FF Completed: Hurdles and Hesitation (Index: Pg 1)

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sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: shali
finally caught up...
lovely FF sweets...will be reading...

just remember me an lazy replier...

Thanks Shali. Enough to know that you are reading and enjoying. 🤗

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sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: tinu.jindal
finally!!!!!!

got the time to read the updates

mish ch 2,3,4 are amazing

ashu ignoring nids

and nids comforting him on terrace

aww this determined nids is nice

ashu got a ray of home

awww mish

just love u

continue soon

Look who is back!! 😊 Thanks Tinu. 🤗

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@vidi263

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Hey...you are back!!!! and how...

loving the new and improved story... Hey...can you donate some creative brains to the CVs of KTLK...and some common sense and maturity to the actors????😉

Vidi

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Shari30

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: vidi263
Hey...you are back!!!! and how...

loving the new and improved story... Hey...can you donate some creative brains to the CVs of KTLK...and some common sense and maturity to the actors????😉

Vidi

Vidi,
MB and K K are great actors but maaan these CV need brain transplant... and yep long live mish and her FF😊

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kritash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

yaar totallly entertaining chapter for the weekend with out much of serious drama. light hearted and well written.
the flow of each part is going well and the emotions are also well placed.
thanks for this update.😊

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sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: bhalobasa
HI Sharmishtha...this is the first time I got a chance to read you FF...and believe me after reading the Part1 , I could not stop myself from reading...Just now I completed reading all the parts...And How I wish you to be part of KTLK creative team..and How I wish all these chapters would actually be part of KTLK...The story flow, all the dialogues are just perfect...👏 👏

Please continue to write...waiting for the next part...😊.

Thanks a lot dear and welcome to the thread 😊 Next part would be up tonight.

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Cathy25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Loved the update. Some witty remarks passed there between Ashu n Nidhi. Made me smile 😃

Thanks for the PM.

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sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: apurvafan
Shrarmistha,

Nidhi is probably overconfident here and it may come back to bite her later. 😃 Stay tuned!

Oh!!! You will be giving some shocker soon... I thougt some thing is coming up...

Coming to the part you updated just now, flow is very good. though you mentioned they are discrete scenes, the flow was there and I could feel the relation progressing. Ashu is opening up to her.

But that is his nature. I mean if you see the Ashu in the show, though he knows the intentions of Mallika, he is not able to be strong with her. He was also letting Nidhi overtake him in the before episodes... The same way the Ashu here is also giving away small mercies...

And Nidhi has continued her over board nature from previous story update, in a very elegant way... Good going Nidhi... Alas.. Our Author is planning some thing for you so be aware...

Till now I was always telling you Zoya-Ahmer are only coming in front of the eyes but because of the blue lehenga, sari and blue tye, which were there in ktlk, now I was able to visualize Nidhi and Ashu...

Thanks AF 😊 Ashu here is a bit different from the show. He gives in only to Nidhi. With Mallika (I haven't covered a lot of Ashu-Mallika here, but whatever little I have), he is strong. He does interfere when Mallika goes unprofessional, even though he does so without giving up on hi dignity.

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DEEPIKA BANERJEE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

lovely update once again and I always love the witty rejoinders that you put in during the conversations between AshNi...😃

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sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: RRANAMIKA
loved all the scenes . very wel written yaar.

i'm thinking ashu's somewht confident abt his love. otherwise he would never ask her to go for the wedding together, tht too in public...

Thanks Pranamika. Ashu is opening up to Nidhi - yes! But there are more hurdles and hesitations to cross... 😃