FF Completed: Hurdles and Hesitation (Index: Pg 1) - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey thnx for the PM, once again very nice update..waiting for next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi, Sharmishtha nice update. Everything is well written. I have 2 words for u "sweet and simple." I am having a blast in IF with all the FFs and am eagerly waiting for ur next update...and btw thnx for ur PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: oaz30

She had been elated and excited since the day Ashutosh had come clean to her about his feelings. If their happiness lied in each other, she wasn't going to let him run away from it. Not without trying at least. She would do everything to convince him that she was worthy of him and he of her - if he had any doubts either way.

This is indeed how nids should have been, as zoya in DK was a fighter, she may be young but she is determined. she is confident of her love for him, to her it is not age but the feelings that matters, some may call it immaturity ya infatuation I call it love more so faith in her feelings

Ye ek definite possibility thi ki main nahin aata."
The voice of reason, you have to love the guy, he fights tooth and nail for the logic aspect yet he succumbs

"Problems imaginary nahin hain Nidhi. Ye rishta aaj na kal tumhare gale ki faans ban jayega."

"We can cross the bridge when it comes. Lekin aap to ek mauka dene ko bhi taiyaar nahin hain? Ye to sahi nahin hai Dr. Ashutosh."
to me these lines embody ASH NI, the optimism of youth versus the voice of experience yet with one common link that of feelings, emotions.

Ashutosh opened his eyes after the song got over and saw Nidhi. She looked stunning in her blue lehanga and Ashutosh was indeed quite stunned.

"Tum... Tum kab aayi?" he stammered.
the song had brought ashu in his world, u can feel how the sudden entry has startled him, she was there in his domain, one would almost hear him thinking if she was real or not


"Nidhi," his voice was suddenly heavy and emotional, "Tum itni khushmizaaz ho, sabko hansati rahti ho, intelligent aur capable ho, itni..." he hesitated for a moment, but spoke out making Nidhi blush red, "itni khoobsoorat ho. Tumse to kissi ko bhi pyaar ho jayega. Tum jise chaho use pa sakti ho. Why did you fall for me? You will be happy with someone young, energetic and positive like you and you will find many such men. I don't know..."

you have got to love ashu, you can feel that it is costing him, to him it is still impossible that Nids could have fallen for him, she could have the world yet she chose him. To him she is someone to be adored from afar, yet he cannot understand y the more he sends her away the more she comes back

Defenceless.
one single word yet sooo powerful the complete embodiment of Ashu and ahmer, thats how both are... defenseless towards what happened to them, both nids and zoya have been hope to both men yet one way or the other they fought it because they did not deem themselves worthy of it. In the end they both had and will have in the case of Ashu to accept their feelings

Ashutosh was relaxing on a rocking chair. His eyes were closed and a song was playing in the background.
for this one I will let my MB craze come out haaaila I could so visualise him in that😍

As I told you b4 if Dk was romance this one promises to be a hell of a ride and am loving every min of it.😉 You are the best❤️


I love you Sharifa. I really do 😃

You have observed so many important points in the story. It is really heartwarming when the readers identify with the same emotions and thought that you had while writing the story. Thanks so much!! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tinu.jindal

ohhh just awesum part mish
asbu wearing the tie in home...nice
nids gifting passes for shw
there convo in restro.is nice...
awww ashu taking nids to the wedding...superb nice


Thanks Tinu 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mimoha

Ditto as Oaz plus I loved this one.


"Main jawaab doongi. Lekin main chahti hoon ki aap is rishte ko sirf mere liye nahin, apne liye bhi accept karein. To main us din ka intezaar karoongi."

"Aur agar woh din nahin aaya."

"Then you don't deserve the answer," she smiled and left Ashutosh speechless and defenceless again.

Looking forward to next part.


Thanks Mimoha. Isn't her spunk here lovable? 😛 I fell in love with her myself 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vasanthi16

Mish...very nice update...the story is taking shape so beautifully.


Ashu is going to take her to a marriage ...wow that shows that in his heart he has accepted that he loves her and Nidz is slowly breaking down his defences.

Am enjoying this so much...weekends r so much fun with all FFs and spoofs.

Thanks Mish...waiting for next update !!

👏👍🏼❤️


Thanks Vasanthi 😊 Yep. His defenses are breaking. For better or for worse remains to be seen. 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vidi263

Hey...you are back!!!! and how...

loving the new and improved story... Hey...can you donate some creative brains to the CVs of KTLK...and some common sense and maturity to the actors????😉

Vidi




Thanks Vidi 😊 Creatives ka to kya kahun 😆 But agree with Sharifa on the actors. The acting is good and so is the direction. It is the story and screenplay that has gone to dogs or rats or what not in the show. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmishtha02


Thanks Mimoha. Isn't her spunk here lovable? 😛 I fell in love with her myself 😆


Yes very much. I have read this exchange 4/5 times already. I can almost visualise N's facial expressions. Pity A. This girl is chipping away at his defenses bit by bit.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks AF 😊 Ashu here is a bit different from the show. He gives in only to Nidhi. With Mallika (I haven't covered a lot of Ashu-Mallika here, but whatever little I have), he is strong. He does interfere when Mallika goes unprofessional, even though he does so without giving up on hi dignity.
Sharmistha,,
I agree with you. This Ashu knows how to behave with Mallika. In your previous FF also you have shown that Mallika's behaviour was due to her physic nature. Good that you are not making Mallika stoop down so low like they have done in the show. Sheena was graceful in DK.
By making a doc to do the kind of things she is doing in the show, CVs are bringing disgrace to one of the noble professions...
Edited by apurvafan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kritash

yaar totallly entertaining chapter for the weekend with out much of serious drama. light hearted and well written.
the flow of each part is going well and the emotions are also well placed.
thanks for this update.😊


Thanks dear 😊

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