Originally posted by: Harryfan011
@Cspcheziyan It is a very difficult to write a story which is handled in a mature and realistic way which is gripping and exciting without going overboard...
This is where I feel, our writers faltered... They did try to recover but unfortunately, it was not enough...
And, so far, you are successful in maintaining your balance on that narrow road... So, kudos to you on writing three exciting episodes/chapters...
I love how you are slowly building your story and giving it a strong foundation before you proceed to the more dramatic moments... This shows how much you care about this story...
Can't wait for the 4th one... Thank you once again, for this beautiful chapter...
-Suyash.