FF - The Story Of 2 Love Birds..[ Part 13 upd 15th May - Page 36 ] - Page 29

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hy hellox :-)
Hope u r feeling good now:-)
Get well soon:-):-)
N come to d story, it's such a lively part...
I actually imagine about MB n KK ...
Very well written 👏
Take care:-):-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
wao wao wao...superb excellent ashni interaction at the camp...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: busybee..

Hy hellox :-)
Hope u r feeling good now:-)
Get well soon:-):-)
N come to d story, it's such a lively part...
I actually imagine about MB n KK ...
Very well written 👏
Take care:-):-)




hey busy bee do you also feel same as i feel while reading ff i also imagine ashu 1 or 2 jaise ff ki story hoti use hisaab se mb ya sk who will suite in ff mujhe feel hota hai


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Edited by karajekar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Hellox...
Thanks for d beautiful update..Kids teased Ashu..oh how sweet...but last part was awesome Nidhi falls on Ashu n both keep rolling...wow
Thanks once again...take care..get well soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
The kid part was so sweet.Good one.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww Hellox that was so sweet.
Loved Ashni interaction at the camp.
As for the song wish u had put the whole song with link.
I simply love this song...Its one of my all time favourites of Meenaji...
As for Mallu she is digging her own grave by taking Nidhi to the camp...When she will realise that they are coming close she will curse herself for this day...
Thanx so much for the pm...and waiting for u to continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fabulous update hellox,
Nidhi has also realised feelings for Ashu
good going.

Hope that you will be discharged from the hospital soon,and get well soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update Hellox!...loved Ashni interaction at the camp and absolutely loved the roll!...very filmy!...😍...so they both developing feelings for one another,can't wait for when they actually confess their love...just hoping Mallu doesn't become too much of an obstacle.
Looking froward to the next update and hope you get well soon!🤗.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Hellox…thanks a lot for the pms. I am sorry to be late… caught up with both the parts-12th and 13th now. How are you now? And wait…are you still in hospital? I wish you a speedy recovery.

Cute updates both 12th and 13th part. The title song –Saiyyan was so apt in that situation. I could visualize the scenes in front of me. The lunch and the injection scenes were cute. Yes hellox, as you pointed out Ashu and Nidhi are so free with each other…..they are not even realizing it. Love does that to people.

Ashu and Kaka's moment touched me. And what followed had a glimpse of divine intervention…the earrings making sound and the wind bringing it near Ashu. Very well written.

Nidhi getting possessive about the chocolate was so hilarious. As a true friend Anji has noticed the change in Nidhi. Liked the camp scenes a lot………. Nidhi making Ashu sit in the chair and advising him to control his anger….the kids teasing them…Nidhi running behind them……. Ashu smiling flashing those dimples and the lovely moments thereafter. 😍 Loved every moment.

And see I was right…the earrings are still with our chuparustam Ashu. He has lost it completely...he will not return it back to Nidhi. 😆 😳

Get well soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I just read your FF is is wonderful. Please update soon.

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