FF - The Story Of 2 Love Birds..[ Part 13 upd 15th May - Page 36 ] - Page 30

hey hellox hope u r doing fine now..
thnks for d PM

n d kaka ashu bits were really gud n so r ashni convo..👏😊
please do get well soon n update😊

Originally posted by: ash_arti

wow fabulously written

loved ashni interaction in the camp & the way kids were teasing them was too good.

Great work Hellox👍🏼

Thanks a lot dea..sorry for the late reply..alas my frnd is here and i have a cell to use..
Regards..

Originally posted by: karajekar

hey hellox it was nice ff

do take care of your self



sonali

Thanks Sonali..tryin my best..
Regards..

Originally posted by: busybee..

Hy hellox :-)
Hope u r feeling good now:-)
Get well soon:-):-)
N come to d story, it's such a lively part...
I actually imagine about MB n KK ...
Very well written 👏
Take care:-):-)

Oh..thank u so much..im glad dat u felt it a lively part..and imagining MB and KK..thank u for this..
Regards..

Originally posted by: niniborn2rule

wao wao wao...superb excellent ashni interaction at the camp...

Thanks a lot..glad that it entertained u..
Regards..

Originally posted by: Poojapange

Hi Hellox...
Thanks for d beautiful update..Kids teased Ashu..oh how sweet...but last part was awesome Nidhi falls on Ashu n both keep rolling...wow
Thanks once again...take care..get well soon

I should be thankful to u for ur wonderful comments and support..and regarding the last part..well..tried makin it romantic and happy that many have liked it..
Regards..

Originally posted by: SwastikAshNi

<font color="#0000FF"><font size="2">The kid part was so sweet.Good one.</font></font>

Thank u so much..
Regards..

Originally posted by: AAKMH2

thnkx for da pm

Ur most welcome..thanks for ur like..
Regards..

Originally posted by: Blushsarika

Fabulous update hellox,
Nidhi has also realised feelings for Ashu
good going.

Hope that you will be discharged from the hospital soon,and get well soon

Thanks a lot..yup..Nidhi has started developing feelings for Ashu and it will be shown in my next part too..and it will take quite some time for me to be discharged..
Regards..

Originally posted by: shaz2009

<font color="#990099">Superb update Hellox!...loved Ashni interaction at the camp and absolutely loved the roll!...very filmy!...😍...so they both developing feelings for one another,can't wait for when they actually confess their love...just hoping Mallu doesn't become too much of an obstacle.
Looking froward to the next update and hope you get well soon!🤗.
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Thanks a lot for the feedback..yup..feelings are developing on both sides..and regarding the confession..its quite different and will take time..and regardin Mallu..she might not be the one as a obstacle..but as they say..obstacles are in every relationship so will be in this..wait and watch..
Regards..