FF Completed: Hurdles and Hesitation (Index: Pg 1) - Page 12

Originally posted by: shali

finally caught up...

lovely FF sweets...will be reading...

just remember me an lazy replier...

Originally posted by: tinu.jindal

finally!!!!!!

got the time to read the updates

mish ch 2,3,4 are amazing

ashu ignoring nids

and nids comforting him on terrace

aww this determined nids is nice

ashu got a ray of home

awww mish

just love u

continue soon

Originally posted by: vidi263

Hey...you are back!!!! and how...

loving the new and improved story... Hey...can you donate some creative brains to the CVs of KTLK...and some common sense and maturity to the actors????😉

Vidi

Originally posted by: bhalobasa

HI Sharmishtha...this is the first time I got a chance to read you FF...and believe me after reading the Part1 , I could not stop myself from reading...Just now I completed reading all the parts...And How I wish you to be part of KTLK creative team..and How I wish all these chapters would actually be part of KTLK...The story flow, all the dialogues are just perfect...👏 👏

Please continue to write...waiting for the next part...😊.

Originally posted by: apurvafan

Shrarmistha,

Nidhi is probably overconfident here and it may come back to bite her later. 😃 Stay tuned!

Oh!!! You will be giving some shocker soon... I thougt some thing is coming up...

Coming to the part you updated just now, flow is very good. though you mentioned they are discrete scenes, the flow was there and I could feel the relation progressing. Ashu is opening up to her.

But that is his nature. I mean if you see the Ashu in the show, though he knows the intentions of Mallika, he is not able to be strong with her. He was also letting Nidhi overtake him in the before episodes... The same way the Ashu here is also giving away small mercies...

And Nidhi has continued her over board nature from previous story update, in a very elegant way... Good going Nidhi... Alas.. Our Author is planning some thing for you so be aware...

Till now I was always telling you Zoya-Ahmer are only coming in front of the eyes but because of the blue lehenga, sari and blue tye, which were there in ktlk, now I was able to visualize Nidhi and Ashu...

Originally posted by: RRANAMIKA

loved all the scenes . very wel written yaar.

i'm thinking ashu's somewht confident abt his love. otherwise he would never ask her to go for the wedding together, tht too in public...