FF Complete: Closing the Loop (Part 18-21 - Pg 64)

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AMBIKA2561979

@AMBIKA2561979

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Ya dear i do agree with wat ASHU says, this country is degree crazy...the No.OF degrees is directly proportional to the amount of respect you get ...While reading your FF's even once i wont feel "oh this sentence is boring this shd have been written" ...u r such a brilliant writer...u know how to keep ur readers waiting ...on the tip of their toes... for the next updates... 😉😉

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Shari30

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

Thanks for the update...

"I remember everything about you Nidhi."
Haila shari goes dreamy imagining MB uttering these words... in a way these words sum up the part. And i feel that Ashu talking to nandini previously may help him open up to nids. Love the way he looks out for her... as much as he tries to probe her I feel we will see her probing him soon.
Nandini Maa is gone be an interesting 1 how this will develop will be a good watch

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Neelima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

"I remember everything about you Nidhi."

Says everything I need to know about what Ashutosh feels for Nidhi. I can even guess why he was so tough on her when she was a student.😍😍😍😍😍

Excellent update Mish.😊

I really love Nidhi's mother. She is so good and affable. I am sure she will encourage Nidhi towards Ashutosh.

Can't wait for the next part. Thanks for sharing.

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niniborn2rule

@niniborn2rule

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Posted: 13 years ago

#204

Lovely update mish...so ashutosh remembers everything about nidhi...interesting..👏

you can come into my office anytime you want. You have the right and you don't need to be sorry. If I'm busy, I will tell you."...Nidhi has the HAQ???...good good...

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Sarika

@Blushsarika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#205

As always a very good update,
like apoorvafan said ,this is a very fresh story from DK. We readers are not able to guess what would happen now. Which increases our curiousity even more . Liking this fresh look a lot.

"I always remember everything about you Nidhi" - This one sentence speaks a lot about Ashu's feelings for Nidhi . She is also feeling something for him as she is sharing relationship of her friend with him.but she is unaware of it.
Would love read how there bonding grows it would be interesting
nandini was about to tell something to Nidhi but stopped which increased our curiousity.
Good that ranga is taking help of anjie.
Looking forward for your next update .
Thanks for such fast update.

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vanillaflowers

@vanillaflowers

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Posted: 13 years ago

#206

Mish , really great going. Rock on

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DikshaBaluja

@DikshaBaluja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Hey Mish...Thanks for the daily updates...I really like it that you update your FF daily...and yeah..sorry for replying late...was a bit tied up in the last few days...Firstly, talking about Ranganath's problems and the issues he's dealing with..you really brought his fears and insecurities in a very nice way...showed all the symptoms that one suffers...his trying to hide his problems from Anji was very well descripted and was quite natural...one would definitely not want to reveal his darker side in front of anybody...but a big thanks to Ashu's understanding of Ranganath and Anji's love and support that Ranganath is undergoing a therapy now and hopefully Ranganath will not try to go away from Anji...Ranganath and Anji's love story was also very nicely written...slow, sweet, nice, subtle...Ranganath seems to be a quite good speaker...liked the way he speaks up in the discussion sessions...hope ranganath comes over his fears and accepts Anji's love and moves on with her..Thanks for bringing out a sensitive issue like Child Abuse..Its really very important that parents listen to their children and take necessary steps and also thanks for pointing out that April is celebrated as Child Sexual Abuse Prevention Action Month...Happy Earth Hour Day...and now coming to the sweet Ashni chapter..must say that this chapter is really very very nice..normally, I read a chapter twice or thrice..but this one I have read atleast a 10 times...simply awesome...I'm really enjoying the Ashni conversations...Love the sweet and outgoing Nidhi..who barged into Ashu's office just like he was a very dear friend to her whom she needed to listen her out...and then it was so sweet of Ashu to react in a calm and composed way...and assuring her that she can be there in her office any time she wishes too...This was the point of attraction in the whole part ""I remember everything about you Nidhi."..Does it mean that he had been rude to Nidhi in college life just.because she could work more and more hard...I just can't understand what was that grudge that he had for Nidhi in her college life..and this one is just an assumption...loved their conversation over the Tea a lot...I'm also enjoying the technicality in your FF..like exams..filling up forms etc...Nandini really likes Ashu a lot..moreover,she has also asked Ashu to move on in life and settle with someone...so, in future I hope that she'll gladly accept Ashu-Nidhi relation...sorry for the long review.but what to do..I'm always a bit late...keep up the good work...awesome update :)

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Pooja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#208

Hey Sharmishtha...
Part 7 was intresting...Ranga faced so much in his past n now he dnt want spoil Anji's life...hope everything will be fine with them...
Part 8...Beautiful..I think Ashu is in love with nidhi...Because he helps her in her problems,he told her that she is free to come in his cabin any time,he remembered everything about nidhi etc.
Intresting story...
Thank you

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sharmishtha02

@sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: vasanthi16
I remember everything about u Nidhi

A loaded statement indeed by Ashu...seems he was attracted to her or even in love when she was a student.

Am loving the interactions between them...she is finding out little facets about him...
Am liking the slow build up in this relation. She trusts him now and has started going to him for help, which he is ever ready to do so.

Nandini wants to say something to Nidhi but stops...hope nothing wrong there...

Good Ranga is getting help.

Waiting for the next update...😍

Thanks Vasanthi. 😊

Yes, there are little hints scattered here and there in this part about where everyone stands. 😊

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RoDee

@RoDee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#210

Part 7- focused on Anji-ranga.. You have put forward a very sensitive topic. really nice.. Its good Ranga is getting some help. Anj's behaviour is also very rational. 👏

Part 8 well, I am now quiet sure, Ashu got attracted towards Nidhi when she was student. I am liking their conversations.Nidhi's dependence on Ashu. Curious to see how do you take the story further, how will Nidhi realize her love..😉

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