FF Complete: Closing the Loop (Part 18-21 - Pg 64) - Page 23

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Posted: 13 years ago
@Neelima - Thanks for pointing out the name problem. Corrected it. 😛 Find-replace does fail you at times 😆

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To those who have already read it. There is no "Rupa". It is supposed to be Nidhi. Now it is corrected. 😃
Edited by sharmishtha02 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ashutosh also lose his cool at that, "Stop this 'child' business, will you? No - you are not a child and I had never seen you as one. As far as I am concerned, you are a grown up woman, who is intelligent enough; a woman who is... mature for her age and charming and attractive. What did you say? I won't understand. Nidhi, you are the one who doesn't understand. You do not understand why I do whatever I do. Yes - I worry about you, I care for you. But the reason is that I am in love with you, since the first time..." Ashutosh stopped. He realized that he had spoken more than he ever intended to. The regret showed up on his face and Nidhi looked at him wide-eyed. Was all of this a dream?

I LIKE this conversation very much keep continue nd update next part early plzzz im waitin eagerly to read next pov👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8t work mish...so ashni are in love!!!!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay I am kind back to earth...

Mish Meri jaan... as i have said many a time you are simply like old wine keeps getting better and better... I loved sacrifice but this one is shaping as wonderfully if not way better than sacrifice

ohhh you have to love the interaction ashu and nandini ma... love the way that ashu is gone become the support system of the two verma woman. Looking to see how you are gone develop the cancer track... with Rang and this one you have wonderful avenues to explore and wonderful parts for us to read.

the hospital part bears a semblant of similarity with sacrifice but haaaila love the way ashu firmly yet respectfully gets nandini ma to go and rest.

hmmm the maelstrom of feelings beautifully depicted... present past doubts reality all blended together

Then the second dhamaka...the frontal face a face... shari was lost daydreaming MB as that ashu😍😍

That ashu sure has guts to come upfront with her lie... and then the dam breaks at both ends and haaaila so wonderfully done showing how each one of them is a strong character... but you know me have a personal pref for ashu... MB would have been stupendous here...
I won't understand. Nidhi, you are the one who doesn't understand. You do not understand why I do whatever I do. Yes - I worry about you, I care for you. But the reason is that I am in love with you, since the first time..."

dreamy words that yummy MB would have done justice to that. Thats spoken like then man who finally confronts his feelings .,, agree its under tension but he had to give it a name and nids had to hear it..


yeah dil mange much much much much much more

bear hug my mish

and shari faints back to MB ASHU land😍
Edited by oaz30 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you for message... Otherwise I would have read it tomorrow only...
Very good part... Dhamaka...
Nidhi's mom's health and also Ashu's confession ... ya.. also looks like Nidhi also has got some clues about her feelings...
The way 8th part has gone, I thought it will take atleast 2 more parts before love comes up. But you have got it quickly. Good;
Like most of the people predicted, here Ashu is more vocal and also taking steps
Edited by ApoorvaFan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome awesome awesome , please continue the confession and post confession cute scenes.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Quite interesting.So Ashu was i Love from the first day.But how did he take his feeling?I mean he just liked Nidhi and he had no intention to tell it then or he could not tell it? the flow is very fine,update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mish
That's going at a wonderful and really engrossing pace. Next update as soon as possible. Till then it's ashu and nidhi waiting for answers from each other. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
last para very involving . now it is getting really interesting. waiting desperately for next update😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ohhh Mish meri jaan...you are totally fantastic dear...just superb and awesome...What a wonderful update it was...truly weekend dhamaka...big big hugs to you..my dear mish..,and a hearty thanks for posting such a nice update...It was so caring of Mrs.Verma to ask ashu to be with her daughter through her thick and thin and to support her...what a nice mom she is..didnt even tell her daughter what she is going through just to save Nidhi from pain and loads of tension...It was nice to know that Nandini knows how much Ashu cares for Nidhi..and hence she revealed everything to Ashu..she must be seeing them as a couple together..I feel...was really nice of her to call Ashu on dinner..and explain everything to him...really love this caring and concerning characteristic of Ashu..loved the way he assured Nandini.." Yes I'd be always there for Nidhi "...such a lovely personality he is...really liked the yearning Nidhi was feeling for ashu..how she felt like hugging ashu and ended up clutching his hands...and in turn he wiped her tears and patted her hand and forehead...it was so so sweet...liked the way Ashu behaved quite as a son-in-law asking Mrs.Verma to go home and take rest..and meanwhile he'd be there to take care of Nidhi...

This portion was the best in this update..very attractive..


Ashutosh also lose his cool at that, "Stop this 'child' business, will you? No - you are not a child and I had never seen you as one. As far as I am concerned, you are a grown up woman, who is intelligent enough; a woman who is... mature for her age and charming and attractive. What did you say? I won't understand. Nidhi, you are the one who doesn't understand. You do not understand why I do whatever I do. Yes - I worry about you, I care for you. But the reason is that I am in love with you, since the first time......first time he saw her in his class in her college days...first time he saw her in the office...first time...first time...keep wondering..!! Ashutosh stopped. He realized that he had spoken more than he ever intended to. The regret showed up on his face and Nidhi looked at him wide-eyed. Was all of this a dream?

"What did you say?" she had to reconfirm that.

Ashutosh was completely at loss on how to deal with the situation. "I'm sorry. Nidhi. Please don't get me wrong. It's all a... Oh God! How do I explain it? Please forget I said anything. I promise I won't repeat that ever again... I'm sorry. I'm so sorry..."

Just then someone knocked at his office door. He tried to appear calm as he said, "Come in." It was some student who had come in. Ashutosh looked at Nidhi helplessly. She also looked back at him for a few moments and then left his room.

This does happen quite a few times...in anger you spill out the things which are deep there in your heart..and which you normally dont speak in front of another person...This is what happened with Ashu..and I'm glad he got angry..and vent out his feelings for Nidhi..Lets see what Nidhi thinks about her feelings and Ashu' confession of his love for her and how they move on...eagerly waiting for the next update...post soon..keep up the good job..awesome update :)





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