made his day!
Nd today...when he saw her...he..he felt an sudden intense of happiness! Nd so why he called her...
But now both of them lost their word...they walked silently towards d canteen when someone from behind called-- nidhi??
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Anjani9 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good start...how many parts are there in this OS? How are you?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjani9

Good start...how many parts are there in this OS? How are you?

thank u 😊 probably 3-4 parts! Will update fast one after another! I'm quite fine! No one is allowed to go anywhere as every1 is schocked! So thought writing will help to divert my mind! Hw r u?enjoyed ur holiday? Waise maine aur ak os likha tha-it named saiyaan! Hope u will read that!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ena my dear thoda bada chapter diya karo na pl. start and end ekdam. pl write a bit long chapter na.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vidyasabde

Ena my dear thoda bada chapter diya karo na pl. start and end ekdam. pl write a bit long chapter na.

di,it was written frm mobile! Nd it only contains 5000 letters! So u have to tolerate d small update! Bt i surely update fast! Promise! Nd will make it a romantic 1 as i have also hate those sad environment!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello ena. Os was sweet and nice. Another wonderful concept. But ye kaha rok diya??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey ena dear
how r u?? n why are not u allowed to go anywhere dear????

newaz...a very promising start...

i so loved the moment where u explained how nidhi entered the hospital and saw ashu...her disappointment and her drooling...beautiful explanation dear...

ohoo...tau doc g trying to hide his love...but tooo bad as a love story had to be about expressing of love...

looking forward for romantic update dear

cont soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Ena
😃
Really good start.
I am already intrigued.
But really really short.
Waiting for the next chap.😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb concept Ena please make it little long as it will be so much interesting.
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ena292

di,it was written frm mobile! Nd it only contains 5000 letters! So u have to tolerate d small update! Bt i surely update fast! Promise! Nd will make it a romantic 1 as i have also hate those sad environment!

sorry then.i didn't know. i realize it is very difficult on mobile. Hats off for your enthusiasm .

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