Jab Koi Baat Bigad Jaaye ch10 p94, epi-p99 - Page 76

Created

Last reply

Replies

796

Views

89.1k

Users

35

Likes

1k

Frequent Posters

sshirley thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

very good epilogue.

Nidhi on the preggy track ...that was best end.
Sshirly that was an awesome ff.👏

Thank you Dr. Vidya. I am glad you liked the epilogue and the ff as a whole.
Also, Thank u for ur constant encouragement
@bold - well wasnt that kinda obvious? so, i did not feel the need to write an epilogue but then wrote on public demand
sshirley thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sshirley

Thank you Dr. Vidya. I am glad you liked the epilogue and the ff as a whole.
Also, Thank u for ur constant encouragement
@bold - well wasnt that kinda obvious? so, i did not feel the need to write an epilogue but then wrote on public demand
Oh and btw, did u notice? urs is the first comment on my 100th page 😃😃😃

sshirley thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: turags

great epilogue shirley...loved the ff...loved the epilogue...good work shirley!!! 👏

Thank you Suja,
Waise i didnt realize that this one liner review was urs. But, though a bit disappointed, can understand ur time crunch, given thats its pongal, happy pongal
sshirley thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mithalee

Awesome yaar 👏 fabulous ff ⭐️ just loved it 😊

Thank U Mithalee. I am happy u loved it
sshirley thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aru29

Hey!!!!! Great epilogue...👏thank you so much for it...😊and yes it was necessary otherwise how would we hav seen our Ashni 's happiness and them on the family way😃

It was very sweet⭐️
Loved the FF❤️

Thank you so very much. Frankly, I did not feel the need for an epilogue - i m sure there was nothing in thee epi that was unexpected. Still i wrote on public demand as a thank you gesture for making this ff (my 1st such attempt) a success
sshirley thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ChitaRK

Thanks for the epilogue Shirley. U wrote it & that too very fabulously

Thank you so very much - i m glad u find it fab, i wasn't sure at all, since it was done in a hurry
sshirley thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hilarious44

Hey shirley..

Hey Fatima,
I know i disappeared without informing but buddy i just couldnt help it...
Its okay, since you are a soon-to-be bride, so i am letting u go😉😉
Just came to the forum for a while..
Glad u came for only a while aur phir ye mini review diya
WOW so u gave an epilogue too...GREAT...
Haan, kya karti, public demand thi😃😃
Chapter-10 was really thrilling n awesome...i enjoyed it so so much...
Thank you dear, I am glad u found ir thrilling - i was so afraid that i was too obvious to make it thrilling - lekin aapna keh diya - bahut badi baat hai mere liye
Epilogue was sweet n really nice...
Thank you again dear
I know i should be giving long review here...plz forgive me for ditching u...i feel really guilty...i know i am bad but i also know that u are great enough to forgive this bad fellow..
AWESOME work...
Love u

Thank you dear, Love you too
@Orange - no don't feel guilty kyunki aapko detailed reviews dene padenge - chahe jab bhi
@bold - No, I am not great enough - i m equally bad. 😉😉😉 Aur waise bhi jab u r going to give reviews, to phir toh there's nothing to forgive
sshirley thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aardhan

👏👏👏 Well done Shirley. Three cheers to you for successfully completing this FF and thank you so much for fulfilling our wish and writing this sweet epilogue. It was comforting to read about Nidhi's pregnancy and the Armaan-Tamanna marriage, complete acceptance of Ashu and the respect he commanded in the family and especially how the bridges between all the members of the family have mended.


Thank you, thank you so much Aarti! I take a bow. I am so glad my epilogue is so applauded by everything - i somehow did not feel it was good enoug to post. But had v. limited time to write so just posted it. I am glad u could grasp all aspects that i wanted to convey
Ashu's sweetness and goodness was kept intact even now when we saw how he readily forgave KS and DB, even before Nidhi and infact advised her to let go of all those old issues. And the lovely interaction between Ashni and their little one, cute.😳 Great job...and great way to finish this FF.

Thank you so much. I am so glad u liked my way to finish the ff.
@bold -Yes, thats what i tried very hard thruout this ff - to maintain the consistentency of each and every character, while adding layers to them, especially adding layers to Ashu & Nidhi's characters. I hope i succeeded in maintaining not only Ashu's character consistency, but all other characters as well?
@Orange - frankly i felt that scene was cliched - i mean many ffs have the same scene. But much as i tried, i could not think of anything else
Good luck with your new semester, starts tomorrow, right?? And hope to see you with us once again... maybe spring break time, eh? 😃

Thank you so much for your wishes, Yes semester starts tomorrow - mon - 14th.
Well, donno abt summer break - can't say anything - i will definitely come in the break, but maybe not with an ff - writing ff needs many things - most imp. being a good storyline which u believe in - so lets see
Edited by sshirley - 12 years ago
aarundhati thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely yaar...you have written the entire FF sooo welll...just enjoyed it thoroughly...gues u have written it in the short break u got from ur college...that was indeed very nice of you...am sure all the forum-wasis have enjoyed it thoroughly...thanks for the wonderful journey u took us thru'...we can never have enough of our ASHNI's love story ...👏
ssss97 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for u to start a new ff😊😊

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".