FF - The Story Of 2 Love Birds..[ Part 13 upd 15th May - Page 36 ] - Page 28

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update thanks for the pm dear and get well soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Poojapange

Hi hellox...
Sweet update...
Injection part was really very cute...I love how Ashu take care of Nidhi n he brought chocolates for her..Awww..both r comfertable with each other company...
Now i want to see how they discover about their feelings...N ya dont hurry...take ur time...meanwhile take care...get well soon


Thanks a lot for the comments and like..yup..both do feel comfortable with each other..ull love the next part i guess..
Regards..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SwastikAshNi

Short but very nice Hellox.Will wait for the next.


Thanks a lot..next part gonna update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ayushi.luvsid

Sweet update dear waiting for the next one!



Thnx for the feedback..gonna update in a couple of days..
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Mehek..thanks for the feedback..im still thinkin on the love realisation part..and glad that ur lovin my FF..thanks..
Regards..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello all..apologise for the late feedback..actually cant use a cell or lappy under doc orders..anyways..got to use it today..so..Part 13 is almost ready and will be updatin it soon..either ill update or else my frnd will do it on my behalf..appreciate everyone's patience and sorry for the inconvenience..
Regards..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello all. this is Hellox's frnd and im gonna update his Part 13. he had written it and given it to me a couple of days back but im sorry for updating it a bit late. and he has thanked everyone for their comments and support. he has asked for the feedback on his Part 13 and ill convey it to him.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 13



Ashu is happy for the next day..

Its evening..Ashu comes home..he goes to his Baba's photo..

Ashu - ' Baba..aapko toh pata hai kal kya hai..kal 14 November hai..Childrens Day..har saal ki tarah is saal bhi hum anath bacho ka free main check up karke unka zaroori iljaj karenge..Free Camp for the Orphan..yahi aap chahte the..aapka sapna..kash aap mere saath hote..toh kitna acha hota.. '

Ashu has tears saying this..he rubs his hands on his Baba's photo..he just turns away wiping his tears and is about to go to his room wen he is stopped by Hiraman Kaka..

( K..actually totally forgot to introduce Hiraman Kaka in my FF..oopsie..my bad.. )

Hiraman Kaka - ' Ashutosh..tum aise toot jaoge toh kaise kaam chalega..Baba ka sapna tumhe abhi aur aage leke jana hai..aur Baba ka ek sapna abhi bhi adhura hai.. ' '

Ashu - ' Kaka..aap kab aaye '

Hiraman Kaka - ' Aaj subah hi aaya hun..mujhe pata hai ki mere Ashutosh ko kal meri zarurat padegi.. '

Ashu - ' Aur Baba ka kaunse adhure sapne ki aap baat kar rahe hai.. '

Hiraman Kaka - ' Baba tumhe dulhe ke roop main dekhna chahte the..woh chahte the ke tum godi pe jao aur is ghar ki dulhan ko leke aao.. '

Ashu - ' Kaka..yeh toh mumkin nahi hai..main shaadi nahi karunga..zindagi ne bahut kuch chin liya hai mujhse..main nahi chahta ki ab koi meri zindagi main aaye aur firse mujhe aade raste chod de..ab is dil ke raste hamesha band ho chuke hai.. '

Hiraman Kaka - ' Rasta band karne ki icha tumhare haath main hogi..lekin rasta band karna ya kolna upar wale ke haath main hai..aur agar woh chahe to tumhare dil ke raste zarur khulenge.. '

Just then the earings ( of Nidhi ) which he had kept on the shelf falls creating sound making Ashu and Kaka to look at them..then blows the wind which brings the earings near the legs of Ashu..Ashu lifts the earings and stares at them..

Meanwhile..Nidhi too comes home..she goes to her room with the choclates given by Ashu..she keeps the choclate on her bed and goes to fresh up..but wen she comes back, she finds Anji feasting on her choclates..Nidhi rushes to Anji and takes them back..

Nidhi - ' Anji..yeh kya kar rahi hai.. '

Anji - ' Choclate khaa rahi hun..aur kya.. '

Nidhi -
' Tujhe khaane ke liye sirf yahi choclate mili kya.. '

Anji - ' Kyun..isme itna special kya hai.. '

Nidhi - ' Yeh choclates mujhe Dr. Ashutosh ne diye hai..samjhi.. '

Anji - ' Toh..main kya karu..kisine bhi diya ho..diya toh kaane ke liye hai na.. '

Nidhi - ' Ha..lekin unhone ne mere liye karidi hai.. '

Anji - ' Tu itna Dr. Ashustosh ki side kyun le rahi hai..itne din ho gaye hain..main dekh rahin hun ke tu woh Ashutosh ke gun gaa rahia hai.. '

Nidhi - ' Anji..yeh kya bol rahai hai.. '

Anji - ' Nidhi..kya ho gaya hai tujhe..tu us Ashutosh ke liye apni bachan ki dost ko daanth sakti hai.. '

Nidhi - ' Aisi baat nahi hain..bas yeh choclate tere liye nahi hai.. '

Anji - ' Nidhi..kya hua hai tujhe.. '

Nidhi -
' Mujhe kya hua hai.. '

Anji -
' Is sawal ka jawab mujhe toh mil gaya hai..bas tujhe milna baaki hai.. '

Nidhi -
' Anji.. '

Anji leaves saying this..Nidhi doesnt quite look happy with Anji's words but forgets everything and starts pounding on the choclates..

Its next day..everybody is at the KGH..Nidhi doesnt quite understand wats happening and consults Ranga..

Nidhi -
' Dr. Ranganath..yeh kya ho raha hai..yeh sab hospital ki gaadi aur yeh sab nurse kahan ja rahi hai.. '

Ranga -
' Dr. Nidhi..yeh sab orphanage ja rahi hain..har saal Dr. Ashutosh anath bacho ka is din free main check up aur zaroori ilaj karte hain.. '

Nidhi - ' Dr. Ashutosh hain kahan.. '

Just then Ashu comes saying..

Ashu - ' Dr. Ranganth..everything all right..hope the camps are set over there.. '

Ranga - ' Ha sir..sab camps set ho chuke hai..bas Dr. Mallika ka aana baki hai.. '

Ashu - ' Kya!! Mallika abhi tak nahi aayi.. '

Just then..

Mallu -
' Main toh aa chuki hun..bas woh medicines pack kar rahi thi.. '

Ashu - ' K den..lets move.. '

Mallu - ' Nidhi..tumbhi chalo..tumhari bhi training ho jayegi.. '

Ashu - ' Ha Nidhi..tum bhi chalo.. '

Nidhi agrees..Nidhi leaves in the hospital van and Ashu and Mallu follow in Ashu's car..

At the camp..

Ashu comes and is happy..he is happy that these orphan neednt shove hands infront of others for their medical needs..he keeps roaming in the camp..he finds kids crying over injection and not agreeing for the tablets..he remembers his childhood wit his Baba..how Baba would force him for medicines wen he would be sick..flashbacks comes on how Ashu would run and Baba would run behind him with the medicines..how he used to fall and Baba would come and pick him up..would apply medicine on his wounds..Ashu thinks that today he has wounds more deeper than his childhood but he doesnt have his Baba for his cure..

Ashu's thoughts are broken by a ward boy who throws the waste in the open and doesnt dispose in a appropriate manner..

Seeing this Ashu comes back to his Dr. Hardstone attitude..

Ashu - ' Ward boy..kya hai yeh..yeh koi tarreka hai tumhara..hum yahan ilaj ke liye aaye hai..aur tum aise waste ko daloge toh fir ilaj ka kya fayda..beemari toh yahin ki yahin hai.. '

Listening to this Nidhi comes running and tries to calm Ashu..

Nidhi - ' Sir..kya hua..aap itna gussa kyun hai.. '

Ashu - ' Dekho Nidhi..yahan ilaj ke liye aaye hain..aur yeh ward boy kachra aise dispose karega toh beemari toh wahin ki wahin hai na.. '

Nidhi - ' Sir..aap baitiye.. '

Nidhi turns to the ward boy in a cool temper..

Nidhi - ' Ward boy..kya hai yeh..yeh kachra lo aur ja ke barabar dispose karke aao..samjhe.. '

The ward boy keeps looking at Ashu in fear..

Nidhi - ' Dekh kya rahe ho..jao.. '

Nidhi then turns to Ashu..

Nidhi - ' Sir..maine bola aapko baitne ko..baitiye.. '

Nidhi holds Ashu's hands and makes him sit on the chair..

Nidhi - ' Sir..aap itna jaldi gussa kyun hote hain..aaram se bhi toh keh sakte the na.. '

Nidhi hands over a glass of water and asks Ashu to calm down..

Nidhi - ' Sir..aap doctor ho..aapko toh pata hai ki gusse se BP badta hai..kyun itna gussa karte hain.. '

Seeing this a kid comes and tells..

Kid - ' Dekho dekho..Dr. uncle to aunty se dar gaye..aunty ke aate hi uncle ka gussa gayab ho gaya.. '

Ashu and Nidhi look at each other and steal a eye to eye glance..Nidhi turns away from Ashu and runs behind the kid..

Nidhi - ' Ruk shaitan..ruk.. '

The kid keeps running untill Nidhi catches him..Nidhi catches the kid and swings him in the air in joy..

Ashu sees this and keeps smiling untill one more kid comes to him..

Kid - ' Dekho dekho..ab toh Dr. uncle has rahe hain.. '

Nidhi now runs behind this kid..the kid runs towards Ashu and Nidhi follows..just at the end moment, the kid changes the direction making Nidhi misbalance and she falls on to Ashu and they both roll down..they keep rolling while once Ashu is over Nidhi and once Nidhi is over Ashu..alas they stop and Nidhi is over Ashu..Ashu has his jaw wide open while he is slowly being lost in Nidhi..

On the other hand Nidhi is totally lost in Ashu not realising the camp..

And in the BG plays the 4 lines of the song - Ajeeb Dastan..

Ajeeb Dastan Hai Ye,
Kahan Shuru Kaha Khatam,
Yeh Manzile Hai Kaunsi,
Na Woh Samajh Sake Na Hum..


Their eye locks are broken by the kids who keep laughing and teasing them..

Nidhi realises it, gets up and runs behind the kids..

Nidhi - ' Ruko shaitano..abhi tumhari kabar leti hun main.. '

Nidhi comes to a kid, catches him and takes him away while she is having a glance at Ashu and she slides her fingers over her hair near the ear, smiles and leaves..

Ashu too leaves wen he is needed by a Dr. Mallika for some paper work..

Edited by hellox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow fabulously written
loved ashni interaction in the camp & the way kids were teasing them was too good.
Great work Hellox 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey hellox it was nice ff

do take care of your self



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