FF - The Story Of 2 Love Birds..[ Part 13 upd 15th May - Page 36 ]

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The Story Of 2 Love Birds




INDEX


Part 1 - Page 1


Part 2 - Page 1


Part 3 - Page 4


Part 4 - Page 5


Part 5 - Page 9


Part 6 - Page 11


Part 7 - Page 14


Part 8 - Page 19



Part 9 - Page 24


Part 10 - Page 27


Part 11 - Page 29


Part 12 - Page 34


Part 13 - Page 36




Hello frnds..this is a FF on Ashni..Ashu is played by MB and Nidhi By KK..i have made a slight change..Ashu's Baba and Nidhi's Nana arent the same..so no house track and all..and..Ashu is Col Verma's frnd..hope u all like it..



Part 1 - Nidhi's arrival




Its 15th of October..Col Verma is waiting for her daughter Nidhi at the Lucknow airport..she had gone to Mumbai for her higher studies in Medical..Verma is jst thinkin how Nidhi told that she wanted to do her internship in Mumbai but he insisted her to do here at the Kotnis General Hospital as the Dean ' Dr. Ashutosh ' is his close frnd..he has let Nidhi have everything according to her wish..but this is the first time he has not granted something according to her wish..just then he hears ' Baba '..and he jst comes out of his thoughts..

Baba - ' Beta..aa gayi tu..kaisi hai..'

Nidhi - ' Tik hu baba..Aap kaise hai..aur Dadi Bua nahi aayi..'

Baba - ' Main toh tik hun..aur Bua toh tera ghar par intezar kar rahi hai..'

They leave to their house and there her Dadi Bua is ready with the pooja plate..

Nidhi - ' Pranam Dadi Bua..'

Dadi Bua - ' Jeeti reh meri bachi..kaisi hai tu..aur yeh kya? Itni patli ho gayi..khana nahi khaati hai kya? Hostel waale khaana nahi dete hai kya? '

Nidhi - ' Kya bua..hostel main khaana hai..par aapke haaton ka swaad kahan hai..'

Dadi Bua - ' Ab tu yahan aa gayi hai na..ab toh main tujhe jam ke khilaungi..'

Baba - ' Kya Bua..abhi abhi aayi hai..andar chale..baatein toh baad main kar lenge.. '

At night..

Baba - ' Beta Nidhi..ek baat puchna chahta tha.. '

Nidhi - ' Pucho na Baba..kya hua? '

Baba - ' Tu mujhse khafa toh nahi hai na.. '

Nidhi - ' Nahi Baba..kyun.. '

Baba - ' Isliye..kyun ki maine tujhe internship yaha karne ko kaha..dekh Beta..Lucknow acha shehar hai..aur main chahta hun ki tu yaha hi doctor bane..aur KGH main dean Ashutosh mera acha dost hai..woh pichle 4 saal se mujhe janta hai.. '

Nidhi - ' Tik hai Baba..mujhe koi sikayat nahi hai.. '

At the KGH we see Dr. Ashutosh ( Dr. Hardstone ) sitting in his cabin and lost in some of his thoughts..he is just remembering how he was happy..but after that how his life has turned upside down..how his family left him to be orphan and how his Baba adopted him and treated him as his own son..but then..how he left him 8 yrs back without his trace..he is thinkin how from the past 8 yrs he has made a force around him not allowing anyone to enter..just then Dr. Mallika enters..Dr. Mallika has been his best frnd from the past 12 yrs..and he has cherished her frndship..

Mallika - ' Ashutosh..chay ? '

Ashu - ' Yeah Mallika..i need one.. '

Mallika - ' Let me call the canteen.. '

Ashu - ' No..lets go to the near by hotel..i need to fresh my mind.. '

They leave to have tea..
At the Verma..Nidhi's best frnd Anji comes to greet her..


Anji - ' Hey Nidhi..kaisi hai? Bahut miss kiya yar.. '

Nidhi - ' Ha..maine bhi tujhe bahut miss kiya..4 saal ho gaye hai humhe mile..bus..tu ek baar Mumbai aayi thi..tab mili thi.. '

Anji - ' Ha yaar..woh Mumbai waala trip..waise abhi tak mummy - papa ko pata nahi hai ki main fashion designing kar rahi hun.. '

Nidhi - ' Chal acha hai..aur..koi mila ke nahi.. '

Anji - ' Tu janti hai na..main pyar vyar main vishwaas nahi karti.. '

Nidhi - ' Lekin kyun.. '

Anji - ' Bas aise hi.. '

Nidhi - ' Chal tik hai..bahar chale..chay piyenge.. '

The next night Ashu is at his frnd Armaan's fashion house..Armaan has just arranged a party for his new fashion house in Lucknow..Anji informs Nidhi abt the party and asks her to accompany her..Nidhi first denies but due to Anji's force she accompanies her..they reach the fashion house..Anji just wanders havin a look at the new fashion clothes..Nidhi just has a seat as she is not much interested..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello. .congrats on ur FF .. 👏

And wow.. Ashu as Col. Vermas friend.. this makes it really COMPLICATED..!!

Good first update.. waiting for the other epis..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@tanu..thanks dea..well..i thought ill make it bit diff..so Ashu and Verma as frnds..and..2nd part contains Ashni first official meet..still editin..so will take a bit of time..
Regards..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: hellox

@tanu..thanks dea..well..i thought ill make it bit diff..so Ashu and Verma as frnds..and..2nd part contains Ashni first official meet..still editin..so will take a bit of time..
Regards..


Cool .. n do PM the regular FF readers.. m sure all will njoy it! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@tanu..sure..thanks for the suggestion..will do it..
Regards..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey, Hellox,
writing a FF is a great effort dear.. Congrats that you ahve started on this herculean task.
sure your FF wil be punctuated with your poetry.


am a bit slow in understanding hindi.. will write a detailed review later.
Edited by mudraswathi - 13 years ago
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Part 2 - Ashni 1st Official Meet


We see Nidhi sittin lonely in the fashion party..On the other hand Ashu leaves a busy Armaan and takes his seat..Nidhi looks at him as she finds him a bit different..she doesnt knw but she cant stop herself lookin at him..just then Anji comes and tells her that they gotta leave as her mom has called..Nidhi leaves but still the image of Ashu remains..

The next day Nidhi leaves for KGH..on her way there is a kid who is bleeding on the road..a person in a bike broke the signal and hit and run..as Nidhi rushes to the kid she finds the same man in the fashion party helping her..he takes the kid to the nearby hospital not wasting any time..Ashu thanks Nidhi how she rushed to help the kid..


Ashu - ' Thank u..it was good that u rushed to help him..there are rarely people at help in these cases.. '

Nidhi - ' Its ok..yeh toh mera farz hai.. '

Ashu - ' K..anyways im Dr. A... '
He is interupted by Mallika's emergency cal and leaves..
Nidhi leaves hearin the child is fine..he just had a small cut..

Nidhi reaches KGH asks for Dr. Ashutosh..but she is informed that he is in OT for an emergency..she waits for him in his cabin..

After an hour or so Ashu comes to his cabin with mask on his face..he recognises her but she doesnt..


Ashu - ' Tum..yahan..bacha tik toh hai na.. '

Nidhi - ' Ji..kya..kaunsa bacha.. '

Ashu removes the mask and then she recognises him..


Nidhi - ' Oh..aap..ha..bacha tik hai.. '

Ashu - ' Toh tum yahan kaise? '

Nidhi - ' Ji main Col Verma ki beti hun..yahan internship karne aayi hun.. '

Ashu - ' Oh..ur Verma's daughter..mujhe laga tum parso aane wali ho.. '

Nidhi - ' Ha..lekin socha aaj ek baar hospital ho aaun.. '

Ashu - ' Tik hai..ek kaam karo..tum sabse ek baar mulakat karlo..fir mujhe seminar room main milo.. '

Nidhi - ' Tik hai.. '

Nidhi meets the remaining staff and then comes to the seminar room..here the remaining interns and Nidhi learn a bit of theory before the seminar is dismissed..

Nidhi is walkin out of the hospital wen she hears someone calling her..


Ashu - ' Nidhi..baito..main tumhe chod deta hun.. '

Nidhi - ' Nahi sir..aap kyun taklif kar rahe hain..main chali jaungi.. '

Ashu - ' Common Nidhi..itna toh main kar hi sakta hun..koi pareshani nahi hai.. '

She gets in and they leave..Ashu drops her home and leaves as he has some work to finish at home..

Nidhi has her dinner and is in her room lost..she is still thinkin the face of Dr. Ashu..she couldnt remove the image of him wen she saw him at the party..she definitely knew that he was different..

The next day she leaves to the hospital and is stunned..there she comes to knw from Priyanka ( fellow intern ) that Dr. Ashutosh is indeed Dr. Hardstone..Nidhi thinks that why is it everyone calls him Dr. Hardstone..just then she hears..


Ashu - ' Dr. Nidhi..in my cabin right now.. '
Edited by hellox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Hellox,

First of all, thanks for the PM.

Good to see your FF dear and the title is cool and hoping it doesn't make our love birds to face much troubles.

Ashu and Baba are friends😲...woww...this is making it quite more interesting.

So the first meet is going to be fashion show...waiting for it😍.

Hope this FF gives you a smooth ride ahead in writing, best luck.

Well, should say, its a good start and am looking forward for your next update, and mind it, should be longer updates 😆, and do PM me please.
Edited by anu13 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey, posted Part 2 too...wowww...gonna read now...thnx for the update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@anu13..thanks..and yup..ill try to make it as long as possible..
Regards..

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