FF - The Story Of 2 Love Birds..[ Part 13 upd 15th May - Page 36 ] - Page 26

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Hellox,

How are you dear...take rest and get well soon.

Its just a superb update...of course why not more AshNi moments...more happy😉.

Wowww...Ashu toh gaya kaam se.

Ashu has finished doing the bandage but he is still rolling his hands
Just imagining this scene and going all gaagaaa☺️😍...hayeee.

Ashu-Mallu convo was hilarious.

Thanks for the lovely update dear...and waiting to see more of this sort😉.

Take care dear...hope and pray u recover completely real soon.
Edited by anu13 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey hellox hope ur health is better now:-)
Thanks for d pm n sorry for very late commenting:-(
Loved ur ff really nice n very well written 👏
I was actually imagine about mb n kk while reading d story:-)
Eagerly waiting for next part:-)
N get well soon :-):-):-)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shaz2009

I've just finished reading part 10 and 11 and I must say I really enjoyed it thoroughly...things between Ashni seem to be taking off...they are getting closer and are developing feelings for one another...Ashu is always captivated by her beauty and child like innocense...no matter how hard he will try fight those feelings his love for Nidhi will always take over and this process has already started.
Great job Hellox...looking forward to the next part...but before that I will have to try and catch up on the other chapters...which I have not read yet...wish u a speedy recovery...pray that you will be fit and well soon...🤗.


Thanks a lot for the comment..yup..things are gettin close for Ashni and Ashu's feeling of love will always win for Nidhi..thanks a lot..
Regards..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: busybee..

Hey hellox hope ur health is better now:-)
Thanks for d pm n sorry for very late commenting:-(
Loved ur ff really nice n very well written 👏
I was actually imagine about mb n kk while reading d story:-)
Eagerly waiting for next part:-)
N get well soon :-):-):-)


Thanks and glad that u have loved my FF writing..
Regards..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anu13

Hi Hellox,


How are you dear...take rest and get well soon.

Its just a superb update...of course why not more AshNi moments...more happy😉.

Wowww...Ashu toh gaya kaam se.

<font color="#ff0000">Ashu has finished doing the bandage but he is still rolling his hands</font>
Just imagining this scene and going all gaagaaa☺️😍...hayeee.

Ashu-Mallu convo was hilarious.

Thanks for the lovely update dear...and waiting to see more of this sort😉.

Take care dear...hope and pray u recover completely real soon.


Thanks dea..and yup..Ashu has started to slip in the world of luv..will try to come up wit more romantic Ashni moments..
Regards..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: perfectsoul

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Hellox,



Hope you are feeling better…get well soon.




Lovely update….your FF has that sweet, fresh and pure aura around it…just like DK.




Now we know how Baba and Ashutosh became friends. Ashu asked for a ladoo for such a big surgery. He is really vey sweet. Ashu is again n again forgetting to return Nidhi's earings….or is it that his sub-conscious mind doesn't want him to return it. The cabin scene was so cute. Ashu is slowly losing himself….he is a gone case…totally!!! And Mallu coming and watching the scene, their convo…… was so hilarious.




I think again today he will forget to return the earings….




Thanks for the pm. Take care.


Thanks a lot dea..i actually wanted a sweet and normal romantic love story so kept the DK essence intact..and regardin the earings..well..i cant afford to let the suspense out as to wat Ashu will do wit the earings..anyways..thanks a lot..
Regards..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Well hello all..i think im quite a late wit my next update..well..wat can i say..wen one prob subsides somethin else comes up..actually having a pretty bad time..anyways..next Part comin ryt away..
Regards..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 12




Ashu is in thoughts after
Mallika leaves..he tries to understnad
what Mallika meant, but fails to do so..
He goes to his wash room to clean his
hand..he looks at himself in the mirror
and remembers Nidhi's words reminding
him that he should keep smiling as he
looks good smiling..he smilingly taps his
head and says ' Pagal ladki kahin ki.. '
Meanwhile Nidhi comes to her seat..she
too goes to wash room to freshen up..she
looks at herself in the mirror..she
remembers Ashu's word reminding her
how childish she was..she blushes, taps
her head and says ' Sir bhi na.. '
And then plays in the BG the Saiyan
song..

Aaa..aa..aa..
Pyase hain naina,
Tarse sari raina,
Jinme tu hai rehta,
Haal kyun tu jane na,
Saiyan pehchane na,
Haal man ka tu kyun jane na,
Saiyan naino ki basha samjhe na,
Naino ki basha samjhe na..
Kuch toh hai zaroor,
Dil mera kitna majboor,
Kuch toh hai zaroor,
Dil mera kitna majboor,
Jaan ke bhi tu jane na..
Saiyan,
Pyase hain naina,
Tarse sari raina,
Jinme tu hai rehta,
Haal kyun tu jane na,
Saiyan pehchane na,
Haal man ka tu kyun jane na,
Saiyan naino ki basha samjhe na,
Naino ki basha samjhe na..

On the other hand, Anji is
going by the hospital when Ranga notices
her and stops her..

Ranga -
' Anji ji..Anji ji.. '
Anji stops..

Anji - '
Kya hai Adminitrator saheb.. '

Ranga -
' Administrator mat kahiye
na..Ranganath bhulayiye na..woh khafi
rahega.. '

Anji - '
Aapko koi kaam nahi hai kya.. '

Ranga -
' Hai na.. '
Anji - '
Toh jaiye..apna kaam kijiye na.. '

Ranga -
' Wohi toh kar rahan hun..
'

Anji - '
Aap firse shuru ho gaye.. '

Ranga -
' Kya karu..aapko dekhte hi
main sab kuch bhul jaata hun..aapki
sundarta ko dekh kar ek gaana yaad aa
gaya..pesh karun.. '

Anji - '
Agar main na bhi kahun toh bhi aap
sunayenge..toh sunayiye.. '

Ranga -
' Chandan sa badan,
chanchal chitwan,
dheere se tera yeh musakaana,
mujhe dosh na dena jagwalon,
ho jaun agar main deewana.. '

Anji - '
Ho gaya..kitno ko yeh suna chuke hai.. '[/
COLOR]
Ranga -
[COLOR=BLUE]' Well..yeh waala toh pehli
baar suna rahan hun.. '

Anji - '
Acha..aap hamesha hi aise hi hai kya.. '[/
COLOR]
Ranga -
[COLOR=BLUE]' Kya karun..koi sudarne
wali nahi mili..lekin ab sudar jaunga.. '[/
COLOR]
Anji - [COLOR=BLUE]'
Woh kyun.. '

Ranga -
' Aap jo aa gayi hai.. '[/
COLOR]
Anji - [COLOR=BLUE]'
Kya!! '

Ranga -
' Kuch nahi..kuch nahi..aap
jayiye..mujhe kuch kaam yaad aa gaya.. '
Ranga leaves and so does Anji..
Meanwhile its afternoon, Ashu is about
to have his lunch when he remembers
Nidhi..he decides to go to her..

Ashu -
' Nidhi.. '

Nidhi -
' Yes sir.. '

Ashu -
' Lunch ho gaya.. '

Nidhi -
' Nahi sir..bas canteen hi ja rahi thi.. '[/
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Ashu - [COLOR=BLUE]
' Nahi..aaj tumhara lunch canteen main
nahi..lekin mere cabin main hoga.. '[/
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Nidhi - [COLOR=BLUE]
' Lekin sir.. '

Ashu -
' Lekin vekin kuch nahi..chalo.. '
Ashu and Nidhi come to Ashu's
cabin..Ashu and Nidhi start having their
lunch..Nidhi finishes her lunch as she
doesnt eat much and walks to the wash
room when Ashu stops her..

Ashu -
' Nidhi..kya hua..itni jaldi kyun uth gayi..
'

Nidhi -
' Sir..mera lunch ho gaya.. '

Ashu -
' Kya..lunch ho gaya.. '
He looks onto Nidhi's plate and finds that
she has just one roti..

Ashu -
' Nidhi..tumne sirf ek roti khayi hai aur
tum bol rahi ho ke tumne lunch kar liya..
'

Nidhi -
' Ha sir..main itna hi khaati hun..aur roti
mujhe utni achi nahi lagti.. '

Ashu -
' Tum khaati hogi..lekin abhi
nahi..tumhari age main toh daba ke
khaana chahiye..aur tum sirf itna
hi..common..sit and have ur lunch.. '[/
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Nidhi - [COLOR=BLUE]
' Lekin sir.. '

Ashu ( in a firm voice )[/
B] - ' Nidhi..tumhare haath
main lagi hai..tumhe pain killers leni
hai..toh pain killers ko kaam karne ke liye
pet main kuch hona toh chahiye na..aao
baito..khaana kao.. '
Ashu holds Nidhi's hand and makes her sit
on the sofa..he gives her the plate and
accidently places the plate on her injured
hand..seeing this he sits beside her and
catches the plate in his hand rather than
keeping it on the table and tells her to
have her lunch..Nidhi starts having her
lunch again but in a off mood..she
finishes her lunch..Ashu then asks her to
have a seat..
( K frnds..actually i missed a injection
scene in my previous update so will be
accomadating it now coz Nidhi has cut
her hand and medically she needs a
injection.. )
Ashu then brings a injection..

[B]Nidhi
-
' Sir..injection kyun.. '

Ashu -
' Nidhi..tumhare haath main cut hain
isliye ek injection dena padega..kal nahi
de sakta tha..isliye aaj dena padega.. '[/
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Nidhi - [COLOR=BLUE]
' Sir..mera haath tik hai..main pain killers
le lungi..injection ki zarurat nahi padegi
sir.. '

Ashu -
' Nidhi..main jyada janta hun ki tumhe
kiski zarurat hai aur kiski nahi..samjhi..
'

Nidhi -
' Sir.. '
Ashu just turns to her and she keeps
mum seeing him..she realises that no
words will stop Ashu from giving the
injection..so she closes her eyes and sits
on the chair..
Ashu comes and applies spirit on her
hand..Nidhi leaves a hish and shivers..
Ashu then takes the injection and takes
it near her hand but doesnt inject it and
waits..
Nidhi is shivering and has her eyes
closed..
Ashu is seeing Nidhi's face and smiling..[/
COLOR]
Nidhi - [COLOR=BLUE]
' Sir..ho gaya? '
Ashu doesnt reply..

Nidhi -
' Sir..kya hua.. '
Ashu still doesnt reply and she opens her
eyes to see Ashu smiling at her..

Nidhi -
' Sir..aap aise kyun has rahe hai.. '[/
COLOR]
Ashu - [COLOR=BLUE]
' Nidhi..maine abhi injection lagaya bhi
nahi hai aur tumhara chehra toh
dekho..agar injection lagaunga toh kya
halat hogi.. '

Nidhi -
' Sir..yeh mazak chodiye aur jaldi se
injection deke katam kijiye na.. '
Ashu goes to his desk and gets a
Temptation Choclate and keeps it on
Nidhi's other hand and Nidhi smiles seeing
this and Ashu injects the injection..
Nidhi, who is happy with the choclate
doesnt realise the pain or watsoever
with the injection..

Nidhi -
' Sir..yeh..mere liye.. '

Ashu -
' Ha..yeh tumhare liye hai..mujhe pata
tha ki tum injection se darogi..isliye aaj
aate waqt maine pehle hi karid li thi.. '[/
COLOR]
Nidhi - [COLOR=BLUE]
' Thank u so much sir.. '

Ashu -
' Maine kahan tha na ki main janta hun
tumhe kiski zarurat hai aur kiski
nahi..aur dekho..tumhe yeh bhi pata nahi
chala ki maine injection laga diya hai.. '[/
COLOR]
Nidhi - [COLOR=BLUE]
' Thank u sir..main jau.. '

Ashu -
' Ya..lekin apni pain killers le lena.. '
Nidhi takes a leave form Ashu's cabin..[/
COLOR]
[COLOR=RED]( K frnds..wanted to explain
one thing here..many of u are thinking
that why is Ashu so caring towards Nidhi
or why is Nidhi behaving differently with
Ashu..see..wat i want to prove here is
that when Ashu is with Nidhi or Nidhi
with Ashu, at that point they arent Ashu
or Nidhi but are Ashni..they are way
different and behave totally different
from their normal behaviour wen they
are with each other..when Ashu is wit
Nidhi he has no idea how caring he
gets..and wen Nidhi is wit Ashu she has
no idea how she behaves wit him..its
their sub concisious..this behaviour
which turns into love is wat ill show in
future parts.. )

Meanwhile mallu comes to
Ashu..

Mallu -
' Ashu..kal kya hai yaad hai na.. '

Ashu -
' Ha Mallika..kal ke baare main kaise bhul
sakta hun..sab taiyar hai.. '

Mallu -
' Ha..sab taiyar hai.. '
Ashu is very happy about this..
Edited by hellox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow hellox it was such a sweet part:-):-)
Loved d chocolate n injection part:-)

Thanks for d pm:-)
Get well soon:-):-)
Will wait for next part 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
sweet update, wish it was longer. Love the gradual progressing of their story and looking forward to the next one. Thanks

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